OS: The Painful Pleasure *Mature*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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--Mature readers only--

(EXTREMELY MATURE)

*Note: I was hesitant in writing this..never have I written a story before so this is a first, in hope that you guys enjoy it..if not then criticism welcomed, this may be utter rubbish but hey ho I tried*


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Twinkle awoke with multiple aches and pains throughout her entire body..this is the weakest she had ever felt, coming to her senses and masking her surroundings, her eyes laid on Kunj..standing in front of the dresser with his back facing towards her

A gasp transpired out of Twinkle and was horrified of what she saw on his back..she ran out of bed towards Kunj and enveloped herself with him from the back..Kunj felt her wet tears against his skin, her touch made Kunj wince in pain..Twinkle was in physical pain but the pain she had inflicted on Kunj from last night stabbed her heart, mind and soul

*8 hours ago*

"Why Kunj, why?" twinkle cried whilst burrowing herself into his chest

Kunj felt her pain, he knew Yuvi's words had hurt her so much, the Yuvi she once thought she loved..today the same Twinkle was disgusted of ever having an alliance with him

"Enough Twinkle, I can't..please try to understand" Kunj stated, tearing away Twinkle from his chest

Kunj wanted her..his body would engulf in spasms whenever he was close to her, but he couldn't bring himself being close to her when she was in such a vulnerable state..the angst filled screams Twinkle would cry herself to sleep at night ripped his heart into pieces

*Flashback*

"Every time you touch MY Twinkle, I will inflict pain on the person whom she cares most for..Mahi" hissed Yuvi

"How dare you utter my wife's name out of your filthy mouth, she was never yours and never will be yours..she rightfully belongs to ME and ONLY ME" retorted Kunj "If you even raise your eyes on her then I promise you will regret mightily"

"Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock..times running out Kunj, make your choice, continue playing Romeo to Juliet or be ready to see Juliet die a slow painful death by destroying her happiness"

Kunj had never begged in his life, but when it came to doing it for his Twinkle..he would do it over and over again just for her.." Please Yuvi, I beg you don't do this to her..fine, I promise I will not touch Twinkle if you promise to leave Mahi in peace"

Yuvi's jealousy of seeing Kunj and Twinkle slowly falling in love with each other knew no bounds..his rage made him lash out onto her sister Mahi, every hug, every kiss, every touch Kunj and Twinkle shared made him boil, and the only way to make Twinkle hate Kunj was blackmailing him against the person Twinkle loves the most..Mahi

Kunj falls weak when it comes to Twinkle, he only cared for her and her protection..but he also knew that if he didn't listen to Yuvi then he would destroy Mahi, Twinkle would die if she saw Mahi in pain and he would never want to see such a vulnerable Twinkle opened in front of him

Twinkle was unaware of Kunj's conversation with Yuvi and Kunj could never tell her, his Twinkle would hurt herself before her enemy could do anything to her sister, and if Twinkle was hurting then Kunj would die a thousand deaths with each tear she cries..he promised himself to never let Twinkle be known to Yuvi's evil intentions

Yuvi did not stop at instigating Kunj..he had to play with Twinkle too

"Alisha is his first love, you are just his forceful responsibility, he doesn't love you..him being close to you is an act of a dutiful husband, he still loves Alisha" sniggered Yuvi "Why do you think your husband has not touched you intimately even after being married for 6 months"?

"That's not true..Kunj loves me, I will prove it to you" said a hesitant Twinkle

"Baby, nobody loves me more than you..come to me, I will provide you with the happiness that your loser husband has not fulfilled till today".." Come on Twinkle baby, your Yuvi still loves you and is ready to welcome you even after the pain you have given me" smirked Yuvi

-SLAP-

Twinkle walked away in disgust..but little did she know that Yuvi won in harbouring suspicions in Twinkles mind

Kunj who had witnessed all this happening was in a rage..he could kill Yuvi on the spot for even laying a finger on his Twinkle, but Kunj controlled himself, he knew he had to disdain from exposure and beat Yuvi at his own game..with this Kunj knew exactly what had to be done to vanish the storm Yuvi from his and Twinkle's life

*End of flashback*


Twinkle too wanted him, her body would squirm at night in anticipation..her body needed him, Yuvi's words kept resounding in her mind

