Originally posted by: StarshineHues
Oh yay I'm so glad my stalking...errr...pleading is working. 😆😆
This was such a lovely update Bubble, and for so many reasons. I loved, loved, loved Ragini and Sanskaar's conversation, they've battled through similar demons, that they do have an intrinsic understanding of the other's guilt and pain. And they really can help each other through it like noone else can.
And then my...I mean Ragini's Lakshya !! 😳😳 His concern and protectiveness for her shone through so subtly and so brightly at the same time...I really cannot wait to read more on his realization of his feelings for her !!
And SanLak and Swaragini bonding was adorable...really, the foursome is amazing together !! Hum chaar is appropriate indeed.
And Bubble IDK how, but the entire setting is so atmospheric with the gushing rivers and local eateries and chaai...that it feels like I'm right there with them and can see it all happen in front of my eyes...that's the power of your writing.
Just one chhotu sa thing...please make the next update longer, pretty please ? And could we please get an update quickly ? I know that we JUST got an update, but yeh dil maange more, your story is just THAT good.
Loads of love. 🤗🤗
Thanks so much Aditi - where would I be without readers like you!! 🤗🤗
The update is ready... but it so happens the next one is super short 😕 - that's the way the flow happened. But the one after that I'll put up really soon to compensate okay?
So happy you liked this part - you're right, Sanskaar knows most of what she is going through at this point.
Your Lakshya (😆😆) has this undercurrent of concern, almost worry, for Ragini... he'd rather have her where he can keep an eye on her, that's all! 😛😳
I'm so happy you find the setting atmospheric - I didn't want to bog down with lyrical descriptions but wanted the story in that backdrop. I'm glad it's coming through.
Bubble
Edited by soapbubble - 9 years ago