OS: The Painful Pleasure *Mature* - Page 4

Originally posted by: -WalkThatWay-

Aw your too sweet..hehe, I think I like reading mature content a bit too much *shame shame*

Love your forum name, it's so cute..errm you can call me what you please..I leave it to you to make a nickname for me, my name is Inayah x

Originally posted by: prem_diwani

Loved how you transitioned the story from present to what happened and back again.
Yuvi here too was the catalyst to consummation between Twinj .. Loved that...

The gentleness with which kunj made love to his wife was sensual.

Excellent writing...

Originally posted by: Inkheart

For your first time that was quite spectacular👏👏

Job well done friend👍🏼

Originally posted by: MistiofMistz

I have no words to say. It's awesome. I can feel Twinkle break down and Yuvraj can do something like that to win. 😉 I don't believe it's your frist time. Well written 👏.

Originally posted by: _Ridz_

Damn this was beautiful and hot at the same time... I refuse to believe this is your first writing.. You were so good with the words and the emotional turmoil.. And its so like Kunj to feel sorry about the pain .. He just cannot see her in any form of pain even if it's consummation wala pain

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Beautiful OS 😳

Originally posted by: jehkhurana

Whoa!!! That was HOT!!!!!! ☺️

Originally posted by: -WalkThatWay-

Haha..imagine how I felt writing it 😳