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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
This story is completely different from original ebp waiting to see what happens to astha n how shlok n astha fall in love hope you'll bring romance soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
astha runs off to police...
shlok shocked & angered...
finally astha decides to say here.
Niru baba upset with shlok's anger..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..


thank u didi
well now its time to change ur way of commenting u always start with awsm update thoda change karo na
anyway thanks for commenting first
keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: dazzles

Wow nice episode...lot of mysteries...
Good work Sai...


thanks anu
hope u follow it regularly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: vaishux

Awesome update...

Despite Shlok hate girls..
He is still feeling sorry for Aastha


thank u vishux
hmm i m waiting for ur OS u write beautifully cant u try one more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Catherine06

wow,very interesting ff,nice going,like it very much.

This ff is not resembling ebp and it is new story so very interesting to know what is next.

Pl update every day.


thanks a lot Catherine06
hmm there r many more ffs that doesnt resemble our ebp at all
pls comment for them too they might continue their ffs
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai. Thanks for the pm. Nice update yaar. V loved it.
Astha escaped but she reached back to shlok. Shlok was angry at her and locked her alone there 😡 😡
Avdoot was kidnapped by someone. Really I hate that man 😡
Niranjan scold shlok. Shlok was now confused.
Astha was alone and she slept poor girl 😭 .
Atlast I didn't understand who said sorry. Astha or shlok.
Anyway nice update. Shlok please take care ur asthu.
Sai keep rocking. Continue soon...


thanks a lot chechi hmm hope u res ur comment like b4
waiting for that
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

This story is very different, I can't predict what happens next

Oh god I have to wait till tomorrow
Thank you sai


hmm yes this is little bit different and also there r lot of ffs have different stories hope u commment there too and bring them back to continue their ffs
thanks for commenting and liking this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: rd0309

Lovely update... Suspense is building


thank u
at some time there wont be any suspense u will njoy it
hope so u will follow this ff regularly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

This story is completely different from original ebp waiting to see what happens to astha n how shlok n astha fall in love hope you'll bring romance soon...


thank u and yes this is little bit different hope u like it and also follow it and also comment like this regularly
hmm u r so eager for romance they jus met yaar sabar rakhiye
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Happy Holi friends

Episode 4


Aastha cried again "Kyun ho raha hamare saath ye sab kya kiya hamne pehle Aai gayi aur ab Baba bhi." And she cried out loudly catching his shoulder. Shlok didn't know how to react. He just made her comfortable and said "Dekho kabhi kabhi jundagi bohut kuch sikhadete hain ham usse ladna hain nahi bhaagna hain don't cry I will find ur Baba don't worry I will solve ur problems don't worry wat do u want say me." Aastha saw him "Kaun hain aap kyun madad karna chahte hain aap mereliye wat does it profit u aap kaun hota hain hamare liye I didn't see u b4 or did I see I don't know Mr Shlok lekin pls help me pls find my Baba I will owe u my entire life I will do whatever u say pls." Shlok "K K now calm down as I said I will find ur father definitely as I found u do whatever u want but only in this house u have everything here k and do u need something else." Aastha "haan mera phone pls Mr Shlok can u pls bring my phone it was in my home." Shlok "Kya tumne dekha tumhare ghar ke bahar kitna log hain." Aastha "Wat r u saying u went to my home already." Shlok "Haan." Aastha "mujhe ek baat batao whatever u said to police was not true right." Shlok saw here and there and said "nahi sab sach hain y did u get that doubt." Aastha "who is ur father." Shlok "pehle tum sojao I will tell u later u want ur phone right I will bring u." and he got up and went away.

Aastha kept on watching him. He left without a bye. Wat is it with him y is he so rude everytime. Shlok too was thinking about her y did she ask her phone. He drove to her home directly. Oh God there r still ppl he thought he will come at night and went back. Aastha just sat on bed and was thinking y it is like that y it is happening to their family who r these ppl y they need to help us kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha aur Y everyone r accusing Baba ye sab kya ho raha hain nahi aisa chup chap rahne se kuch nahi hoga main pata lagana chahiye. Anjali "Sahab I m thinking that we should bring Aastha here itself I think she will feel lonely there she will depress even more I mean she needs support this time." Niranjan "nahi Anjali I know wat I m doing but she being here will not be safe and we too will be in risk let her be alone for sometime then we will see wat we have to do." Shlok was in his room in his own thoughts. Shlok was thinking kyun Aai kyun kiya aap aisa kitna pyaar kiya tumse kyun mere viswaas ko thoda aap kyun and he also recalling his past aisa kabhi nahi hua fir aaj kyun itni door hogayi mujhse. He went to his bottles and started drinking and bcame angry on himself for trusting someone so blindly and he slowly remembered Aastha and smiled a bit. He didn't know y he smiled but he thought everyone has problem bichari apni family ko khoya itni dukh mein hain main bhi na he thought and slept in those thoughts.

