Pyaar tune kiya kiyaaa--a karvi FF-Part 1 updated 12.02.16

Kavila

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey freinds i am wondering to write an os on Karvi----

tough i am a very bad writer---but still i have a habbit to write so i am goint to aplly my this bad...haabit on karvi..

Did i?????????? please tell me...

Pyaar tune kiya kiya--Prolouge--

The story starts from when...Kartik and survi...seperated due to an infortunate ...accident happened in thier life which turned the table of thier lives completely...Quick at the present after 11 years...Kartik meets survi..for an buisness purpose or rather fate bought them together...!!

But both kartik and survi is unware of each other!!!

so tell me should i continue?? and please give me ...suggestion also!

Part--1--

APEX CO..LIMITIED---Mumbai..

The clock stuck at 9;am...there was a moment of fear and tension in between the staff...they were rushing from here and there...,,,,,All the staff member were in high peer preasure because...They have to reach there..target at somehow and only less time is left...and moreover thier boss is on the way...if they could not reach the target before boss entering the office...then...the whole staff will have to suffer Boss...Furry...and god knows many wil be out of job too...so there was full of tense atmosphere in the company...

Now on PJ road...a Black colour big Marcedies...was running like jet on the road...suddenly...The driver kicked the brake so fast that ...the lady siiting in the passenger sit got the jerk so high and her phone just...falls down leading to a bid scratch on the phone...

The lady Furiously shouts to the driver---CANT u seee...idiot...who had told u to...put a brake...i told u an i am already late i had to reach to the office withing 20 minutes u Moron...aur dekho ,ere phone ka kabar bana diya tumhe pata bhi hai kitna ka tha yeh phone...!!

The driver helplessly said woh madammm sorry woh samneyyy...

Lady------soryyy for what sorry se kya..mera phone wapas ayega...

Driver----------,ama woh samney...

Lady kya samney and she looked infront and saw a small litlle girl...was standing and crying...

The lady...came out of the car and was stunned to find the little girl crying animously and was all alone..

She goes to the gril and asked...are app kaun ho beta aur aise bich sadak pe kya kar rahe ho??

Girl----didi mujheee mummy ke paas janaa hai and she started crying highhh.

Lady-------are rou mat rau mat ..acha yeh batayo tumhara nam kya hai,

G----tulsi..

L---wow bahut pyara namm..hai...

G----did please mujhe mummy ke pass le chaleyey...

L--lekin mujhe kiase pata chalega apki mummy kaun hai acha mumy ka nam kya hai??aur app yeh par kaise ayi mumy ke saath.

G--meri mumy ka naam gauri shindey hai main aur meri mumy...market pe aye the achanak...mummy gayab ho gayi unko dhundtey dhuntey ...main yaha a gayi..meri mumyyy kaha gayi..she started crying...

L---oh god she thought...lagta hai kidnaping ka case hai se shai to girl koi baaat nahin main tumhare mummy ko dhond lungi ...ayo mere sath...!!

she take the girl in her lap and went to car and odered driver...to start car...

Driver --mam to office le lun...taking a sigh of relief,,,,,that madam lagta hai todi shant ho gayi...

L--nahin office nahin police station...

D---was horrified...he toughttt heyyy bhagban ab kya ek phone kel iyey mujhe madammm police me dengii...😆he was all tensed...

L------kya hua sunayi nahin diyaaa

D--par madam woh yeh.

L---start karto ho ya nahin...yay main taxiii se jao aur fir dad ko agar pata laga tab to tum ajnto ho kya hoga..

the girl was enjoying there comical tense convo..

D----nahin ji madam yeh lijeye and they went to Police station...

Scene shit to A big bunglow Barweee mansion...

Lata barwe a strict and disiplined lady...was siting in her revolving chair..and was relaxing with a cup of tea and daily news paper station...suddenly.one of her servant runningly came ..and informen her that...Choteee Sir...is Missing from his bed roon..

Lata--got tensoned -yeh ladka...kisi kki baat nahin sunta kitney baar bola hai aise...subah subah...bina batayi nahin jane ko lekinnn yeh to

She odered...the servant to go and make preparation for lunch...

Lata--in her tought he bappa kya karun main mere beta kaaa us hadsey ne to Kartik ki zindagi hi badal kar rakh di...aaj tak us hadsy ubra nahin hai zinda hai lekin sans...nahin leta...hasta hai lekin...ushko mehsus nahin karta kehney ko to India ka itna bada buisness tycoon hai...na jane kitni ladkiya marti hai ushki ek jhalk pane ko lekin kartik woh tooo ek hi pe marta tha aur hai...pata nahin kya hoga mere kartik ka she prayed to god!!!!!

Suddenly phone rang and...lata picked up and was shocked

Somebody on the other side informed that kartik barwe has been found unconsiously lying at...JMT road...and been taken to oppolo hospital...!

Lata------left immediately...!!!!

To be continue!!

Edited by mannu100 - 9 years ago

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Yush001

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Posted: 9 years ago

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U should continue dear!
Ummm...survi has to stay overnight in his office with karthik. Both spending some romantic moments together alone.u can continue like this..!

