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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm di... And it is really awesome. Geet expressing herself in the diary and Maan reading it in her absence is wonderful idea. And wat made it more adorable is the way u have made it like Geet writing the diary addressing her angel . how innocent she is. It really is maasoom ishq. But wat is that Maan deciding to become worthy of her...wat more does he wanna do? It's required for the story I know but at least once can not maaneet speak.... Waiting for their meet...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi

this story was amazing maan or mittu ki tuning so gud... thank god maan ki shaadi ria se nai huyi... family bonding amazing I wish maan jaldi geet ke paas jaaye or apne dil ki baat kahe or unke moments jaldi aaye I m waiting for your nxt update... I m fan of your writing... I just request you plz accept my request n nxt update pm me plzzz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update love the anguish both Maan and Geet are feeling for each other... Hopefully their separation days will be over soon and they will be able to c each other. Cannot wait for the next update where Maan will actually accept in front of the whole family that he loves Geet too...
Update next one soon please...
Thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ab aa bhi ja rashmi dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
mujhe ab update chaiye bs
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Posted: 9 years ago


Teaser

Priya cupped her face in her palms-Geet you are changed in this short period of time.I feel that my daughter is exchanged with some mature girl.

Geet smiled-I m going to live alone so have to learn the things accordingly.. Or you can say that I want the happiness of angel only and this feeling is giving me the strength..

and she changed the topic and said-Mamma now you are here so I want to eat everything of my taste..I m really bore of Peter's Indian food of English Style

Priya smiled -Ok.. Gajar ka halwa banaaun sabse pahle?..you wanted to eat that day before coming here

Geet-Nahin wo nahinnn.. I don't want to eat that now..

Priya-Kyun?

Geet-First thing is that dadi makes the best halwa and I think she will never make it for me now.and secondly I never ate red halwa without angel..So don't feel to eat that alone..

Priya-You still love him?

Geet-Mamma ! Is there any way by which we can remove love from our heart?

A tear scrolled down on Priya's face but she smiled wiping it. She kissed her forehead and said-Let's go out.. kitchen me dekhna hai ki kya kya rakha hai

Geet nodded and came out and saw Ram talking to someone.. They came near him and Ram turned towards them

Priya-Whom you were talking with?

Ram while cutting the call-Maan.. and then looked at Geet.. There was a hope in her eyes but he saw a sadness replacing that hope seeing him cutting the call..


PS:- I have a long row of weddings to attend as it's the wedding season here.. So getting less time to type the update.😭😭.I m really sorry for the delay but i m helpless..Will try to update as soon as it's finished

Edited by Rashmi... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
upar dekho😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome & emotional teaser...
waiting for update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the teaser
waiting for update

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Posted: 9 years ago
Tumne ab post kiya😆
Mast teaser hai... Gajar halwa mujhe dedo😉
Pg 56 mein 1 & 2 kyun likha hai... Kuch post karogi wahan

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