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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Roohachu

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nice teaser Yaar
Something new.
What happened to Ishita?
Waiting for the update
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Thank u, this will reveal later so keep reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Interesting... plzzz do update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Nice concept
I think tittle should be ''shadow of past"
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Title should be Shadow of the past.
The teaser was really teasing one.. why was she trying to kill herself??
Interesting and something new concept.
Waiting for update.
Plz pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ishrakidivani

Nice concept
I think tittle should be ''shadow of past"

Thanks for the suggestion
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SRKP_FAN

Title should be Shadow of the past.
The teaser was really teasing one.. why was she trying to kill herself??
Interesting and something new concept.
Waiting for update.
Plz pm me.

Please wait for story unfold.. you will get to know everything...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Teaser.😊
Raman saved Ishiat when she committed Suicide,it was so Interesting.😊
What Happened to her? Why she wanted to die?
Waiting for it,Please Update soon.😊
I likes Shadow of the Past Title.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

Please stay with it, u will get to know. Thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ishradeewani

NICE ONE YAAR CONTINUE😊

Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Finally, it's decided, the title is 'Shadow Of The Past ' Thank you so much guys for the suggestion. Here goes the part.

Part 1

Inside court room,

All the lawyers were discussing over their cases when the judge walked in, everyone stood up to greet him. The judge took his sit and said "Please start the case."

"Your honor!! It's heights of irresponsibility. How can we start the case when the prosecutor lawyer isn't present in the court room." A lady said while getting up from her sit.

"Where is prosecutor lawyer Mr. Raman Bhalla??" The judge asked.

Pathak - I'm sorry your honor. Raman sir is on his way. Please wait for ten minutes, he will be here anytime.

"Your honor, why should we waste time here? I have already proved that girl was guilty. She accused my clients, they aren't guilty. So, please. I request to the court to declare my clients aren't guilty and free them from this case." The lady said.

Pathak - I'm sorry your honor, but I request you to wait for few minutes.

Judge - I will wait only ten minutes. If he won't come in this time then...

"You don't need to do anything your honor." They heard a husky voice, everyone turned at the door, he was standing there, his head was bleeding. Pathak went to him - Bhai... Where were you...

But Raman stopped him and asked - Is her family and she arrived?

Pathak - No Bhai.

Raman - Okay.

Raman walked in and apologized - Your honor.. I am sorry for being late but someone deliberately tried to stop me from reaching here, and I think you can guess it how I was being stopped...

"Mr. Bhalla this case isn't about you. So, can we start the case? By the way I don't think you have any proof against my clients, so I think..." But before she could say further..

He said - Proof?? Yes Ms. Nidhi. I have proof. Your honor, my client is much stable than before and yesterday I had talked with her doctors and ask the management to bring her here, even I had talked with her, and she said she will open her mouth against them.

Judge - Then where is she?

Raman - Your honor I need only 15 minutes, I think they are on their way.

The judge agreed and Raman took his sit. Everyone waiting for them to arrive. Sometimes Nidhi said against them but every time somehow Raman managed the situation. It was more than 30 minutes, but there was not any sign of them, Raman was continuously trying her family members but unfortunately it was out of reach when suddenly Raman got a call...

"Hello!!... What??... Okay!!..." He hang up the call and looked down disappointed.. He once faced Nidhi who was smirking...

Judge - What happen Mr.Bhalla?? Where's the victim??

Raman stood up from the chair and replied with low eyes - I'm sorry your honor... But she can't be here anymore.. She.. She has committed suicide!!!

Nidhi - Your honor!! Now everything is cleared like crystal.. It was all her plan to trap my clients Mr. Ashok Khanna, Mr. Suraj Khanna... They are well respected business tycoons and she had trapped them for money. And now when she herself trapped in her own plan, she had committed suicide, it's simple!!!

Raman sit back on his chair, when Nidhi looked at him and said - Now if my prosecutor lawyer has nothing to say then your honor please declare the statement.

Judge - Mr. Raman do you have anything to say?

Raman - No. Your honor..

Judge - According to the proofs, it proves that Mr. Ashok Khanna and Mr. Suraj Khanna weren't in the city on that night, so the court consider them as innocent, from now they are free...

The judge signed the papers when Raman looked at Ashok and Suraj angrily, they smiled happily. After the judge left the room, Raman angrily threw all the files on the floor frustrated..


Raman - How can she committed suicide? I assured that I will give her justice then...

Nidhi walked to him and said - It's all about fate Mr. Raman.. But feeling very sad for you that for the first time in your career, you lose the case.. Isn't something indigestible for you?? Ohh!! I am so stupid.. Of course it is..

