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Posted: 9 years ago
Super-short morsel of a chapter! Jootas and chappals thrown will not be returned and may be auctioned to fill author's personal coffers! 😛

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The Best of Things
(Ragya, Swasan) Fan Fiction Series +16
By Bubble

Chapter 62

Lakshya frowned into the distance. This was their second day in Haridwar. They had done the round of temples, taken in the sights, the girls had gone shopping as planned... but there was something amiss.

When they'd been bundling themselves into the car at Uttarkashi the previous morning, Ragini had asked Sanskaar if she could sit in the front seat next to the driver.

"Of course!" Sanskaar had said and then, with a gentle hand on her shoulder, "You're ok?"
She had nodded. "Bas, aise hi!"
"Sure," he said, "just, belt up, alright?"

She had spent the whole journey staring out at the mountains, absorbed in her own thoughts, eating very little but accepting tea more readily when they stopped. Some people did become withdrawn when they travelled but... Lakshya didn't like it.

She wasn't speaking much to him at all - or at least, responding when spoken to, and then keeping talk to the minimum. At Haridwar she'd become more animated but that was purely for Swara's benefit, he realised. He knew her quite thoroughly now... and she had something on her mind.

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The last couple of months had been a significant turn for Ragini. She had come face to face with her own behaviour, her own motivations... and now surrounded by these mountains that were the ultimate refuge of the renunciate, it made her feel smaller still... how she had greedily grabbed at the things she wanted when true elegance lay in letting go.

She had made her peace with Swara - her generous sister had forgiven her from the heart - but she had done wrong by Lakshya as well. Married him in spite of knowing that his love belonged to another. His sorrow at having let Swara down, his own misery at being so cruelly parted from her... he had put these behind him... but they surely lurked in some corner of his being.

She had taken over his life, without giving him a say in the matter. He was continuing to be by her side because he had been cheated into holding her hand in marriage. She could not give back what she had taken... Swara was happy and irrevocably bonded to Sanskaar but... could she make some reparation to him?

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Posted: 9 years ago
May be I am addicted to this story...

Craving for more and more...

I just hope that this story won't end quickly...if it does then it's my loss!!!

Very well written...short but captivating...

I wish to see the next part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res 😊 Lovely set of chapters 59 to 62 were, Bubble. Haven't been keeping too well lately, hence couldn't comment. Will Un res by tomorrow,

Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Itna chotu update!!??😲 Tarsaoing us to the fullest ha?? Well.. Now that we are addicted, sehne ke alava aur koi chaara nahi hai😆
So, Ragini seems withdrawn and Laksh notices it.. Wonder what she (or rather, you😉) plan as her recompense😛 Pls make the next chapter longer (and sooner too😛).. Pretty pleeej😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahahahahahahah
That description/warning in purple. Lol.
Super short update.
Past observations reveal that next one should be long :P
Let's see whether you continue your own set trend or not.
Bdw I am so liking your Lakshya! I never thought I would like Lkashya so much .
But your fiction has set him so apart!
Hats off.
You have crafted the Raglak story and their characters sooo well!
Still, I am and would be a swasan lover forever. Jitna bhi swasan mil jaye kam Hi lagta hai :P
They are just *lots of hearts*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a short one Bubble??
Not fair!! But anyways the update was nice!
I really like this Ragini. You've shaped all the characters perfectly!
Great job dude!
And I expect a longer one next time eh?
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Posted: 9 years ago
A couple of lovely updates Bubble...sorry I've been so tardy in my replies off late...delivered a little girl last week so being online itself has been a task...getting back on routine slowly so will catch up soon!

Loving the interaction of the HUM CHAAR and also the little chat tht ragsan had...hahaha so now tht the gals hv joined heads the men will hv a tough time hunting for them while they are shopping!

Tas
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely very well written. Poor ragini i hope she will be back to herself soon. Do continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
karma always count..
ragini is repenting but now she totally understood what her actions caused in reality...
i hope it doesnt strain her relation with lucky...
ps happy holi dear..and everyone out here wish u all a very happy and safe holi..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww !! Yay !! 🤗 🤗

You updated, AND promised a longer update, woh bhi SOON !! Don't think I'm not going to hold you to your promise Bubble !! 😆😆

Coming to the update...ah. What a lovely, lovely update...a pensive Ragini, battling with the last of her demons...and a restless Lakshya, wanting to know every thought running through her head.

This issue really needed to be addressed, and kudos to you for bringing it up so delicately. It never ceases to surprise me how you link, no, weave, one thought, one insecurity, one fear to another and address all of them together so beautifully - that is exactly how the human mind works, and you manage to grasp and show that so amazingly well.

Ragini's repentance for her actions towards Swara have lead her to reflect upon how she wronged Lakshya - and her insecurity and her fear, that she's trapped him are rising to the surface at precisely the same time that Lakshya's feelings for her are blossoming. And they are blossoming - in these last two updates, it has become increasingly clear that he cannot bear Ragini being physically or emotionally distant from him, even for a short while.

What an irony - and fortunate in the sense that Lakshya's feelings for her can maybe quell her guilt and fear. But for that, he needs to first understand and recognize those feelings as well - and I really cannot wait to read more on that.

Beautiful, beautiful update Bubble !! 🤗 🤗

I cannot wait to read more (and soon 😛😛)).
Edited by StarshineHues - 9 years ago

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