Swasan OS - A Moment of Our Own

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Folks🤗🤗
An OS on swasan..I just wished we got more of swasan in fridays Epi .This is result of my active imagination after that scene ..Like I say I am not good with words but just wanted to give it a try
please ignore typos

Here we go😛 continued from friday scene
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With the sound of washroom door Sanskaar looked up and found Swara ..Looking simple yet breathtakingly beautiful in that white kurta and pyjama their eyes met momentarily and lil smile broke on their faces . As she moves towards him, getting up from bed, looking at her ,he notices hers eye still puffed obviously from the amount of tears that had been flowing out from those beautiful big eyes, but now the redness considerably gone down, all she needs is a good peaceful sleep but with turn of events he doubt if that would be possible knowing swara how the turn of events would have effected her

San ; So jaan feeling better

Swara nods her head yes and says ; sanskaar, you too get changed

Sanskaar ; why not ? but since now you are here ,(circling her shoulders with his arms )can I ask my darling wife to pull out some night clothes for me from the cupboard

With a simple smile she moves towards cupboard wondering..if its still the same..she remembers sorting them out once, when she was about to leave to baadi after laksh suicide drama but after that so much happed..kavita came into the picture,

what if she made some changes or?

With lots of thoughts running in her mind she opens the cupboard only to her surprise to find everything in its place like she arranged

Unable to contain her surprise she turns back saying "Nothing changed sanskaar"

Sanskaar ; And it would never change swara (he moves closer to her) Nothing in this world can change my love for you ever..and about the changes being the same..that was the first time I felt you were jatofying your haq on me , telling me what to do what not to .like a typical wife though not intended . I knew you didn't love at that time but that moment was special for me..very special and I would love to treasure every moment of mine with you jaan

Swara ; (overwhelmed ) y do u love me so much sanskaar

San; hmm I think I answered that before sweet heart but let me put it this way I cant live without loving you ..no no now pls don't get emotional ok and can you give my night wear unless you want me sleep with this gestures at his clothes

Swara smilng pulls out a pair ; here you go

San; gives a simple stroke on her nose saying BRB and rushes into wash room

Swara arranging the bed lost in her thoughts thinking what did she do to deserve this kind of pure undying love and someone like sanskaar, she cant ask for more ..she truns to look at him who walked out of wasroom wiping his face with some drops of water tripping down from his hair, doesn't he look dashing in blue infact every colour suits him , he can make even most biazzre colours look good on him

Comes back into this world with his words; hello madam kaha khogaye.aap?

swara ; kuch nahi ..she picks up the milk glass chalo ab dhood peelo

San ; abhi?mujhe nahi peena..

swara ; acha ji..aisa kuch nahi chalega you also have to drink

san nodding his head no starts running away from there

swara ; sanskaar dnt act like a kid all this is not going work near me ..come here..right now..

Like an obident student he comes near her swara hands him over the glass and says now

sanskaar ; maine iska badla jaroor lunga mrs sanskaar maheswari he empties the glass looks at her her saying khush ?

Swara; hmm that likes a good boy , notices the milky moustache above his lips

Swara ; tumbhi na sanskaar ,she slowly wipes of milk mooch on top of his lips with her finger tips accidently brushing over his lips completely oblivious of the effect she is having on him .. she meets his eyes and they freeze at that moment, she could feel her cheeks turning red under his intense gaze, She continues to slowly brush his upper lip not breaking the eye lock and takes her hands off

Lost in each other eyes , cool breeze trickling down sending a chill over the body , making few strands of hair falling on her face .He slowly raises his hand to brush them off her face and tucking them behind her ear ..his hand still resting on her cheek..his other hand moves to the other cheek cupping her face..swara closes her eyes as he pulls her face closer to his..only to feel his lips on her forehead lingering for few seconds and few more..all she could feel was only love

sanskaar being the first one to break the moment saying ; Its already late and you must be very tired ..lets go for sleep ...you sleep on bed and I sleep on couch..leaving confused swara behind ,goes to bed to pick cushions..

Swara tries to protest ; lekin kyu

sanskaar ; Simple sweet heart..I Don't trust, that I would be safe from you if I sleep next to you (only to get hit by cushion from his wife) ; thanks for this Points at cushion ..I may have to break the promise we made few minutes ago esp with the expectations you have swara ,it would be even more tough

swara ; what do you mean?

sankaar ; you were expecting a kiss

swara ; I got the kiss

sanskaar ; (with a glint of naughtiness) ; not on forehead

swara sulks a bit ; of course she was expecting him to kiss her lips ..but her husband afterall is sanskaar😆😆 ..and may be he is right

San; see I told you ..god save me from you ,Can I have one more cushion please ..gets hit by an another and next with a blanket swara saying ; congrts mr sasnkaar maheswari .your virtue will be now safe and gud night turns her back on to him pulls up the blanket and sleeps

Sanksaar smiles at her antics arranges the cushions on the couch ..rests on couch with his eyes on her..teasing her is fun . he cant brush off the tempestuous feeling that he had when her soft fingers were running over his lips,how he was tempted to kiss her with her face very close to his but never mind they have more important things to deal with. They are bound by heart and now in scared bond of marriage,all he wanted was to divert her mind out of all that happened at baadi ,looks like he succeeded a bit , only if he could hold her tight and take that pain off

Just like she sensed his words she turns to his side and meets his eyes ,silence for few seconds she slowly gets up and comes near couch

Sanskaar gets up from the couch saying; kya hua swara?

