Tere ho ke rahenge # 3 updt( last part) on pg no 26 on 16 march - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Superb one...
Next update me Zara subbu pitwa Dena lol


Thanks Sukh.
Will surely do that
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RitaDivan

Hey 😊 one more SS beautifully narrated ... Diferent story line ... Love how Raman fell in love for Ishu on first meeting .. The flashbacks their meeting in hospital were damm cute! 😆 Thank god in this Ishu didn't take long to agree she also loves him ... Happieee that there are lots of Ishra moments ❤️ .. And Mihika very cute and bubbly 😊 ... This Subbu deserves to be beaten by Raman .. Finally Appa got to know how bad he is ... And Ishu is Pregnant 😊

Congrats for the 3rd Thread 👏 ur writings are so good .. That you will definetly pass many more 😉 egerly waiting for your next update, you do but still Pls don't forget to PM, I really don't wanna miss what's next - thanks yaar.😊


Thanks a lot amrita dear for reading and loving my story dear
Will surely pm you dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

sorry for very late dear ( due to exams i cant reply you dear)

amazing update dear

so emotional dear

raman love for ishu wow wow fabulous dear

thank god ishu is safe

moreover iyer accept raman wholeheartedly

ishu is pregant i am cloud nine dear

ishu jealous when he hug doctor was cute dear

his love for her bring her back so emotional more lovely dear

raman narrate everything to her in hospital was excellent dear

family worry about ishu moreover toshiji i am so much happy dear

continue soon cant wait more

overall excellent update dear


Thanks laxmi for your lovely comment sweety ..
No dear no need to say sorry .
I'll update next part soonish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello people I m back with last update of this story.First of all I want to inform you people that I m very much disappointed with the response I got in my last update of Tu Jo mila .I agree you people are supporting me and giving me 100+ likes in all my updates ,i also agree that its exams seasons but still i m complaining. I bever say anything but you people are taking us as granted ,most of you know that i m a homemaker and a business person .I have to look after all my duties as a DIL ,wife ,mother and a business person ,beside this I m giving regular update as its a kind of time pass as well as stress buster for me but seems you people are bored so slowly I m ending all my stories as I can't leave them unfinished .I just want to ask you people that if I m sending 150 PMS is it unfair to expect at least 50 comments .sorry if I m harsh with my words but friends I m way too sad and disappointed.


Part 21

Raman informed both the families about ishitas condition as well as good news .Everybody was too happy .Next day everybody ,amma ,appa ,toshiji ,mihir and muhika all come to congratulate ishra for their happiness .Both the families were too happy to got ishita safe and sound that too with a good news.

Looking everybody around ishita raman excused himself and went somewhere informing mihir that he will be back soon .Raman directly went to police station and asked the inspector about subbu .The inspector singnalled towards the cell where subbu was sitting in corner .Raman opened his palm in front of inspector ,he silently kept the cell's keys on ramans hand .As Raman was a well known person and business man inspector didn't stop him .The inspector very well know that what he is going to do but still he supported raman since he has seen how mercilessly that devil has hurt ishita .

Raman opened the cell and entered the cell .He looked at subbu but seems today subbu himself wants to be dead .That idiot opened his dirty mouth and spoke laughing sarcastly" she has gone na ,leaving you alone ."

Listening to subbu's poisoned words raman's blood boiled and he become red with anger.Raman went to him and spoke clutching his coller" no you scoundrel ,she is ok but its too sad that you will not be ok after thinking and mouthing bad about my ishq."

Saying so he start hitting subbu,blue and black.Raman was hitting him mercilessly when he heard a sound " beta I know he did bad but please leave him either he will be dead ."

Raman raised his head and saw subbus mother was standing outsseid tge cell folding her both hands and pleading raman to leave her son but raman was nowhere in his senses to listem to anyone ." let him die ,he don't deserve to be alive as he a devil in a human body ".Raman spoke angrily spitting fire from his red eyes .

SM- but still beta ,he is devil but you are human na ,please leave him .Not for his sake but for your and your ishitas sake ,just think if something happens to him and you will be jailed then how will your ishita live without you .

Raman stopped listening this from subbus mother and spoke " actually you are right why i m wasting my time with this creep,instead of taking care of my ishq.I m leaving him but make him understand to stay away from her and my family either next time i will not mind killing him and you know what ,i have that much power and contacts that i will be spared of all the charges even though if I m guilty of killing your devil son."