*Kunj doesn't love you, he still loves Alisha*
*Kunj will NEVER touch you*
*Your not worthy of Kunj*

Is Yuvi right, does Kunj really not look at me or feel for me in that way?..no..no Kunj loves me, I have to prove Yuvi wrong

"I know why you don't want to come close to me, touch me, pleasure me..it's because you STILL love Alisha" roared Twinkle

Kunj could not see Twinkle in pain, he engulfed her into a tight hug

"Twinkle you know that's not true" remarked Kunj and gripped Twinkle intensely by her upper arms

"Then prove it..make me yours tonight, or walk away and I will get my answer" Twinkle stated in a lifeless tone

In the heat of the moment nothing mattered, not Yuvi..not Mahi nor anyone..it was just Twinkle

Her happiness
Her needs
Her love

He would do anything to stop her tears..even if it meant breaking his promise and making Yuvi win

"Twinkle..."

He joint his lips with hers..a kiss of want and need, he looked at her, not wanting to scare her but she blinked slowly and he understood her signal to continue..he bit on her lower lip, igniting a moan from Twinkle, she let him in..Kunj and Twinkle explored each other with their tongues, he could sense a nervousness and hesitation in her, he broke away from her, he did not want to rush her into anything, Kunj knew this was an unexplored area for her and he would take each step slowly with her, Twinkle was sensitive and fragile and he wanted to make her first time really special for her and an experience to cherish

He picked her up in his strong arms and carried her to the bed, he laid her down gently, twinkle clung onto him, she was scared of being intimate with Kunj because she was unaware of what to expect, but she did not want Kunj to sense this, she wanted him and in return she would provide him the pleasure he deserves even if she had to endure a little bit of pain

Kunj tore away every piece of clothing that was touching her body..she laid exposed for his eyes to devour every inch of her perfectly crafted curves..twinkle closed her eyes in anticipation, she felt his hot breath on her face..Kunj laid a series of lingering kisses on her eyes, nose, ears, cheeks and neck..his kisses became hungrier and deeper, Kunj became harder with her every moan and she was getting wetter and wetter with his each touch, the further Kunj travelled down the more she would arch her back into him, she was losing her senses, her grip became tighter on to the bed sheet, Kunj nibbled onto her nipples..sucking onto them until they were hard, Twinkle was spiralling out of control..she was ready for his length to be placed inside her

Kunj knew she was ready but he wanted to tease her a little longer, he wanted to make sure she was lubricated enough just so that when he entered her it would not be painful..his kissing and sucking travelled down to her navel..he could feel her starting to orgasm partially, her abdomen was rising up and down from the ecstasy that was creating a havoc throughout her entire body..she was on the edge of release, Kunj lowered himself between her legs, he pulled her region into his mouth, he stared teasing her by kissing the skin around her vagina, she was pushing her wetness towards him, he couldn't tease her any longer and sucked onto her until she orgasmed profusely..she was writhing against him..clutching onto his hair..the sensation Twinkle was feeling was making her tip out of control

Kunj let her catch her breath..he went back up to her and whispered "Twinkle are you sure you are ready".."I don't want to hurt you"..she nodded in approval, he laid on top of her and began to enter her swiftly, she winced in pain and he stopped, giving her time to adjust..she manoeuvred her hands down directing his length inside her, once his length was in, he allowed her time to get used to the foreign organ inside her..she felt spasms of pain as he rightfully claimed her hymen..the pain exhilarated and she bit into Kunj's shoulder making him bleed, as he began to rock up and down she dug her nails into his back exposing raw flesh as a result

"Are you okay Twinkle" said a breathless Kunj

He knew she was in pain..he hated seeing her like this, his heart cried seeing Twinkle in pain when losing her virginity, the pain she was giving him from her bites and nail digging was nothing in comparison to what she was going through, he wished the pain upon himself and to relieve Twinkle of the pain

Twinkle urged him to go deeper and faster..he wanted to give it to her so badly but he knew he had to be careful, she wrapped her legs around his back to ease herself, she felt the release of pleasure with each stroke Kunj was providing her with, Kunj made Twinkle lay on top of him to give him a better access and make her reach her climax, both were at the edge, they could feel the intertwining of sexual fluids and with one last stroke Kunj shot his fluid into her whilst she reached her climax

