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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4

Leela with a smile walked towards kunj "puttar menu bharosa hai tujpe ki tu aisi harkat nahi kar sakta... kal sab aisi halaato me hua ki menu sochne ka vaqt hi nahi mila... par muje pata hai ki meri twinkle k liye tu hi sahi jivan sathi hai" she spoke placing her hand over kunjs head...
"Par mujhe ye shadi nahi karni""
Every1 except kunj looked from where the voice came... ofcourse he could now recognize her voice even in his sleep.. kunj leaved a sigh as is he knew this was already going to happen...
Twinkle was standing at the door step.
Leela questioned "ye tu kya bol rahi hai puttar".. " maa itna sab kuch ho gya muje kuch samj nhi aa raha ... par itna pata hai ki muje abhi shadi nahi karni.."
Kunj knew her inside out.. he guessed she must have gone to yuvraj ... he must have emotionally blackmailed her.. and she was just buying time to reveal truth to her mother...
"Par twinkle kunj tere liye..."
" aunty aap plz twinkle ko force mat ki jiye agar use shadi nhi karni toa uske sath koi zabardasti nahi honi chahiye ... "kunj interrupted..."hum chalte hai".
Twinkle saw kunj.. in his eyes... it was true as she entered her house she saw her mother smiling at kunj.. as if he were her own son... but twinkle's mind was full of questions doubts and confusion... on the other hand she had to let her mother know about her and yuvi.. or else her mother wud not stop until wedding... she asked herself did she even want to marry yuvi.. or she just wanted to come out clean before she is sent to her in laws.. who ever it may be Sarnas or Luthras... she knew she needed time...
As kunj spoke to not force her. She saw in his eyes how much he understood her.. this understanding and talking with eyes she never experienced with yuvi... in Yuvis eyes she only saw passion and obsession... wait a minute did she think obsession... YES.. yuvi was obsessive how much she did not wanted to find fault in yuvi it came out ringing in her mind... for now she was just thankful that no one forced her to marriage... thanks to Kunj... she went upstairs to her room
As they were leaving .. manohar spoke to leela to talk to twinkle about marriage... for one last time...
Kunj was in his room thinking about past few weeks.. to get married he had stopped paying attention to his business.. after this marriage is done he can concentrate on his business was al he got from his bade papa... he was never attracted to girls or we can say he did not meet twinkle till then. ... how much he hated to admit she had made a place in his heart... of course he wud never show it to any1... as even he was un aware of that special place... for him she was always a girl found by his family for marriage... then he got to know about her siyyapas.. then her bf... he knew yuvi was not right for her... but he was no one to interfere in her life... he whenever spoke ill about yuvi was shut by her... what did she see in him he thought... was he very much handsome... but good looks are not the only thing girls must be looking in men... he got up and went in front of mirror... checked himself out... he rememberd how girls used to drop themselves at him in high school or his collge or harvard... but this girl did not give heeds to him... he caught her all flushed whenvever she fell in his arms.. he could sense it that she felt something between... them... would she be feeling more of this intensity with yuvi... did she really love yuvi... or she just was in love with the 'idea of being in love'... he shrugged of while combing his hair... and thought to himself.."Who Cares!!!!"... faintly he heard a whisper come from within his heart "you care!!".. which he thought to ignore

Twinkles sleep was disturbed by her phone ringing... she thought it must be kunj trying to convince her.. for marriage.. as she reached out her phone ... she saw YUVI... again surprised by her expectations... why did she always expected kunj to call her... when he was the one not to force her for marriage...why would he call to convince her... she picked up..the call
WHATT!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update!
Thanks 4 the back 2 back updates!
Cont. soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for another amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon pkz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5

