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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Avidreader1997

Hi everyone!i am a newbie here,but have been reading software symphonies since a very long time.Its one of the best i have ever read..I especially love our lead couple's fightšŸ˜†and of course their make up😳

i love the recent post partum track.
Nisha!thank u so much for providing such a master piece to me.
I have taken inspiration from you and started writing!
Please continue giving the daily doses😃


U r most welcome here
Yes Sosy is lime addiction
And inspiration also to many
We come to know many things which we otherwise neglect or don't bother
This is the power of the writer
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Let's make waiting hilarious šŸ˜†

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonalgupta2004


U r most welcome here
Yes Sosy is lime addiction


And inspiration also to many
We come to know many things which we otherwise neglect or don't bother
This is the power of the writer

Thanks for the welcome😃and I completely agree with you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Blas

The day she arrived, I was ecstatic

She seemed perfect in every way an angel sent my way

The stars that evening seemed smiling as they peeped from behind curtains to catch a glimpse of us

Next morn flowers bloomed in haste to welcome her into this world

My Partner in silent ways god gave to this world

My nomadic mode I wanted to dispense with

My warrior Princess was restless and seemed irritable

The extent of her PP blues we initially were clueless

As days progressed it began to unfold

We had coaxed and coerced the Iyers to send her home

I was nonchalant in my dues and obsessed over the wonder kid in hand

Isolated and unloved my Princess had been my callous attitude worsening her plight

One look at her I knew things were amiss and was blasted at length by the DAD

In time we sensed her insecurities a blue print for future response code I drew

Wary and caring i am of them as i cocooned her in my arms

Her solace my obligation as her knight on guard

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: moonwearer

http://www.thelotpot.com/?p=5368



RaGa. Seems your ragas are never ending.
Good one SVM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: PriteeMisra



RaGa. Seems your ragas are never ending.
Good one SVM.



Hey Pritee!!
Sri šŸ‘šŸ¼
RG ... never ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: blue5sky



Hey Pritee!!
Sri šŸ‘šŸ¼
RG ... never ending


Good morning everyone!!
Haha he will never be able to speak a proper line!!
This one was hilarious..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Prescriptions...

Sam stayed up almost half the night chatting about II's work, telling Tan's cousin's wife
all her accomplishments at work and her ambitions
R&B didnt come asking for the baby, neither did Ranjan, she didnt notice that actually

She held Nivi as she slept in her arms

"We are so so so lucky we have u as family and now you gave us this lil shiny gem" Sam whispered, kissing Nivi's forehead.

Makarand and Manya went home to Malcha Marg, despite Sam's invitation to stay the night

Her in laws were coming the following weekend, she wanted to make the most of her Bhalla interaction

The cousin asked Sam if "Manya was serious"

Sam refused to say anything... choosing to squirm instead

Rich or poor... it didnt matter... familes were gossipy

Tan Ranjan, the cousin and R&B hung out in the patio, when it got too muggy they went in

Talked about work, the stock market, the prospects for the Indian economy etc

Ranjan was quite akward when Makarand proceeded to head to MM with Manya

R&B didnt bat an eyelid

Tan sent him off cheerfully

Ranjan worried what Tan's cousin was thinking, he belonged to the 1950s such things bothered him a lot, but Manya didnt care for anything anymore

He wasnt even sure if Makarand was 'the one"
He hoped he was, she was being deliberately dense asnwering Qs about the guy

Ranjan liked Makarand, simple, down to earth and middle class

He didnt wonder like Manya did about II's motives "Is he putting on an act to impress Manya?"

He would be a welcome addition to the family, it would be the fertilizer Manya needed in order to plant roots and grow

But who would tell her?

Ranjan had tried to approach the topic in the kitchen earlier today with Sam

"Aap kahiye Dad, MAIN nahi kahoongi..." Sam had shot him down

"Teri MIL aa rahi hain agle hafte, kya sochengi?"


