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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Superb update...

Finally shlok and aastha became friends😊


thank u
yes they r friends for now
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Oh finally they are coming close...hope love will blossom soon


hmm hmm wait wat so soon dear let them know each other
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Nice update dear...

Sorry for commenting late...

The story is progressing well and interesting...

Waiting for the next update...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...


thank u
hmm sabhash to myself u feel it interesting
hmm always welcome
and dont be sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update..
astha again flew..
man this girl has phd in running away. it seems..
finally astha opens up to shlok.. but poor girl herself doesnt know whole truth..
r shlok's past & astha's today condition connected to any way?
next time shlok slaps astha.. & i wil bang ur head... seriously..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..


thank u
hmm wat can she do yaar situation is like that if u feel wat she is going through u couldnt have got that doubt
hmm lets wait and watch
arey yaar dont be so ange\ry do u remember wen Shlok was going to suicide how Aastha gave slaps to him in the same way Shlok was trying to give her some sense thats all dont worry
k k here is ur next update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 7


Aastha felt relaxed for sometime but was tired. She was really messy. She went out and searched something. She found a diary and something was written by him, she thought it was wrong to study so she left there. She roamed whole house and exclaimed how rich they r. She was feeling weightless. She cant able to think and again thought to sleep again. She is tossing on bed and remembering her Aai and Baba a lone tear escaped her eye. She doesn't know wat is happening to their family. She is remembering her daily routine with her family which she spent long ago. She didn't expect such thing will occur to her in her life. She wiped her tears and stared at the ceiling. Y did god leave her alone wat is the reason for her to be alive she doesn't know she was left with questions for which she needs to find the answer. Yes she has to do it, she need to find. Here Anjali too feeling bad for her condition. Anjali "Sahab kya ham ek baar Aastha ke paas nahi jaa sakte bichari kitni dukh main hain main janti hoon ki ham use yaha nahi la sakte lekin ek baar ham usse milenge tho uska man bhi thoda halka hojayega." Niranjan "hmm main bhi vahi soch raha hoo lekin ham bhi koi risk nahi le sakte dekhta hoon." Anjali "Teek hain sahab lekin der mat karna." Shlok listened all this. He didn't understand is there anything they were hiding from him. He nodded his head in frustration and went to his room. He was closing his cupboard after arranging his shirts and he suddenly found his ring and he threw away that ring and bcame angry and clenched his fist everytime every time main Aai ko achchi samajhti hoon lekin aisa kuch na kuch hota hain hmmm. He just went to shower a really needed one and he came to living room. Niranjan saw him surprised "Kya hua Shlok sab theek tho hain tum yaha kya kar raha hain office kyun nahi gaye the."

Shlok "Kuch nahi Baba kuch Sir dard hain." Anjali "Shlok kya.." Shlok raised his hand and said "I don't need any concern from u I can take care of myself." Niranjan "Shlok she is ur mother u should not talk with her like this." Shlok "Pls Baba." Anjali controlled her tear and went away. He saw her and nodded in frustration. Shlok "Baba main soch raha hain ki kuch der Aastha ke paas rahna chahta hoon wo bohut dukh main hain aur use support chahiye tho main soch raha hoon ki." Niranjan "Theek hain Shlok lekin tum iskeliye tho office nahi gayi hain na." Niranjan saw him keenly. Shlok "Wat main kyun jaana band kardeta hoon I said na thodasa headache I just want to go bcoz she is alone there that's y." Niranjan "Theek hain Shlok but dyaan se watch everything around u and be safe beta." Shlok nodded.

Niranjan went to his room. Anjali "aur kitni din sahab kitni din." Niranjan "Anjali mat ro ek din vo jaroor samjega aur Aastha kuch nahi jaante hain don't be afraid he wont hate us." Shlok went to his study room he didn't know y he didn't want to go to office today did he really bunked bcoz of her how weird it is. He was thinking about her words how she cried and broke down infront of him. Really he felt very bad for her and yet no one is there to console he just understood wat she must be going through. He too was tired after searching her and took rest for sometime he thought to go to her after sometime. He had a sound sleep. Suddenly Kavya entered his room shouting "chachu chachu chachu utho na utho na." Shlok woke up with a thud and saw here and there and said "Kya hua Kya hua." Kavya laughed out loudly. Shlok "Kavya kya hain yaar tum itni jaldi aagayi school kya hua." Kavya "chachu school time hogayi na I just came just now see its 4:30 u said u will take me out on that day but u didn't today we definitely will go pls chachu." And then he came out of his world. Wat is it 4:30 and he saw time. Uff he got up and said "nahi Kavya we will go later chachu ko abhi kaam hain na jao jaake fresh hojao." Kavya "nahi nahi ham chelte pls pls." Shlok thought she will not bend now and said k now go and fresh up. Shlok thought he will leave b4 she gets ready. So he got ready soon and was going to leave. Oh god she was there b4 he got ready. Kavya "chachu chalo main tayar hogayi." Shlok "achcha tum tayar hogayi dekho mama bula rahe hain tumhe." And she left to her mom. Shlok went to car and drove away quickly.