Kunj stayed in her as he did not want to pull out of her making her feel uncomfortable, he laid back on top of her, their breathing starting to calm down, sweat making their bodies stick to each other and their embrace keeping them connected

"I'm so sorry Twinkle".."I wasn't to rough was I".."please give me the pain I have given you"

"K-u-n-j"..he understood she was too weak and fragile to speak

He planted her lips with a kiss and soon Twinkle drifted off to sleep in his embrace..she was exhausted from the pleasure Kunj had gifted her

*Current scenario*


Twinkle cursed herself for leaving numerous marks on Kunj's perfect body..she had given him so much pain last night and he hadn't complained once..Twinkle started to kiss his back and shoulders as a cure to his pain

"Sorry..sorry..sorry Kunj".."I didn't mean to"..she said through sobs..Kunj smiled at her innocence..he turned to face her and claimed the marks on his body as a imprint of her love for him, his smile soon turned into concern "your not hurting are you"?..he knew she was sore and in pain "I'm sorry Twinkle if I was rough last night"?..she was really sore but did not want him to regret last night, she enjoyed the painful pleasure he provided her with last night and would do anything to experience it again with him

"Kunj...last night was the best night of my life, thank you for giving me this pleasure even though you think I found it painful..but the pleasure you gave me outdid the pain I felt" saying this she placed a kiss on his forehead

He realised she was in pain from the soreness of losing her virginity..he carried her back to bed and made her sit, he kneeled on the floor shirtless against her and she was dressed in just Kunj's shirt..her bare knees touching his chiseled chest..Twinkle started to get scared, she loved the pleasure he gave her last night but she was unsure if she wanted another round to follow when she was sore..but Kunj placed a sensual kiss on each thigh and said "don't worry..I am not going to do anything"..he sat on the bed and started to unbutton his shirt she had on, Twinkle was nervous..Kunj wrapped her in a towel and carried her to their bathroom, the least he could do to ease her soreness was give her a hot bath

Yuvi had won his battle but Kunj had won the battle of providing his wife the pleasure she craved from him, and for him providing her with it was indeed the best win!!



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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg do not tell me this was ur first writing because it was amazing
It was hot but beautiful
Your characterization was on point, i loved it thoroughly
and of course our twinj come out of a tough situation together
You should seriously write more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Is this really your first time writing 😲 it's soo good , you're a natural man ! I loved it , all the angst and emotional turmoil . I can actually see Yuvi threatening something like that in the future 🤔 and Kunj ignoring him , Mahi be damned 😆 I hope they bring up the Alisha thing again in the show , I feel like CVs forgot Kunj was supposedly in love with her at one point . I've been waiting for someone to give us a proper Twinj consummation so thank you , I loved it ❤️ , do write more , because this was great ! x Seriously though can we get a part two , this time minus the pain 😆
Edited by countingstarz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Never felt like this is your first os...well written..Loved it
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OmG..
I jus woke up.. And thot of checking the forummm..
I.had not expected such an hot surprise early morning..😆
Wat wud i say now...
U burning us on Fire...
Gosshhh.. Tht was.very sensual ...
I imagined each and Evry scene...i.felt like watching Christian and Annaa into.Kunj.and Twinkle... And Oh..dear... Tht ws one amazing treat...
Awesome job...
And it's ur first OS... Indeed hard to believe... Its perfect yaaa..
I am ur ardent reader from today... And God... I am looking forwards to such early morning treats...
☺️☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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are you serious? this cant be first time. omg this is most hottest OS i have ever read on TwiNj. none wrote this detail. you are just great. tht was so hot. ☺️


plz do write more cz you nailed on your first OS itself. what a debut!
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The hottest is Ihave ever read...it was amazing...loved it a lot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was just amazing!
Intense,Awesome,hot,lived it totally!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you now i have to go take a shower
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was actually realy very hott.. ☺️
my senses are totally numb after reading this i supposed to go to someone funeral..
this waw your firstone one you just nailed it.. it was breathtaking at sometime...
You should write more..
Loved it☺️
Edited by Zawra - 9 years ago

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