OS Series by KhushiArnav - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow solo cute n sweet os dear... I really love this
N yah plx don't remove me from buddylist...
I want pm of ur stories
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

aww loved d song..

dear y do u fear.. wen m here...😉
i know frm wer ur fear cums...

but dont worry in this forum u wont be disappointed...
& m happy abt it...

coming to d os.. nice story...
loved it...



You people who read the one shots are the source of inspiration to write on. IPKKND forum has always been one that welcomes everyone and i'm so glad to have chanced upon IPKKND five years ago! The journey has been beautiful and i'm sure many years down the road, this will remain!

Thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know that you liked this OS Hiya!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: candyjan

Wow solo cute n sweet os dear... I really love this

N yah plx don't remove me from buddylist...
I want pm of ur stories


Thank you Candyjan for patiently reading through the one shots and for the encouragement throughout the journey thusfar! Will definitely PM you. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KhushiArnav_


You people who read the one shots are the source of inspiration to write on. IPKKND forum has always been one that welcomes everyone and i'm so glad to have chanced upon IPKKND five years ago! The journey has been beautiful and i'm sure many years down the road, this will remain!

Thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know that you liked this OS Hiya!

D pleasure was completely mine Jesmine...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you Niranjana! Keep reading and giving me feedback! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

Fabulous OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm


Thank you Happytwinkle! Glad you loved it! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

OS 11 - Inspired from Jeena Jeena (Badlapur)

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zFdi834FiZ4)


Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

as you have stepped
on the threshold of my heart..
O my beloved,
I've written my life in your name..

Arnav looks at the stars in the sky while reollecting the day's event. Arnav had came back from London after a whole month today and as he was walking out of the airport, he had collided with someone. The woman fell backwards and he had let go of his suitcase to catch her and break the fall. Her hazel colored eyes had captured his heart instantaenously.

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

I learned how to live life,
I learned to live my beloved.
But I didn't learn how to live
without you, O my beloved.

Arnav had only seen her for five minutes but he felt as if there was a long lost connection between them. Even before he could ask her if she was alright, the woman had hurried away. Arnav had later picked up his suitcase and had gone to the carpark where the driver Mohan had been waiting for him. Throughout the journey home, Arnav had been thinking about the woman he saw at the airport.

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

As soon as he got home, his sister Anjali had asked him to get ready and the entire family had gone out. Although Arnav was tired, he could not say no to his sister considering that she was 7 months pregnant. Akash had drove the car and Arnav had dozed off during the journey. The car finally came to a stop in front of a house.

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Arnav followed his family and it was only then that he realized that they were there to fix his wedding date. Arnav looked at his Nani and Di who had both hid this agenda from him. Before he could say anything, he heard the sound of payals. Arnav took a deep breath and closed his eyes while mentally phrasing his sentence to rreject the bride to be.

Sachchi si hain ye taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

These praises that I have said from the heart
they are true.

Arnav opened his eyes and there greeting his was a pair of hazel colored eyes. Immediately, Arnav knew that she was the one his heart was thinking about. The woman looked beautiful in a simple saree and minimal makeup. Nani moved to give some space between Arnav and herself. She then gestured the woman to come and sit in between the two of them.

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

now that you are there,
my world is adorned
my earth has found its sky,
we, halves put together, are complete.
O my beloved,
I've written my life in your name..

After thinking for a moment, the woman had approached the two of them and had sat down. Very soon, Nani had engaged her in a conversation and she had been responding with a smile. To Arnav, she looked very happy and had spread joy to everyone including himself. He had unconsciously whispered "Meri Khushi (My Happiness)".

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

The woman had turned to face him as if cued and before Arnav could react, she whispered back, "Always yours".

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsommmiiieee!!! Very sweet story...update next story soon!!!

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