Since I am back, I will.
Unres.
--Drum-rolls---
In between trying and failing and then somewhat rekindling the joys of my glorious fangirling days of yore, in between snickering at how romance must always entail two impossibly good looking people cross each other's way and at least one of them being stumped beyond measure, in between getting just plain nostalgic, I was swept away by your sublime wordsmithing.
Yay, more words to add to my linguistic nest (be jotted down in some odd word file given a fancy name and then forgotten)!
Towards the plot.
So knowing your penchant for holding a reader's breath but for not too long as you tend to make shorter posts and cut it right to the crux of the matter, the heart of everything (something I seek to learn from you), I was holding my breath for a cliff hanger.
I mean you know, Archana has resed so there's going to be a second part...
But never did I expect this. This. Never. Never. And blasphemy thy name is me, my reaction was
So what happens next eh? Is this supposed to be a lighthearted happy story? If so I can't imagine in which universe Arnav's asli duniya being Sheetal and not Khushi is lighthearted and happy. And if Arnav and Khushi are going to find their Khushi Khushi hamesha, I can't see how breaking and trampling over Sheetal's (always busy sambhaling Arnav) dil will be lighthearted and happy?
The first part sure sets the mood as fun and happy, see I am still giggling. I am curious as to how this pans out.
Edited by cineraria - 9 years ago
Shiv Shakti
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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