||FF|| Khamoshi || Part 3 - Page 5 (updtd 30-Apr)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi All,
I am writing down a story after a long time.. Hope you all enjoy it.. Please post your comments and reviews.. 😊😊

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Part 1

Adarsh tiptoed to kitchen to grab some water. It was already twelve thirty and he was late from office as usual. He didn't want to make noise and wake up anyone. He opened the refrigerator as slowly as possible. But then.. 'Happy Birthday!!' with those words the lights in the kitchen were on. He saw a big bouquet of red roses and his favorite choco chip cookie cake on the kitchen table!

There stood Swadeenta at the door with that cute smile playing in her lips. She looked beautiful in a red sweatshirt. 'Birthday?! Was that my birthday today?' He questioned himself! Ah.. He didnt know.. Neither he cared for birthdays or any celebrations. But what surprised him was the fact that Swadeenta just wished him Birthday! And she remembered this day. That was a shock to him. How did she even know that! He never brought up a discussion on this anytime during their conversations. Even if she knew that it was his birthday he didn't even think in his wildest dreams she would plan for roses and cake at midnight. That was so strange.

'Swadeenta.. how come..?' But before he could complete his words she came forward and gave him a hug. What was happening?' Adarsh was not getting any of these. Why is she behaving so wife type' all of a sudden? This was so not usual of Swadeenta to behave in such a manner..

'Oh hoo.. Dont be so lost you two that you forget other people around..' a sound came in breaking all his thoughts and questions. There stood his Mom smiling at them. "Mom.. You are here? When did you come?" He quickly turned to his Mom and walked to her, not forgetting to give a Thank you smile' to Swadeenta!!

~With Love.. Sandy~

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Part 2 - Page 3 - Link here
Part 3 - Page 5 - Link Here
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pomegranate thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I like it so far and yayy, swadarsh is already married.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow I like it!
Swadarsh r married that was surprise here hope we get some surprises in coming updates too
Plz do cont soon as possible...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice.i think its adharsh dream. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So far it's nice good job šŸ‘šŸ‘'pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is realy nice. Good to know Swadarsh are married. Eager to know the story. Update soon please and longer updates if possible 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the start
Can't wait to read more
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Originally posted by: pomegranate

I like it so far and yayy, swadarsh is already married.


Thank you! Happy that you liked it! ~Sandy


Originally posted by: shilpa2323

Wow I like it! Swadarsh r married that was surprise here hope we get some surprises in coming updates tooPlz do cont soon as possible...!


Thanks Shilpa..! Yes.. There would be any surprises coming forward! ~Sandy



Thank You!~Sandy


Originally posted by: JDTKP

nice.i think its adharsh dream. Update soon


Les see what comes up! ~Sandy


Originally posted by: angel6599

So far it's nice good job šŸ‘šŸ‘'pls continue soon


Thanks!! Sure.. will post an update by weekend!
~Sandy


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

It is realy nice. Good to know Swadarsh are married. Eager to know the story. Update soon please and longer updates if possible 😃


Thank You! Will post soon!~Sandy


Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

Loved the start Can't wait to read more


Thanks a lot!! ~Sandy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it ..
Pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Surprising start dear for Adarsh and me too. In this story they are married and stay in same house with his mom. Love to read more what going to open up . Are Swa and Suhasini in good relationship . And hope AS mention it can not be true that Swa remember or know his b'day so it mean they are no tweety lovey dove you yet. Pleas continue dear. And thank you for writing the story. šŸ¤—

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