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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you Candy! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Awesome oneshot

superb..πŸ‘

Thanks for the pm


Thank you Shiny! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kavyanjali08

Sweet story... I would like to make two requests, one on the song of the movie Fitoor's 'Pashmina' and Armaan Malik's album song 'Main rahoon ya na rahoon'...


Thank you Kavya! Request taken! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

OS 14 - Inspired by Pashmina Dhaagon (Fitoor) [Requested by Kavyanjali08]

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0naSQyyZ47U)


pashmina dhaagon ke sang
koi aaj bune khwaab aise kaise
vaadi mein goonje kaheen
naye saaz ye rabaab aise kaise
pashmeena dhaagon ke sang

with the pashmina threads,
someone weaves dreams, how so..
in the valley, somewhere new instruments,
these rebabs, how so..
with pashmina threads..

As Arnav twirls his dance partner, his thoughts go back to the very first day they had met.

"You idiot! Can't you see that I'm standing in front of you?"

"Sorry! It was my mistake. But that does not give you the right to call me an Idiot!"

"There is no other name for an Idiot other than Idiot!"

"You..."

The conversation was cut off by another sweet voice.

"La!"

Arnav turns to the direction of the voice to see a beautiful girl in front of him.

"I'm so sorry that my friend insulted you!"

She quickly pulls La and starts to move away when she stops and turns around to look at Arnav befroe telling La, " There is a name for him. Arnav Singh Raizada". She smiles and walks away.

kaliyon ne badle abhi ye mizaaj
ehsaas aise kaise
palkon ne khole abhi naye raaz
jazbaat aise kaise

flower-buds have changed their moods,
feelings, how so..
eyelids have opened new secrets,
emotions, how so..

As Arnav pulls his dance partner closer to him, he remembered their second meeting.

"Excuse Me!"

"You!"

"I'm sorry ASR"

"What did you just say?"

"I'm sorry for insulting you, it happened in a fit of anger"

Arnav closes his eyes and takes a deep breath before facing La. Just then he sees her friends waiting for La two tables away. They had their eyes on the both of them and seeing the beautiful girl waiting anxiously, he immediately responds "It's okay!"

The beautiful girl lets out a huge breath and smiles at La. Seeing her face light up, Arnav felt extremely happy.


pashmina dhaagon ke sang
koi aaj bune khwaab aise kaise

As Arnav twirled his dance partner again, his thoughts were filled with the beautiful smile on the girl's face. She had captivated his heart with her smile yet she was no where in sight.

kachchi hawa, kachcha dhuaan ghul raha
kachcha sa dil lamhe naye chun raha
kachchi si dhoop, kachchi Dagar phisal rahi
koi khaDa chupke se keh raha
main saaya banoon, tere peechhe chaloon
chalta rahoon...

raw wind, raw smoke is dissolving,
the raw heart is plucking some new moments.
raw sunshine, raw path, is slipping.
and someone standing (nearby), says softly,
that I'd be your shadow, I'd walk with you,
I'd keep walking.

Arnav keeps looking around restlessly for the girl who captured his heart. If only she was here...

Just then, Arnav felt as if he heard someone whisper his name. He looks around but because of the crowd, he is unable to locate the direction the whisper came from.

It had been a while since he last saw her but she seemed to rule his mind.


pashmina dhaagon ke sang
koi aaj bune khwaab aise kaise..

As Arnav's dance partner adjusts her hair, Arnav recalls the girl's actions of tugging her fringe behind her ears. Each time he saw her do that, he would be so tempted to reach out and do it for her. If smiles could kill, he would have died hundreds of death.


shabnam ke do qatre yoon hi Tehel rahe
shaakhon pe wo moti se khel rahe
befikr se ik dooje mein khul rahe
jab hon judaa, khayaalon mein mil rahe
khayaalon mein yoon ye guftagoo chalti rahe

two dewdrops walking just like that,
playing on the branches (of trees) like pearls.
opening into each other, carefree.
and meet each other in thoughts, when they get apart.
this way, the talk keeps on going in dreams.

Arnav twirls his dance partner and moves to his right. Just then, he feels a hand hold on to his. Even without seeing her face, he knew it was her. With a big smile, he looks into her eyes and notices that her eyes conveyed the same feelings as him. Without caring that he would break the dance momentum, he quickly pulls her out and together, they go to a corner of the room.


waadi mein goonje kahin naye saaz
ye rabaab.. aise kaise
aise kaise.. aise kaise..
aise kaise.. aise kaise..

He engulfs her into a hug and she responds by tightening her grip on his collar.

"I missed you!"

"Me too!"

"I hate you for not waiting for me!"

"You know, at the end of it all, no one else can make up for you! And I'll always love you!"

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Posted: 10 years ago
This OS series will be on hold - Due to a little accident, i am unable to type with my dominant hand. Typing with the other takes a really long time and there is just no way i can write an OS like this. You can expect me to get back to this in End June or Early July.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear All,
Thank you for your patience. Here's a little update - My hand is getting better but i have been advised to not strain it. Hopefully, by end June or Early July, i should be back to writing!

Love,
Khushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifull Shot love it Tfs.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you Niranjana! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you Roshini! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanayakiDewani

Beautifull Shot love it Tfs.


Thank you! 😊

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