Kavya came to know he rushed away and felt low and cried harder. Everyone assembled there. Kavya kept on crying like that. She didn't say anything except this "chachu bohut bure hogayi bohut bura." Varad "dekho Kavya chachu ko kaam hain na abhi." Anjali "ye Shlok bhi na hamesha aise karte hain kaha chali gayi is vakt." And then Niranjan understood and called him. Niranjan "Shlok r u going to Aastha." Shlok "Haan Baba." Niranjan "Shlok wat did u do Kavya is crying here take her too she also might feel relaxed by seeing her." Shlok cant say anything and came back. Everyone saw at him angrily. He looked down and went to her. Kavya turned aside and said "No chachu y did u come now I wont talk to u go wherever u want." Shlok "arey meri Kavya Princess I just went out to bring this chocolate for u wont u eat it chalo ab ham bahar chelte k." Kavya suddenly turned and tried to take that chocolate but Shlok backed her hand and teased her. She tried again. He didn't give. Shlok "pehle chachu ko kiss de." And she kissed him. Shlok lifted her and took her to the car. Varad smiled and went away. Shlok "Bolo Kavya where do u want to go." Kavya "chachu ham exhibition jayenge." Shlok "nahi Kavya today u meet ur new friend k." Kavya "Kya!! Kaun hain wo I wont come chachu I will be out u soon meet her and come back." Shlok smiled and didn't say anything.

He went to his guest house and parked the car. Kavya "chachu ham yaha kyun aayi ye aapka guest house he na." Shlok "Haan Kavya ab chalo mere saath." And he took her in. He knocked the door. This time Aastha is quick. She wiped her tears and saw them. Shlok again thought she was crying. Kavya "chachu kaun hain ye aapki guest house main kya kar rahe hain." Shlok "Kavya main ne bola na tumhari nai friend hain ye hello bolo aunti ko." Kavya "aunti kaun hain u said she is my friend but she is little bit more height than me that's it na." Kavya got down and went near her. Aastha got on knees. Kavya saw her and examined her. Kavya "chachu she is cuter than me." And she touched her cheeks and pulled her cheeks widely. Aastha sqeauled in pain. Shlok beat her morning there. Shlok came there and pulled Kavya back. Kavya "aapka naam Kya hain aur aap kaunsi class main pad rahe hain." Aastha smiled and took her into hands "tumhari naam Kavya hain kya." Kavya nodded. Aastha "tum bhi bohut cute hain." And she dragged her cheeks. Kavya "thank u." Kavya "aapka naam kya hain." Aastha "mera naam Aastha hain." Kavya "aap kaunsi class pad rahe hain 10th hain na isiliye aap itni bade hain." Aastha smiled and said "nahi Kavya I completed MS in America that means I m 8 yrs older than 10th class." Kavya opened her mouth and said "matlab aap sach main aunti hain chachu kaha hain lekin I didn't understood. Chachu aunti bohut cute hain pehle chachi se bhi cute hain." Aastha was confused. Shlok too suddenly looked at her. Aastha questioned "chachi!!! Mr Shlok aapko shadi hua aur pehle chachi matlab.. oh I m sorry if in that case." Shlok controlled his anger "nahi mujhe shadi nahi hua." Kavya "haan chachu ka shaadi toot gayi na us din." Shlok "Kavya bas aunti se khelogi tum." Aastha "Haan Kavya chalo mere saath."

Shlok had tough time to control his anger. He just went outside and cooled down after seeing her smile from outside through the window. How could she smile and how beautiful she is. He immediately looked away. He went in and saw Kavya was following Aastha who tied kerchief to her eyes. Suddenly Aastha didn't see him and bumped into him and fell on him on the ground. She tried to pull herself away and again fell on him and squealed in pain in her leg. Kavya "Didi kya hua chot lagi kya chachu ne aapko bhi maara." Aastha saw him into his eyes and slowly started getting up. Shlok too held her shoulders and tried to get up. Their chains were stuck in each other's. Both tried to take it away and their heads collided. She again saw him. This was the first time being so close. Shlok slowly took the chain and gave it to her. Kavya "Oh didi u r bleeding." And then both came to earth after their deep eye lock. Shlok saw her leg. He made her sit on the couch and gave ointment to her. She applied ointment and said she was fine." Shlok looked the watch and said "Kavya common lets go to home wont u do ur homework." Kavya said bye to Aastha and left. The minute he dropped her he returned back to Aastha again.

Episode 8

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Nice update . Thanks for your pm.
Sai your story is super. Hey how could you imagine like this. Really u r appreciatable for this 👏 👏 👏.
Really now astha understand something. She want to know what is happening to her. 👏 👏 👏
Shlok also was worrying for her. I think this will be the starting to their love. Its only my guess k.
Arey waw shlok didn't want to go to the office. Kya hogaya shlok ko 😉
Anjali is worrying for astha. But her conversation between niranjan mades shlok only hate for her 😡 😡 .
Niranjan shlok conversation was not bad.
Because of his headache he slept.poor boy.
Kavya is a cute. Today she met astha. She liked astha.
Arey I think shlok was engaged before.
Something is there to reveal.
Anyway nice update. Keep it up
Continue soon... V r waiting
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
lovely..
kavya is so cute..
loved her tantrums...😆😆
smart gal..
so niru baba is or not negative here?
m confused..
so shlok's marriage broke..
astha & kavya playing together..
lovely..
astha got hurt...
shlok attends her..
continue soon..
thnsk 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good update ... Kavya part was fun
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Kavya is too funny
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice Update Sai
Thank You Waiting for Next Update

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