Saying so raman started walking out of the cell but he again went back and hit subbu with his mocasino on subbus face making him spit blood .Raman locked the cell and went out handing the keys to inspector .Subbus mother was stunned to see his attitude ,love and anger.she was also cursing her own son for messing with such a powerful person .

One week passed now ishita was alright and was being discharged today .Raman has gone for clearing all the dues and papers when Mr iyer went to toshiji and spoke soflty " Bhabhi ji I would like to take ishita along with us as she needs to be taken good care off and you already had to take care of mihika ."

Toshiji thought for a while and spoke " see Mr iyer I don't want to be rude but you know ishita has became an important part of our family and if she will not be around we will feel our house empty ,but yes you are right that I would not be able to take care of two girls so if it you are ok ,you can drop ishita's mother to my place in morning while going to office and pick her in the evening at the time of returning .In this way we both can take care of both girls and can also spend out lone time together .is it ok with you ,please don't think that I m being igoistic but its the need as in your house only will be left behind since out also have to go to office "

All the family members of both family agreed toshiji as she was right .There's no point sending ishita to iyer house as amma will be alone there but here in bhalla house amma ,toshiji ,ishita and mihika will be together and can take care of each other.

The days passed now mihika was in her final month and ishita was one and half month of her pregnancy .One day in evening raman entered the house and found mihika ,amma and Toshiji was chatting but ishita was missing .

R- ma where is ishq.

T( smiling )- she is in kitchen,making tea .

R- ok ,I will check her .

When he entered the kitchen he saw ishita was standng in a small stool and was trying to fetch a glass jar which was kept on top shelf .He immediately ran and picked her in his arms and put her down slowly .

R( angrily)- madrasan ,do you had a short tdrm memory loss problem due to your head injury .

Ishita made a puppy face and spoke " I just want to eat that spicy mixture but that duffer neelu has kept it in the top shelf , I m so chotu how can I reach there so I took help of this stool".

Raman smiled looking to her talking so cutely
and asked " and why don't you took amma and ma's help "

I- because they alays stop me to eat that mixute saying that it will cause acidity .

Raman smiled and dragged he to the hall and asked their motger faking anger " ma ,amma you people are chatting here and not bothered about your ishita ,just ask her that she was doing in the kitchen ."

" what was she doing" trio asked in unison .

R- she was trying to fetch that mixture jar which you people have told her not to eat and that to standing in a stool.

Trio glared ishita ,she slowly tried to hide behind raman holding her ears seeking sorry from them .Raman turned to her and make her sit there .He then went inside kitchen and poured the tea in cups ,He came out with taking tea and snacks in a tray .They all drank tea and with some light talks ,all were laughing on ishita for her childish act ,then both amma and toshiji make ishita understand that she should take care and cannot do heavy works.

I- I know everything but I forget as I wanted to eat that mixture .

R- ( teasing)- I told you na amma your daughter has become lil crazy after having injured .

Ishita glared him and walked to her room angrily .Raman followed her ,he saw her sitting in the bed with angry pout ,he went to her pulled her to him and sat her in his lap .He caress her cheeks lovingly and bent to kiss her pout ,she turned her face to other side and spoke angrily
" you called me mad "

Raman made her face him,he saw she was sobbing ,he immediately hugged her tight and asked concerned " what happened jaan ,I was just joking.

I- no raman actually you are right ,I forget about our angel and do that horrible stunt which may hurt her .how care less mother I m .

R- no jaan ,you are not careless but a very good mother ,who had safeguard her baby when her own life was in danger and I m so sorry if I hurt you .I was just joking .

Saying so he pulled for a soft kiss which slowly turned in a passionate one .Some more days passed ,Raman has to go out of station for some important meeting and mihir was alone with all the ladies .

Mihir has taken holiday for some days from office till Raman come back since mihika's date was near but suddenly some clients came from London and he has to go for an urgent meeting.

Appa has come to drop amma as daily ,he was about yo leave for office when they heard mihika shout ,all ran to her and saw mihika was I'm labour pain .ishita and toshiji were trying mihir number when appa spoke " bhabhi we don't have that much time .I m there na ,just held her upto car .They all took mihika to hospital ,where she delivered a baby boy .