She just a call from one of yuvis friends Yuvi was about to commit suicide and he was headed towards suicide point that all she got to know,..she was now fed up with this obsession of yuvi why was she always standing at the recieving end... It was 6 in the evening .. finding the hall empty and a good opportunity she went out of the house drove towards suicide point... she could not find yuvi or any1... she shouted his name but no one was around... suddenly she heard some1 whistling...she knew who it was... yuvi was with some of his friends...
Twinkles temper rose she went upto them and slapped yuvi... yuvi turning into his phsycho self... held her wrist ... tune is hath se mujhe thappad mara...and then kisses her hand.. twinkle again felt uncomfortable the same which she felt in the morning...
Yuvi said triumphantly to his friends "dekha dosto mene kaha tha na . Daudte hue ayegi apne yuvi k pas"...
"Yuvi aise ghatiya mazak muje pasand nahi... "
"Twinkle man le na ki tu bhi mere bina nhi reh sakti.. toa fir shadi kyu nhi kar rahi mujse... vo Sarna aj bhi tere ghar aya tha... tu usko toa kabhi mana nahi karti shadi k liye ...kyu mujse zyda acha lagne laga hai kya tuje..."
Again he twisted her wrist" bolo twinkle bolo vo zyda acha lagta hai kya"..
Yuvi muje dard ho rha hai.. chodo...
Chood dunga.. twinkle tuje mujse shadi karni hogi aaj.. isi vaqt...
"..Kya..nhi yuvi aise nhi... muje maa se baat karni hogi pehle.."
"Maa maa maa... ek hi rat lagaye rakhi hai tumne... ek bar shadi ho jyegi uske bad kya farak padega... sab ko manna hi padega na.."
"Muje toa lagta hai ab tu mujse pyar hi nhi karti...jaa karle us Sarna se shadi.."
He pushed her and looked away..
"Nhi yuvi tumhe toa pata hai na me kitna pyar karti hu tumse... yuvi me tumse pyar karti hu yuvi"...
SLaAAPp... right across her cheek... and there it was the moment she never imagined to happen...
Leela was standing with tears and angry eyes...anita smirking beside her...
"Maa vo.." she tried to speaks between her sobs...
"CHHUUpp,.. ek lafz bhi nhi bolegi tu...twinkle... inna bada dhoka.. inna bada sach tune mujse chipaya twinkle...kyu.. kya kami reh gayi thi meri parvarish mein.. itni chut de tereko... apni zindagi apne tarike se jeene ki azadi di... uska ye sila diya tune... "
"Maa meri baat toa suniye.. me yuvi se sach mein""...
" nhi sunna mereko teri ye kahani... meri sabse badi dushman.. anita.. jisne ek mauka nhi choda hume badnam karneka... usi k bete k sath tu... mere peeth piche...,,,""
"Leela.. ab kyu bachi ko dant rahi ho.. akhir me toa tumko kab se keh rhi thi ki is sach k bare me par tumhe toa vishwas nhi hota tha... vaise bhi twinkle ki yuvi se shadi nhi hui toa kya hua... pati patni ka rishta toa hai hi dono me itne salo se jo gf bf hai..."
Leela looked away in disgust.
"Maa ye sach nhi.. mene apni koi limits cross nhi ki yuvi k sath.. jab tak me aapko iske bare me bata na du.aap shadi k liye man na jaye... usse pehle me apni had kaise par kar sakti hu...
"SHAADII,, LEELa mocked twinkle... tune soch bhi kaise liya ki.. me is ladke k sath teri shadi ki ijazat dungi... Kunj jaise ladke ko thukraya tune iske liye..."
"Twinkle iske liye me tuje kbhi maaf nhi krungi...kbhi nhi""
Leela walked off twinkle follwed... "maa meri baat toa subiye.. plzz.. maa ...
Yuvi to his mother" kya mom... me aaj twinkle se shadi kar hi leta... agar aap apna drama nhi laye hote toa ... "
"Just shut up yuvi tune soch bhi kaise liya ki me twinkle ko apne ghar ki bahu banaungi"...


Taneja Mansion
Maa meri baat toa suniye... plz.. "twinkle muje koi baat nhi krni.. tu chali ja yaha se...aaj se teri maa mar gyi tere liye.."
"Maa plz aisa mat boliye.."
Leela shut the door of her room...as twinkle kept knocking and pleasing outside...
Raman... too looked disappointed...
Pinny was about to make some taunt on twinkle... but shut her mouth...seeing her husband... raise his finger to keep quiet...
...
Twinkle felt asleep on the door.. Raman at night just came to have some water.. was headed towards kitchen saw twinkle sitting beside the door.. he quickly came near her..
"Twinkle..." he could see that twinkle cried herself to sleep. Though he was angry on her for what she did but he felt pity on her.. he called out again.. as twinkle saw her mama... she hugged him and started crying
"Bas kar puttar kitna royegi...chal apne kamre me chal so.. ja.. "
Twinkle looked at her mothers room," meri behna ko thoda vaqt de puttar vo maaf kar degi tujko..."
Twinkle went to bed next morning as she woke up she ran towards her mothers room.. she was happy that atleast the door was open..and her mother was okay.. she could not bring herself up to talk to her.. cud not face her...
She stood near door.. her mother was talking to some1..
She peeped through the door...her mother was talking to a photo frame..."itne saalo me aaj tak aapki itni kami mehsoos nahi hui jitni aaj ho rhi hai.. kaise sambhalu me khud ko... twinkle ko kaise sambhalu...jo mera gurroor thi vahi aaj muje sharminda kar rahi hai... inna acha rishta aya usko mana kar diya... muje laga bachi ko thoda vaqt chahiye hoga...jo us raat hadsa hua uske bad.. par vo toa isliye mana kar rhi thi kyuki vo pyar hi kisi aur se karti hai... kaise samjhau ki uska pyar nhi uski ... galat femi hai.. uski galat zid hai.. uska bachpana hai... kab jayega uska bachpnana.. kab badi hogi vo..""
She saw her mother cry bcoz of her holding that photo frame... she quietly walked of to her room... she had failed...
Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 6
Kunj was now fed up of all that happend in the past few weeks so he wanted some time of and was going to divert his attention towards his business... but all that he wanted to start from tommorrow today he just wanted some time alone... he got in his car and started to drive ,only thing he dint know was his destination...
He drove through the lanes of Amritsar... through the traffic... only one thing he could think of now was... his encounters with siyappa queen ... it was a long drive... he remembered how she described love... when asked in an interview... the moment he diacoverd that uv was her bf... ...the date he planned for alisha but in turn celebrated with her... her falling in swimming pool... her searching for the ring in pond... how he remembered yuvi not even bothered to come near pond to search the ring... once again he thought what did she see in that guy... how desperate she was to get engaged tp yuvi...

