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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Nice update . Thanks for your pm.
Sai your story is super. Hey how could you imagine like this. Really u r appreciatable for this 👏 👏 👏.
Really now astha understand something. She want to know what is happening to her. 👏 👏 👏
Shlok also was worrying for her. I think this will be the starting to their love. Its only my guess k.
Arey waw shlok didn't want to go to the office. Kya hogaya shlok ko 😉
Anjali is worrying for astha. But her conversation between niranjan mades shlok only hate for her 😡 😡 .
Niranjan shlok conversation was not bad.
Because of his headache he slept.poor boy.
Kavya is a cute. Today she met astha. She liked astha.
Arey I think shlok was engaged before.
Something is there to reveal.
Anyway nice update. Keep it up
Continue soon... V r waiting


thank u chechi
arey wat is there to imagine yaar jus going with wat came to my head thats it
hmm Shlok didnt want to go to office u noticed it can u say y
Yes Kavya is too cute Shlok hamesha Kavya ko tang karte hain 😡
hmm lets wait to reveal his story
until then stay tuned to IF
thanks for commenitng
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update..
lovely..
kavya is so cute..
loved her tantrums...😆😆
smart gal..
so niru baba is or not negative here?
m confused..
so shlok's marriage broke..
astha & kavya playing together..
lovely..
astha got hurt...
shlok attends her..
continue soon..
thnsk 4 d pm..


thank u didi
yes Kavya is cute and y not she is the gem of our show😉
hmm u always focus on niru Baba lagta hain aapkeliye separate ff likhna hain Niru Baba ko lead bankar
thanks for commenting

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Posted: 9 years ago

thank u 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Good update ... Kavya part was fun


thank u😊
yes kavya is always a cute girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Nice update...

Kavya is too funny


thank u 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Nice Update Sai

Thank You Waiting for Next Update


thank u nadeeka1200
hmm i dont make u wait for long time so here is ur next update hope u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 8


Aastha "aap yaha." Shlok "haan tum bhool gayi kya aaj shyam ham aapke ghar jaa rahe hain." Aastha "haan lekin ab sirf 6 hain achcha theek hain aap aayiye." Shlok "nahi nahi I want to ask hows ur leg." Shlok felt weird ye kya kar raha hoon main. Aastha was retorting. He got angry and controlled it infront of her. She left her words unsaid and went in. Shlok followed her to hall. Aastha "aap kya lethe I will make smthng." Shlok "nahi rahne do I just came to.." and thought for sometime and said "to check r u k or u need to go to hospital leave it I m going now we will go to ur home at 9:30 u should be eaten till then." Aastha nodded. Shlok went away. Aastha felt ye kya hua kyun aaye kyun chele gaye ajeeb hain. She went to her room and lost in her thoughts kaha hain aap Baba and she closed her eyes. Shlok went to office to check his daily work. He went to Suresh cabin. He didn't find him. Shlok called him. Suresh "Hello Sir." Shlok "where did u go did u complete todays work or not." Suresh "Sir unfortunately my mother is sick I came to hospital so.. I m sorry Sir I thought to say it to u but it was urgent and serious." Shlok "achcha theek hain ab kaise hain wo." Suresh "haan she is fine Sir." Shlok has lot of work to catch up and he also has to go to her house. How can he go there. He started working and he lost in his work. He forgot her. She ate and was waiting for him but he never shown up. Shlok finished his work and went to home.

