FF || Shadow Of The Past || (Part 1-Page 11)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello friends.. A random thought came in my mind, so just sharing it with you. I hope you will like it.



Shadow Of The Past

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Teaser



Ishita was about to cut her veins when Raman pulled her hand back to stop her from doing this. "Have u gone mad? What are u doing?" He yelled on her but she didn't paid any attention to him.

She only said - I can't live with this scandal. I want to die." saying this age was again going to cut her hand when Raman forcefully snatched the knife from her hand and slapped, she fall on the bed. She started crying clutching the bedsheets tightly. Raman felt bad seeing her in such pain, he wanted to sooth her pain.

Raman - Ishita?" He placed his hand on her arm. Realizing his presence in the room, she shrugged off the hand from her arm and went to the corner horrified.

Ishita - No. Don't!! Don't touch me.

Raman took the sit beside her, though far away from her. He said - Ishita.. Relax!! Calm down. U know what.. The weak commit suicide, and u aren't the one, as u are never cared for your life, in your fight for justice. You remember you were the girl who stood against that criminals. You tried to give her justice. Now how can you break so easily? Ishita!! You have to be strong, you have to punish them. I am with you, you don't have to get scared from anyone. Please Ishita.. Stand up against them. I want that old Ishita for the sake of giving a lesson to the justice." He looked at her emotionless face, he continued - You remember you were the girl who were with that old parents whom their kids throw out from their own house, you stood against them in providing justice to the victim and getting the culprits punished. I know, I shall not tell you what to do, as in the end, it only matters what you wants, and you know!! Once you starts walking towards the light of hope and justice, all the darkness around you shall itself vanish that you are drowning in right now. And trust me!! I am with you, I will help you to get the justice.

She looked at him for a second and again turned her face another side saying - I don't want to punish anyone. I don't want to face this world. Please. You go. Please..

Saying this she buried her face under her arms which were around her knees.

Raman - Fine Ishita. I will not force you. But think once what I have told you.

Saying this Raman left the room, leaving crying Ishita...

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Something new tried. I don't know how far I will take this but definitely will try to make it as per your expectations.. Please don't forget to drop your comments.

You can suggest anything related to this story as I think you all already get to know what this story resolves...

Edited by Aditi.KPFAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's very very nice concept
please continue it

and title can be shadow of past
or justice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really Interesting
Continue Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kras

it's very very nice concept

please continue it

and title can be shadow of past
or justice

Thank you so much dear. And thanks for the suggestion, I even liked the name Justice, let's see what other suggests..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I lyk shadow of d past ...
I really liked ur concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: agm1998

I lyk shadow of d past ...

I really liked ur concept

Thank u so much dear for the suggestion and comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice teaser
update soon
I think justice is good
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaya1867

Nice teaser

update soon
I think justice is good

Thank u. I will update soon. Thanks for the suggestion
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting n nice concept..
Cont soon..!
Justice title would b right acc to me

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