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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

It's a really catchy story


thanku 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

Sorry for the late comment.Sai
Busy as always
Nice update Sai...shlok to much to handle...
Happy holi.


thanks anu 😊
happy holi
haan haan i know tum obama se bhi jyaada busy hain
hope u comment like this daily

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ss1609

Happy holi to u too dear...

Nice update...


happy holi
thanks a lot for commenting
hope u comment like this daily and cheer me to update regularly

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles


Sure Sai I will.hope you are yesterday's match hangover...


hm now words for yesterdays match
cant xpress myself
anyway thanks for assuring u will follow it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 5


Aastha was running and hit athe stone and fell down the car. Everyone stopped there. Car too suddenly stopped. Shlok got out of the car and quickly went to her. He nodded in disbelief and lifted her in his arms and put her in the back seat of the car. Ppl already came there shouting. Shlok put her in and he suddenly turned back at them and roared at them "heyyy." And shown them a finger. The poor ppl really feared a lot. Shlok came to other side of car and drove away. One of them observed Shlok keenly. Shlok "Suresh doctor ko phone kar jaldi and tell him to come to guest house ye ladki sach main meri jaan lelegi." Suresh did as he said. With in no time they reached their guest house. Suresh "Sir shall I bring her." Shlok "Hmm jara help kardo." They both brought her out of the car." Shlok "chodiye tum I will bring her." Suresh didn't say anything but backed down and smiled to himself. Shlok took her to her room and made her sleep on the bed. Within no time doctor has arrived. He checked her condition. He said "Very bad Mr Shlok I already said she is really weak next time she will be admitted in hospital. Please take care of her I will give glucose to her. Don't worry she will be fine." He also checked her wounds and gave an ointment to apply. He gave medicines too. Shlok greeted him and he left. Shlok released a huge sigh in relief and said "Suresh she really will be the death of mine ye Baba bhi nahi samajsakte main kya feel kar raha hoon uff. Suresh bring all the items which she needs ask her after she wakes up k and call me if she again..." Suresh nodded. Shlok went near her and saw her bruises and felt guilt but didn't know y and said "dekho kya hua agar kuch akal hain tho ye sab hone ki kya jaroorat thi." He went away after seeing her tear sticken face. Shlok "Suresh be here until she wakes up I have a meeting after that I will come again theek hain haan wo Balram Goud file diya hain na." Suresh "Yes Sir it is on ur table." Shlok nodded and went away.

Suresh saw her and closed the door and he went to study room to check some files. Shlok was with mixed emotions that's true he cant see her like that and who wants see a beautiful lady struggling with her life. But he experienced something only he is not the one unlucky she too everyone has their problems and he just shook his head and concentrated on the presentation. He finished it and came to home. But b4 going to home he went to Aastha's home whether to check if any one present ot his bad luck still there r ppl. He thought he will go tonight and bring her phone. Aastha was dreaming smthng someone is taking away her father. They were dragging him mercilessly Aastha was following him. Suddenly he was disappeared and Aastha woke up with a thud and shouted Baba. Suresh woke up with a thud. Haan ye ladki uff he thought and went to her room. Suresh opened the door and saw her. Tears started again in her eyes. Suresh went near her and gave an apple to eat. Suresh "lo ye khalo." Aastha took apple and threw it away. Suresh "Dekho mam pls meri baat suno if u wont eat u will be hospitalised u don't understand that." Aastha "haan vahi chahiye mujhe I don't want to live I want to die mujhe nahi jihna hain." And she cried a lot remembering all her moments lived happily with her family. Suresh "Teek hain aapki marji shall icall Sir and say that u want to die."

Aastha "Dekhiye aap mujhe akela chod do kuch der keliye." Suresh keenly observed her and said "aap kuch aisa nahi karega na jaisa main soch rahah hoon." Aastha "matlab" Suresh "aap... kuch nahi aap ye apple khalijiye doctor advised u to eat." Aastha took apple throwing daggers with her looks. Suresh came and sat beside her "Do u even know wat was ur condition and with wat confidence did u go to ur house haan dekho apne aapko kya haal hogaya dekho we r going to find ur father at any cost don't be sad k nothing happens to ur father now eat this see how u were hit on ur leg y is the need to all this haan." Aastha "Pls aap jayiye I will eat u no need to tell me wat to do." And she took the apple and ate it. She sensed something weird. She checked her wounds and yelled in pain while touching it. She also saw medicines over there. Y who r those ppl wat do they need r they trying to find Baba to help or to... Nahi agar aisa hain tho mujhe yaha lane ki kya jaroorat hain aur itni achchi tarike se dekh raha hain mujhe kya hua hoga oh god a lot of questions running in her mind but no answer. At night dinner was ready but this time Shlok brought it.