Raman angrily glared at her and replied - Be happy how much you want.. But if I ever get any proof against them, I will definitely reopen the case. And it's your good time that you win the case but fate changes.. One day, we will stand face to face again and that day I will show you and your so called clients, their places. Mark my words!!!

Saying this Raman left the place angrily.

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Raman was sitting at the bar counter, he had ordered whisky for himself, he was quite drunk, it was hard for him to accept the defeat. He was continuously drinking and remembered how much he motivated her family.

Suddenly, his eyes caught a girl, she was wearing a knee length sleeveless, backless dress, her milky bare back was visible to everyone that some guys were looking at her lustful, but she ignored. Her hair was tied in a stylish way, she had put black eye shadow that made her eyes smokey and the red lips made her look sensuous. Seeing everyone's gaze on her, Raman felt disgusted towards the girl. The girls herself called their problem...

The girl took the wine bottle and gulped few sips and started dancing in a seductive way...

Aaj dikhade mujhe love karke..
Oh baby baahon mein bharke..
Oh jo bhi sohca sapnon mein..
Woh aaj dikhade mujhe sab karke...

Some more dancers join her on the stage...

Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera..
Tu hi meri raaton ka nasha..
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera..
Soya huaa jisam jagaa..


She danced with the guys in a seductive way, Raman was watching her from her, sometimes the guys threw money on her, placed their hand on her body which made her uncomfortable that was completely visible in her eyes and didn't unnoticed by Raman, for a moment their eyes met, the girl turned her gaze...

Raman too turned at the bar counter when he felt two arms around her neck, he looked side way and found that girl so close to him..

Sardi mein garmi hai..
Poori besharmi hai..
Jaanam jaayaz jo..
Humne woh..
Ghalati ki hai..

Raman shrugged off her hands and get up from his chair and was going to leave when held his hand, he turned... She came close to his face and trailed her finger tip on his forehead to cheek..

Please dikhade tu gazab karke..
Labon ke paas lab karke..
Socha hai jo bhi sapno mein..
Woh aaj dikhade mujhe sab karke..

She pushed him and went on the stage with the other dancers..

Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera..
Tuhi meri raaton ka nasha..
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera..
Soya hua jisam jaga..

Raman left the place giving her a disgusting look. After the dance, all the girls went inside. The girl went to changing room when the manager called - MS. Iyer..

She turned at him with a smile on her face, the manager walked to her and handed her the money.

Ishita - Thank you sir.

"I told you, not to call me sir.." He said.

Ishita - I am sorry Subbu..

Subbu - Ishita!! To be honest, I really don't want you to work here. I have seen you getting uncomfortable. Why did you working here? If you want I will help you to finding other jobs.

Ishita - Thank you Subbu. But to get other jobs, I need qualifications, which I don't have. And you know about my family problem. They don't share the problem but I know about their financial problems and moreover akka's case...

Subbu - Oh yes!! What about the case? Did she get justice, today was a hearing no?

Ishita - Yes. But I don't know what has happened.. I couldn't able to attend the case and amma appa didn't inform me anything yet. But you know I have full faith on God, you know the lawyer who is handling akka's case, is one of the biggest criminal lawyer, he promised to give her justice.


Subbu nodded and replied - Everything will be fine soon. Anyway come!!.. I will drop you at your place.

Ishita - No. It's okay. I will go. Thank you.

Saying this Ishita went inside the changing room. After getting change into her casual dress, she left.. She was walking from the bar when some guys teased her calling bar dancer, but she didn't mind as she was habituate with it.

Ishita walked out from the bar and waited for some auto to reach but there wasn't any sign of any auto when suddenly she saw some drunk guys walked out from the bar, she composed herself and avoid them. But the guys recognized her, and went to her.

"Arey!! Isn't that dancer? What are you doing alone honey? Come.. We will give you company." A guy said while pulling her hand.

Ishita pulled her hand back saying - Mind your own business!!

Saying this she started walking on that deserted road and the guys followed her.

"Baby come.. We will give you enough money, just satisfy us for a night." One of them said holding her dupatta. Ishita stopped when the guys blocked her ways.

Ishita - Please!! Let me go.. What are you doing?

"We want you baby." Saying this a guy was going to touch was when Ishita pushed him hard and ran away, they stated following her.

Ishita was looking all around for a help, but there wasn't any sign of anyone when suddenly she hit with someone and was going to fall so she closed her eyes getting terrified but she felt a strong arm around her waist.

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Please drop your comments. It means a lot for me. Whatever it is good or bad, please share your review.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Good start
So vandu committed suicide
Ashok and suraj raped her
But frankly I don't like it
U made ishita a bar dancer
Its too much too handle
I know I shouldn't write this
But to be honest
Ishita as bar dancer is something indigestible
And her song
It was so vulgar
Sorry if I down ur morale but can't lie

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