Toshiji heard this and a tear dropped from her eyes ,she went to appa and spoke " I m so sorry iyer sahab for my bad behavior .I was always bad and rude yo you then also you helped me .if you were not there ,I cane think what I would have been done ,whom should I had called".

Mr iyer - why are you saying this bhabhi ,mihika is also my daughter like ishita .I had helped my own daughter not your daughter in law .

Till that time mihir and raman has also returned ,everybody smiled listening to this that at last all the differences of iyers and bhallas are sorted.Now everything become happy happy ,both families become almost one ,amma and toshiji has already become good friends as they spend whole day together now appa also become an integral part and elder of bhallas .

Days passed ,one day it was raining and raman was late today as he has a very important meeting .He returned at almost midnight ,he entered his room and found it empty .he checked in bathroom ,then in kitchen then he went to his mother,she was sleeping peacefully then he went to Mimi's room they were also sleeping .Raman got worried for ishita ,he was thinking where yo find her when he heard her giggles ,he followed the sound and saw her in backyard .she was sitting in swing and was almost drenched .He ran to her and asked concerned " ishq what are you doing here ,I was worried about you .I was searching you everywhere "

I( taking a deep breath)-Raman it was raining and I love this aroma of soil .smell it ,its smell is so soul soothing .

She said inhaling the soil which was in her hand.His eyes widened in shock seeing that her hands which were full of mud.

R(shockingly )- ishq what's this ,your hands are so dirty .

I(angrily )- huh ,its not dirty .its full of smell .

Raman bend and saw in her mouth and asked glaring " ishq had you eaten this also ".

I(pouting )- n I was just smelling it .

R- then how come its on your mouth .

I( making a cute face )- actually it was smelling too tasty ,,so I had a little just ittu saa.

R( angrily)- ishq your cravings are weird jaan ,now come to room you are fully drenched .come I will help you in changing either you will fall sick .

I- no raman now I want to dance in rain .

R- are you mad ,ishq you are seven months pregnant .it may hurt you .

I- no I will not .I know you are always there to protect me .now come on.

Saying so she dragged him in rain and both danced slowly with the rythem of raindrops .
They danced for a while then raman picked her in his arms and walked to their room.

After two months


Raman was pacing two and from outside the labour room while mihir and toshiji was smiling at his restlessness .

M- bhai come and sit .bhabhi will be alright .

R- no mihir ,she is in somuch pain how could I relax.you are saying this as you were not there on mihikas time either you would have also felt same as I m feeling .ma can I go and check ishq.

T- no puttar ,don't you dare they will shoo you .

R- achcha ( ok )

After a while they heard the cry of infant .All become happy and were waiting for baby .Nurse came out and handed neatly wrapped baby to toshiji announcing that its a baby girl.All were happy and were smiling ,but raman ran to the. Nurse who was going and asked " can I see my wife ".

N- why not but after a while ,we will shift her to room in some minutes ,you can see your wife as much as you want .

Ishita was shifted to room ,raman sat beside her as she was sleeping .He was waiting her to wake .she woke listening to the crying of baby.she asked " raman were is our baby ".

Toshiji came forward and handed the baby to ishita ,she smiled looking to the baby.Raman also sat beside her ,ishita looked at Raman and spoke,showing the infant to him " raman our angel ,our rooh ".

Both smiled together and kissed ruhis forehead.
Everybody smiled happily looking to ishra with their little rooh.He encircled his arms around his angels and held them protectively.


Teri baahon ka ghera bada mahfooz lage hai .
Badi bakhauf jagah hai ,inme hi rahna chahege.
Teri panahon mein jab tak hai jeena chahenge

Tere ho ke rahenge ,dil zid pe adha hai
Tere ho ke rahenge ,tera shauq chadha hai.

That's all friends ,I end this story here itself .Hope I had covered everything and you people like the update .Enjoying reading and do comment .don't forget to hit like buttons.
Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update di
luvd it totally
raman beat dat subbu
he deserved it
finally all sorted between d families
n rooh also arrived
thnxx 4 d pm
waiting 4 d epilogue
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
akriti154 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yippee me first
for d first tym in ur story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello friends updated new part .have a look.
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic update
ishita deliver a baby girl
and her wierd cravings😛
thnks fr pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
superb
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Pooja,
Nice ending to a beautiful story

Thanks for the pm

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