Swara ; (pointing at couch,) mujhe yaha sona hain

Sasnkaar ; couch par??..you will not be comfortable swara

Swara ;Offo sanskaar ..muhjhe tumhare pass rehna hain, bahut paas ( pushes him on to couch) and for godsakes sanskaar now pls don't say ki tum mere upar ho swara..beacuse ab main tumhare upar chadnewaali hoon ..aur sirf aaj nahi ..har roz samjhe

Sasnkaar breaks out smiling opens his arms ,with eyes gesturing her to come. Swara breaks out into a smile, jumps on to him ,only to be circled in his tight embrace sanskaar slowly adjust himself on couch with swara in his arms ,making their position comfortable, her face lying on his chest listening his steady heart beat

Sanskaar ; swara

Swara ; hmm

San ; tum na chocolates khaana thod kam karo ..warna moti hojavoge aur main tumhe uta nahi pavunga only to earn few shots from her😆

Swara ; lifts her face up getting into her usual playful mood ; tumhe bhi khilavingu taaki tum bhi mote hojaavo aur mujhe utalo..smajhe mr maheswari

Sanskaar ; yes mrs maheswari

Swara lying back on his chest; sanskaar jab tum mere saath ho ..no pain can touch me,hold me like this always ..🤗

He tightens his grip on her ; forever and infinity jaan

She lets her self slip into peaceful sleep in his arms murmuring ..I love you sanskaar she could sense his lips on her hair and could haer him saying I love u too swara before he himself slips into deep sleep with his entire world in his arms loosing themselves into blissful moment of their own

From next day the sleep arrangements were shifted to bed 😉

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Thanks for taking out time and reading ..like, dislike eggs and tomatoes all are welcome😆😆 please do leave a comment

Lucky

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BarkhaSingh123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww such a nice os thanks for writting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very sweet OS!
Do write more like these..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os indeed...superbly written :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww it was damn cute ❤️❤️
loved it ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Lucky!🤗
Hmmm... Even I wanted a scene after Swara comes out of the washroom. My mind was continously thinking where did SwaSan sleep!!😉

Sanskar's each and everything at the place where Swaa left it. It indeed was overwhelming. An awww moment!!😳

Then Sanskar running away ftom milk!! Just the way I used to run in the whole house when I was small!! So cute!!😆

Swara's fingers brushing past Sanskar's upper lip!! Poor guy.. it must have took him so much to control. Then their eyes met!! Their eyrlocks are always magical.. Swara was not the only one who wanted that Sanskar kisses Swara on her lips.. *I am so besharam*😃

But our Sanskar.. he's so Sanskaari!! I wonder when would the day come when he becomes the Asanskari Sanskar we all wanna see... And he was going to sleep on couch! Ghor paap!!

But no fear when Swara is there!! Sanskar lies in Sanskar's name only but his better half is very asanskari!!😃

Swara and Sanskar on one couch!!☺️ That's even better than the bed!! Finally I got some peace in my mind!! 😛

Very well written!👏 PM me if you write anything else!

Love
Saumya😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What we're saying that you weren't good with your words...
YAAR that was beautiful they should do this in the show
I would be over the moon if this happens

Haiii you had me blushing remembering the "Swara tum meri upar ho" scene


Zainab
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aawww! So nice n cute. Monday ke episode mein kuch esa dikhade
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww it was so so 🤗
wish the same or something similar would happen in the show
each and every scene in the OS is so simple and sweet
like how sanskar asked swara to give him his night wears
how swara see's that nothing, nothing is changed
swasan's awesome romance and the kiss "though me too expecting like swara a kiss on lips"😉 oh well but our sanskar is afterall sanskar😆
and then how easily he changed the atmosphere from intense too humorous
him sleeping on couch again😲 ahhaa but our swara is not at all sanskari like her hubby oh thank god for that😳... how she says im sleeping with you and that's final swasan sleeping on the cpuch is so much better than swasan sleeping on the bed☺️

can we get anything, something like that on the show please😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys
Thanks a lot for all likes and comments🤗 means a lot

Will post individual replies tomorrow by eod..please bear with me as I need to rush to sleep,its already past 11 here if not my boss catching me sleeping in office not definitely a good sight😆 to imagine

Lucky

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