Aastha cant sleep how is she supposed to sleep there whereas her baba don't know where he is and how he is. A lone tear started from her eyes. She decided she will help them in finding her father she will use her contacts too once she gets her phone. Shlok forgot to take her phone. Next morning Aastha woke up doesn't know wen she slept, she is hungry too. She went out her door was not locked. She searched for someone but no one was there how did he suppose to think that she would live lonely in this house its like jail to her. She went to washroom and brushed her teeth but she doesn't have anything to wear so she cant have bath. She went to kitchen to have something. She opened fridge and found bread atleast this would suffice she thought. She toasted bread and started to eat within no time Suresh came to her and asked "Mam aap itni jaldi uth gaye kuch chahiye aapko." Aastha just stared at him. Suresh "Hello mam I asked wat do u want." Aastha "My father." Suresh released a huge sigh. Suresh "Dekho mam we r really trying hard..." Aastha "I know but I don't know y u ppl r trying to help me kaun hain aap log I want to search my father myself and I can do that pls stop caring me and I already asked my phone which is in my home u guys wont allow me to go to my home wont allow me to do anything then wat I m supposed to do here haan shall I sit here idle whereas my father was missing for 2 days pata nahi kaha hain kis haal mein hain aap pls mujhe chutkara dijiye I can find him myself I don't want to be here whoever u r I know u r not main head so pls ask ur boss to release me from this jail pls I need to find my father." Suresh "Dekho mam.." Aastha stopped him by raising her hand "Do u have any idea wat I m going through." Suresh "Mam I understand u..." Aastha "No u will never." Suresh "K mam I will ask Sir." Aastha "Haan pls."

Suresh called Shlok and asked him to come there. Shlok left a huge sigh and thought haan ye ladki will really be the death of him. Shlok angrily went to guest house. Suresh "Mam Sir is coming but we really r trying to find ur father pls understand us too we too have lot of work y do we need .." Shlok came roaring "Kya ho raha hain yaha." Suresh "Sir wo..." Aastha "I don't want to be here who the hell r u to ask me to stay here wat do u think of me haan I know u ppl r trying to help me but y I can take care of myself I need to find my father..." Shlok "Bas ek baar bolne se samajme nahi aata hain kya tumhe kyun tang kar rahe hain I said na I will find ur father just be silent." Aastha "Kya be silent how m I supposed to be silent whereas my father was missing for 2 days and don't know where he is and how he is tell me urself will u be silent if ur father was missed." Shlok "heyy apni aukat mein raho tumhe kya lagta hain ham log vaha chup chap India Pakistan match dekh raha hain even we have lot of work we too have problems haan ye ladki tumhe jaana hain na jao jo karna hain karlo never ever try to come to me again just get out." Aastha "Haan tho theek hain kaun chahta hain tumhare paas aane ka mujhe bhi yahi chahiye never come to my life again samjhe aap bade aayi mujhe bachane ki kisne poocha aapki madad aap mera phone bhi nahi la sakte aur kah rahe hain ki mera Baba ko dhoond rahe hain aur ek baar mera picha mat karna." And she shown her finger to him. Shlok "Kya karo gi tum bolo." And he went near her. Aastha backed down by seeing his anger. He was moving towards her and he cornered her to the wall.

Shlok spoke on her face "yehi hota hain tumhari ladkiyon se jara bhi akal nahi hota hain yaha ham tumhe help kar raha hain aur tum inspite of showing gratefulness u r taunting us ab jaana chahte hain na jao no one will stop u I will also see who will try to help u jara bahar jaake dekho tumhara kya haal hoga." Aastha "jaha bhi jaogi lekin tumhare paas nahi aogi samjhe aap." And she pushed her with tearful eyes and ran away. Shlok got frustrated and asked Suresh "Suresh ye ladkiyon kab akal istmaal karna shuru kar denge mera bas chele na isko tho kitna akad hain iske saath." Suresh "Sir I want to say smthng." Shlok calmed down and asked with him with his looks. Suresh "Sir ab aap apna Baba se kya kahogi." And then he came to earth. Oh shit ye kya kiya main ne. he just rushed out side but she already left. She was running with painful heart and 1000kg burden on her shoulder. Wat to do where to go. She thought to go to home once. She went to her home and found few ppl there. She thought it will be better if she entered from back side but how. She went back side of her house and tried to climb the pipe. She was struggling but failed always. She again tried with more confidence now and climbed to certain extent and lost the grip and fell down. She squealed in pain and her leg was hurt badly. She was crying. Someone listened her and went to back. Everyone followed her. They saw Aastha struggling with leg. Someone from back shouted "Heyy she is daughter of Avdoot pakdo use." Aastha got up and tried to run limping. God save this kid.

Here Shlok and Suresh were searching her everywhere. Suresh "Sir I think she might have gone to her home she asked about her phone right she might go there shall we go and search there first." Shlok nodded and rushed to her home. Shlok was thinking hmm ye ladki if I get her now I will give some piece of mind to her. Aastha was running. They were following her. Aastha's eyes blurred with tears. She never experienced such type of hassault. Shlok and Suresh reached her home strange they saw no one yet house was locked. Shlok was thinking how come no one present here. He searched for her near the house. He didn't ask anyone bcoz he should not. Shlok "chalo ham yaha se chelte shayad yaha nahi aa chuki hain." And they left her home and was returning back by going around the house. He suddenly stopped by seeing her payal. He got down and took the payal. Suresh too got down. Shlok "iska matlab wo ladki yaha aayi hain lekin kaha cheli gayi kai wo log bhi yaha nahi hain kai wo log." And he was worried. He quickly took the car and rushed away to search her.


Episode 5


Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago

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