Varad "Shlok kya hua itni late jyada work hain kya." Shlok "Haan Dada kuch jyada hi hain." Kavya came running to her Papa and sat in his lap. Kavya "Papa aaj chachu mujhe ek nai didi se introduce kiya we played a lot lekin wo bohut cute hain mujhse jyada cute hain chachu promise that u always call me Princess u should not call her princess bcoz she is cuter than me k." Shlok then thought to go to her. Shlok rushed away again. Arey she must be waiting. Varad "achcha Kavya uska naam kya hain." Kavya "uska naam uska naam wo Aas.. Aasha nahi haan Aastha Aastha didi hain." Varad "achcha tumne usse kya khela." And they had their chat. Anjali came there "Varad Shlok kaha hain maine uska awaj suni." Varad "Haan aayi idar hi to hain kaha chali gayi achanak." Anjali went away with a sigh. Shlok rushed to her at 11:30. Shlok knocked the door. Aastha was feared now. Who would be at this time? She wiped her tears and went near door. Aastha slowly "Kaun hain." Shlok released a sigh haan ye ladki "main Shlok hoon." Aastha calmed and opened the door. Aastha "aap firse is vakt." Shlok "wo kuch nahi ham aaj nahi chal paya tho ham kal jaroor chelenge k did u eat." Aastha nodded and said "kya ham kal pucca chelenge na." Shlok "definitely I didn't go to office today so had to catch up lot of work so I forgot I m sorry." Aastha "its k Mr Shlok aap itni raat mujhe ye batane ki aayi hain kya." Shlok "haan aur tum itni raat hogayi y didn't u sleep." Aastha "Wo mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hain." And she turned her head away and wiped her tear which was going to fall from her eye. Actually she was waiting for him madly since two hours.

Shlok thought to lighten her mood and asked "achcha tell me about ur life in America u said u cannot sleep so lets talk about ur life in America." Aastha got up and said loudly with uncontrolled tears on her cheeks "mujhe kuch nahi chahiye mujhe Baba ke paas jaana hain yaa aayi ke paas." And she cried a lot and went to her room and closed the door. Uff this lady. Shlok slowly went to her and said "Aastha darvaja kholo." Aastha didn't open the door only god knows wat she is going through. Shlok knocked several times but she didn't. Shlok shouted "Theek hain jao jo karna hain karlo yaha main tumhe sambhalne aayi hoona aur tum just get lost." And he went out. Aastha cried out loudly. Shlok went to his home and to his room directly and took the bottles and drank again. Y is she doing this to herself and y did it matter to him and he recalled her playing with Kavya. Her smile she is really cute y did god do this to her. Oh god wat had he done again he should have consoled her but shouted at her and went away. Wat if she does something wrong oh god. He again went to her and knocked door. She didn't open the door he kept on knocking. He went to other side of his house and opened her room's window and said "Aastha open the door." Aastha "nahi aap jayiye pls mujhe kuch der akela chodiye." Shlok "Aastha I m sorry pls open the door dekho I will be here if u wont open the door u don't know I m very stubborn." Aastha left a huge sigh and went to open the door. Shlok too went in. Aastha "Kya chahiye aapko kyun aaye ab dekho agar aapko kaam hain tho karlijiye lekin pls don't feel me as burden if u feel so then pls let me leave I don't want to be burden for anyone pls Mr Shlok I m sorry meri kismet aise hi hain."

Shlok "shshs aastha don't cry I m sorry I shouldn't have shouted at u like that I should have understood wat u were going through." Aastha "nahi u cant." Shlok "achcha teek hain ab don't cry u too behave as Kavya she too cries for no reason she always cries and she gets wat she wants." Aastha "matlab aap kya soch rahe hain mere bare main am I that cheap.." Shlok "nahi meri maa I m saying that u behave like a small kid be brave k nothing will happen to ur father." Aastha didn't say anything and cried catching his collar "Pls mujhe mere baba se milvadijiye pls I owe u my entire life I cant live without them already I lost my Aai main apni Baba ko nahi khona chahti hoon har ek pal mujhe bohut dar lag raha hain 4 din hogaye kaha hain kis haal main hain pata hi nahi chal raha hain Baba aisa nahi hain fir kyun sab log uski khilaf jaa rahe hain kyun ho raha hain ye sab aap pls mujhe ek mandir le jaa sakti hain kya pls pls." Shlok felt heavy no one ever cried catching his collar. He just kept his palm on his head and said "k we will go tomorrow morning we definitely will go." Aastha "nahi pls we will go now pls." and she saw him. Shlok too thought going in day light will be risky so he said her to lets go. Aastha happily went with him. Both were climbing steps. Aastha kept on staring at bappa and was climbing and Shlok was watching her. She always had tears in her eyes. He felt heavy in her throat. Aaj tak everyone consoled him this is rare he don't know how to console her but he was doing wat he can do.