Aastha just saw the contents. He brought all the items which doctor has mentioned and also medicines. Aastha "Ye sab kya hain I wont eat all that." Shlok got irritated and said "heyy tum chup chap kaam kyun nahi kar sakti ho just eat whatever I brought aur eat soon we will go to ur house." Aastha's face lightened this didn't go unnoticed by Shlok. Aastha "sach will u." Shlok "Will u do wat I say." She nodded. So eat fast. Aastha "aap nahi khaoge kya." Shlok "nahi main pehle hi kha chuka hoon and now pls don't ask any question and eat all those oh god kaha pas gayi iss ladki se." Aastha "haan tho kisne maanga aapki madad chele janedo mujhe." Shlok "kya karu main agar Baba ha kaho tho main tujhe abhi isi vakt tumhare ghar pe chod detha hoon pata nahi baba kyun fikar kar raha hain tumhara ab aap khalijiye." Aastha saw with full anger at him kitna besharam ladka hain yaha ek ladki musibat main hain help karne ki vaja mujhe dant the hain kuch nahi hosakta iska and she put the contents in the plate angrily and squealed in pain wen she touched curry with her bear hand she had cut in the right hand. Shlok observed that. She was watching here and there. Shlok went in and brought spoon to her. She took that. She ate kitchidi with spoon and said its enough. He saw roti left like that. Aastha saw him. Shlok understood and said "baitho." Aastha sat there didn't know wat he going to do.

He slowly took the roti and cut it into pieces and put them in milk. He said her to eat then. Aastha stared at him like that. She remembered her mother used to do like that. Unknown to her tears started in her eyes. Shlok "meri maa pls ab mat ro thak gayi hoon main." Aastha smiled inwards. Shlok was stunned. Did she just smile. Oh god how beautiful wen she smiled. Aastha "apni aai ki yaad aayi hain ek baar meri haat ko kanta laga tab aayi bhi aise hi kiya thanks." And she ate slowly everything. Shlok nodded but didn't smile as u ppl know y. She got up and went to clean up the table. Shlok "leave it and from tomorrow u will have a maid here u can ask her anything." Aastha "I just want to ask one thing." Shlok "haan main jaanta hoon we r searching for him I also met inspector they said they r searching every cc camera which were fixed at the junctions don't worry not only u so many ppl r waiting for ur father pata nahi kya kiya hoga ya phir shayad sach main he made that..."he didn't complete the sentence Aastha gave a tight slap on his cheek. Suresh was shocked. Shlok too shocked. Aastha "aur ek baath meri baba ki khilaf mujhse bura koi nahi hoga how dare u to accuse my father." Shlok lifted his face and saw at her angrily. He caught her chin tightly "how dare u slap me how dare u slap Shlok Agnihotri ab se sirf aur sirf ..." Aastha was struggling to say smthng "hmmm hmm hmm." He released her chin and kept staring at her angrily. Aastha "I m sorry I m really sorry I cant bear whoever accuses my father I m sorry." And she started crying.

Shlok took a step back. Suresh kept his hand on his shoulder. He saw her and left angrily. Aastha just collapsed there crying very badly. Suresh doesn't know to whom he has to console. He went after Shlok. Aastha just got up and wiped her tears. Wat the hell her life is in the worst situation. Suresh "Sir Sir Sir." Aastha was thinking wat is the reason for her being alive. She doesn't know wat to do she bet the person who is helping her. Shlok went to car and banged his fist to the car. Suresh "Sir Sir.." Shlok "How dare she how dare she to beat me like that I will make her life hell.." he is going on. Suresh "Sir pls understand her situation she is already experiencing a worst situation now u have to understand her Sir lets have an example wat if anyone says against ur Baba like that will u be calm.." Shlok roared "heyy bas." Suresh "exactly Sir I was just giving an example." Shlok "lekin uske Baba gunegaar hain." Suresh "But Sir Baba tho Baba honge na she too feels her Baba is innocent u have to understand her right." Shlok listened him but got into car and rushed to home he cant understand her, he doesn't know y. Here Aastha is feeling guiltier. She was questioning herself ye kya ho raha hain and she decided one thing.


Episode 6

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


thank u didi
ofcourse will continue
hope u follow it daily


u r welcum..
wil try..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening. Happy holi. Thanks for the update and the pm. 🤗
Yes my guess is correct haha 👏 👏 👏
Astha fainted in front of shlok 😉 . He carried her to the car. 😛
He didn't allow Suresh to take her. 😛 . That's our shlok 👏
Shlok called the doctor. And he warned shlok to take care of ashlok or else she have be in hospital 😭
Astha was angry at every one. She didn't want to live 😡 😡. Arey u want to live astha. If u gone with whom will our shlok live haan.
Arey what happened to shlok. Before knowing her father he is blaming her father 😡 😡 😡.
Arey waw good job astha. You slapped shlok. Really he deserves in every ff. Now I am happy 👏. Love you astha uummhhh.
But shlok y can't understand astha's feelings.😡 😡
Suresh u r nice person. Loved ur character.
. Arey waw shlok is going to take astha to her home. For that she is eating m shlok also r helping her 😛 😛
Anyway nice update. Keep rocking. Continue soon. V r waiting.

Hey Sai y r u taking 3 days leave yaar. V r angry 😡 😡 😡
U know henna v all guys r waiting for your update .
No... Please don't do that sai 😭.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
finally astha gets fainted infront of shlok's car.. & shlok found astha...
he saves astha frm people...
doctor warns shlok to take care of astha... or else she wil have to b in hospital..
make her healthy soon...
u taking 72 hrs leave.. means u going home..
gud.. celebrate ur success with ur parents...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow,very nice,interesting,try to update everyday
If u have work,then ok,

But waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting,try to update everyday
Impossible to wait for 72 hrs

But waiting for the next chapter.
Have a nice holiday

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