"Agar main MIL ki har baat ko apne sar par le loon to mujhe" Sam went quiet

Her MIL believed Ranjan was a slimeball, the things she said about Ranjan believing Sam wasnt
within ear shot werent too complimentary, Manya was most likely receving a more tame report card from her MIL

"Woh har baat par Sanjeev ki yaad dilaati hai mujhe, ham sabko R&B ki tarah ho jaana chahiye" Sam said cynically

"Kyon?" Ranjan asked frustrated

"Woh kuch poochhta nahi, Manny ko kuch nahi kehta"

"Woh kya kahega... aadha angrej banke baitha hai... poochhe woh jo... (pausing) apne se 5 saal badi ladki ke saath 5 saal raha...
agar Ishita na mili hoti yoon hi bhatak raha hota" Ranjan reminded choking up



"HUMNE force kiya Manny ko Sanjeev se shaadi karo... Sanjeev achha hai..." Sam was disgusted

"MA ne force kiya" Ranjan reminded

Sam was startled "JO BHI Dad... lekin hua kya?"

"Ma na guzri hoti, inne galt kaam nahi kardi Manya" Ranjan accused

"Ma na guzri hoti to" Sam paused

they both went quiet

"Ph D ho chuka ab... bas jee bas... laut aaye" Ranjan mumbled... clearing his throat

Sam grunted... the truth was, she was troubled too... but kept quiet mostly

She was walking on R&B's footsteps, Vik, Makarand.. who knows in 6 months it could be someone else

"Chache ne poochyea see, Meerut kede waaste gaye ne" (why did they go)


"Unki bahu jahan jaati hai shooting ke liye hum poochhte hain kya?" Sam was hurt, insulted and tearful

"WOH SHAADI SHUDA HAI" Sam hissed

"Kis kis naal ladega mainnu das" Ranjan whispered

"I dont even care for them... ladna to door ki baat hai" Sam cursed

"Maine kaha hai Harish nu, aayengi Chachi" Ranjan was JUST UNWILLING to give up on his bro's family
Sam looked at the man... "WHAT was it that caused parents to be so forgiving and compassionate, what was it that made them so conciliatory

She imagined herself at 65, Lasya brainwashing her against R&B or against Manya... she cringed at the thought

Bent her head ashamed...

The hurt and humilation she felt at Chachi's words hurt too
But realization that she was the instigator in separating Ranjan from his only sibling was no matter of pride.


"Baat kar beta... jara... khabar le , mainnu das kee kaindi hai... ladka South indian hai... mainnu changa lageya" Ranjan praised Makarand

sam nodded reluctantly



"Bas ek uski aulad dekh loon tey wahe guru di jo marji" Ranjan was barely able to speak now

Sam cried too imagining a day when they would be left with no parents
She concluded she will for once listen to Ranjan on Manya's situation



Ranjan yawned

"Dad stay the night here" Tan ordered

He shook his head

Tan called the help anda sked Ranjan to be escorted to the ground floor guest bedroom


The cousin had a question about Sales Tax on automobiles, he stopped him for a second


"Doc ne kya kaha hai?" Tan asked R&B

"On what?" R&B asked

Tan winked

"6 weeks" R&B half smiled

"U can make out right?" Tan reminded

R&B cackled at the sex advice

"Dekh boss... I get busy starting the 4th week so by 6, she is so worn out fighting she gives in" Tan laughed out loud


"TMI" R&B muttered


"U know u are wiser" Tan nodded smugly


"Its a good idea either way" Tan was somber


"Umm" R&B nodded

"she probably thinks u are disgusted by her" Tan said softly

R&B cackled again to deny that statement, but he got the drift...

"Lasya waise soney nahi deti, beta aaj main teri angel ko sambhalta hoon, get started dude" Tan coaxed

"Really?" R&B muttered

"I have a call at 4 AM, we are doing a India startup Summit later in May" he explained

"Abhi 4 bajne mein bahut time hai boss" Tan winked


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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Hey Nisha!
So Glad i caught this with my lunch 😊 more family time .. Loving it!
Edited by blue5sky - 9 years ago

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