Aastha came near the idol and rang the bell and prayed to Bappa. Shlok was just observing her. She went to idol and sat there and rested her head on his legs and crying continuously. Shlok too thought his prblm was tiny compared to her He too rang bell and started praying to Bappa. Aastha stood up angrily and put fire in her palm and stood there. Shlok opened his eyes and saw her with fire in her palm. Shlok quickly pushed her hand. Shlok "Aastha tum pagal hogayi kya kya kar rahe ho tum aise karne se tumhari Baba aogi kya har problem ko ek solution hota hain lekin aise karne se kuch nahi hoga sirf dard hi milenge." Aastha "ab kaunsa dard kam hain Mr Shlok mujhe sirf mere Baba chahiye Bappa sab dekh raha hain mere takleef bhi dekh raha hain wo jaroor madad karega let me ask him pls." and she cried. Shlok cant see her like that. He held her face in his palms and asked her "tumhe mujhpe bharosa hain na." She nodded. Shlok "Tho mujhe thoda vakt dijiye I said na I definitely will find ur Baba as I found u k don't do all this meaningless things k." and don't know wat made him to do so he just hugged her. Aastha too cried in his arms and said "Thank u so much I will not forget u my entire life wen everyone left me u ppl r helping me a lot if u hadn't found me I would have died until." Shlok broke the hug and wiped her tears "aisa mat kaho main hamesha tumhare saath hoon ab main kah rahe ho bhagavan ke samne I definitely will find ur father this is my promise k don't cry pls." Aastha saw him pleading "k thanks a lot aap bohut achche ho main bohut tang kar rahe hain na aapko aaj se I won't disturb u I have trust in u I will not cry k thanks for bringing me here."

Shlok "its k come lets go haan if u want to go to ur home we can go now not a problem." Aastha "nahi nahi Mr Shlok we will go tomorrow its k its really late we will leave now." Shlok "r u sure." Aastha nodded. Shlok and Aastha went to guest house and he dropped her and followed her until her room. Shlok "Tumne khana khaliya." She nodded Shlok "aur dawayi liya." She nodded again. Shlok "K then sleep now take rest I will come again tomorrow u have all the things u can do whatever u want, make breakfast urself I will get u a maid by lunch k bye gud n8." And he was going to leave but Aastha stopped him and said "Thanks thanks a lot Mr Shlok." Shlok "no prblm Aastha aur tum mujhe Shlok kah sakte ho ham friends hain na." Aastha smiled. Shlok too smiled and went near her and just hit her nose with his finger "Kavya said right u look so cute while smiling even wen crying too." Aastha didn't know how to react but said thanks and slightly blushed. Shlok smiled and then left her.

Episode 9&10

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for your pm and update. Really quite interesting yaar.
The love started yaar. Shlok didn't know what is doing. That's means he is going to be confused arey waw. 😛 😛.

Kavya u r so cute na. 😛 arey Kavya u r jealousy henna. U said to ur chachu don't call astha didi princess henna. Look Kavya beta astha didi is really ur chachu's princess. 😛 😛😛.
Suresh's mother is in hospital. Poor guy 😭
Because of Suresh absence shlok had lot work and forgot astha 😡
But remembering he went to her . After that their conversation made astha cry. 😭
Shlok got angry at her 😡
He scolded and went away 😡 but our hero came again. Arey waw they went to mandhir. In mandhir part remembered our show back. The Mumbai track which reghubhai kidnapped shlok.
After that consoling shlok I liked that part 😛
And the last part nose touches and saying cute arey waw.yes the love is going to start. 😛 😛😛
Anyway nice update. V r waiting Sai please continue soon... 😛
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice going,liked it very much,waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

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