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Apeksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey mannu🤗 how are you yaara! ok now coming to your story. karvi as business partners.. hmm,, well its a great start do continue soon😃 and don't hesitate to try anything new we learn if we try even if some mistakes may happen at first but then we can correct ourselves and later we'll be the master of that. 😃 so plz do continue 😊

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Kavila

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ApekshaM
hey mannu🤗 how are you yaara! ok now coming to your story. karvi as business partners.. hmm,, well its a great start do continue soon😃 and don't hesitate to try anything new we learn if we try even if some mistakes may happen at first but then we can correct ourselves and later we'll be the master of that. 😃 so plz do continue 😊

thanksss yaraaa...!!

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Kavila

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Part--1--

APEX CO..LIMITIED---Mumbai..

The clock stuck at 9;am...there was a moment of fear and tension in between the staff...they were rushing from here and there...,,,,,All the staff member were in high peer preasure because...They have to reach there..target at somehow and only less time is left...and moreover thier boss is on the way...if they could not reach the target before boss entering the office...then...the whole staff will have to suffer Boss...Furry...and god knows many wil be out of job too...so there was full of tense atmosphere in the company...

Now on PJ road...a Black colour big Marcedies...was running like jet on the road...suddenly...The driver kicked the brake so fast that ...the lady siiting in the passenger sit got the jerk so high and her phone just...falls down leading its parts to cut into piecies!!

The lady Furiously shouts to the driver---CANT u seee...idiot...who had told u to...put a brake...i told u an i am already late i had to reach to the office withing 20 minutes u Moron...aur dekho ,ere phone ka kabar bana diya tumhe pata bhi hai kitna ka tha yeh phone...!!

The driver helplessly said woh madammm sorry woh samneyyy...

Lady------soryyy for what sorry se kya..mera phone wapas ayega...

Driver----------,ama woh samney...

Lady kya samney and she looked infront and saw a small litlle girl...was standing and crying..infront of the car!!.

The lady...came out of the car immediately and was stunned to find the little girl crying animously and was all alone..

She goes to the gril and asked...are app kaun ho beta aur aise bich sadak pe kya kar rahe ho??

Girl----didi mujheee mummy ke paas janaa hai and she started crying highhh.

Lady-------are rou mat rau mat ..acha yeh batayo tumhara nam kya hai,

G----tulsi..

L---wow bahut pyara namm..hai...

G----did please mujhe mummy ke pass le chaleyey...

L--lekin mujhe kiase pata chalega apki mummy kaun hai acha mumy ka nam kya hai??aur app yeh par kaise ayi mumy ke saath.

G--meri mumy ka naam gauri shindey hai main aur meri mumy...market pe aye the achanak...mummy gayab ho gayi unko dhundtey dhuntey ...main yaha a gayi..meri mumyyy kaha gayi..she started crying...

L---oh god she thought...lagta hai kidnaping ka case hai se shai to girl koi baaat nahin main tumhare mummy ko dhond lungi ...ayo mere sath...!! the girl got a smile in her face...

she take the girl in her lap and went to car and odered driver...to start car...(Driver was confused ..yeh ladki)..

Driver --mam to office le lun...taking a sigh of relief,,,,,that madam lagta hai todi shant ho gayi..he hesitently askeddd mama yeh bachiii.

L--nahin office nahin police station...(Aur kuch mat sawal pucho do what i said)..

D---was horrified...he toughttt heyyy bhagban ab kya ek phone kel iyey mujhe madammm police me dengii...😆he was all tensed...poor fellow!!

L------kya hua sunayi nahin diyaaa !!

D--par madam woh yeh.

L---start karto ho ya nahin...yay main taxiii se jao aur fir dad ko agar pata laga tab to tum ajnto ho kya hoga..

the girl was enjoying there comical tense convo..

D----nahin ji madam yeh lijeye and they went to Police station...

Scene shit to A big bunglow Barweee mansion...

Lata barwe a strict and disiplined lady...was siting in her revolving chair..and was relaxing with a cup of tea and daily news paper station...suddenly.one of her servant runningly came ..and informen her that...Choteee Sir...is Missing from his bed roon..

Lata--got tensoned -yeh ladka...kisi kki baat nahin sunta kitney baar bola hai aise...subah subah...bina batayi nahin jane ko lekinnn yeh to

She odered...the servant to go and make preparation for lunch...

Lata--in her tought he bappa kya karun main mere beta kaaa us hadsey ne to Kartik ki zindagi hi badal kar rakh di...aaj tak us hadsy ubra nahin hai zinda hai lekin sans...nahin leta...hasta hai lekin...ushko mehsus nahin karta kehney ko to India ka itna bada buisness tycoon hai...na jane kitni ladkiya marti hai ushki ek jhalk pane ko lekin kartik woh tooo ek hi pe marta tha aur hai...pata nahin kya hoga mere kartik ka she prayed to god!!!!!

Suddenly phone rang and...lata picked up and was shocked

Somebody on the other side informed that kartik barwe has been found unconsiously lying at...JMT road...and been taken to oppolo hospital...!

Lata------left immediately...!!!!

To be continued!!

Edited by mannu100 - 9 years ago

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