Twinkle started walking out of the house aimlessly...thinking about how her life turned upside down.. outside her house she looked up in the sky and thought how come life got so complicated... she usd to live so happily spreading joy around... but now... she felt so alone... she hurt her mother... her mamu was disappointed... and Yuvi dint understand her... in their relation she was the one to suffer... she informed watchman... that she will return after sometime..tell family members not to worry... he asked "babyji aap kaha jaa rahe ho" ...she replied "pata nahi!!"...watchman saw her form walkin on the roads...

He did not understand.. the more he dint wnt to think about her more she flashed in front of him... the disbelief in her eyes when she got concious at the farm house... her eyes accusing him of that crime he never commited... how painful it was when..that.. trust what he felt in their meetings and talks was just one sided... ahe never trusted him... yes ofcourse they never said ut out loud... together they used to just fight together... but he never thought that bcoz of those naughty nok jhoks.. she would judge him... so cheap...
Sudden honking brought him to senses... a large truck coming forward in his face..his eyes large in horror...fear engulfing of death...""ohh shitt""...he took a sharp turn as fast as possible.. and ran the car all over the footpath... and braked hard... the screeching of tyres was all he heard...
"Ohh god...that was close.."
He looked behind.. the driver had truck under control and passed by safely...he took a sigh of relief... he looked ahead... he was near the gurudwara...even he dint know why he drove there... he came out of his seat...closing the door... he saw her walking looking at the ground... she was oblivious of her surroundings..
He stared at her.. hoping she wud look up.. as she passed by the car.. she saw the car.. recognizing it.. she halted for a minute..and looked up...
He was standing there... near the door as if he was waiting for her... it looked to her that babaji had sent him... god knows from when he must be staring at her... and he refused to look away...
He observed that she recognized his car and looked up... it sent a sudden feeling of pleasure knowing she recognized the car... she had knowledge of his tiniest details and that made him happy...but suddenly his mind took over... he remeberd her accusing her insults.. nd lack of trust...
She remembered... that night ,,,why did it always flashed in front of her when she looked at him... she was fed up with this fights between her mind and heart...she looked away.. and he knew that what was she thinking...and this irritated him... but he stopped himself from speaking as she started walking again... as slowly ...that he could see the tear stains on her face... and thats when he sensed that her face was much pale... without that glow that she always carried...with her...
He kept mum...and started walking...and reached her matching her speed...
Their hearts decided let the Silence do the talking...
Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 7
They walked beside each other..close enough to feel the presence of the other... but not close to violate their space...
Taking steps up the grudwara... they prayed ... dislodging the loads of problems they faced through... recent times and asked babaji for help...Kunj was the first to open his eyes he looked at twinkle... what must she be praying he thought... of course about Yuvi...to have a happy life with yuvi what else would she ask...
She..asked babaji to show her the right way...to make all things right to gain her mothers forgiveness...restoring her respect...
...then she remembered... he was with her... he must have walked off why would he bother about her... what was she to him ... and she questioned herself... did she do anything that he wud care even a bit...and she opened her eyes... just to find out two black eyes staring at her.. with a questioning look... she bowed her head... and both started to out...
They sat on a bench near the pond...staring into the waters...
He now could see that her tear stains clearly... he was sure she had cried a lot... but why... how can he ask her... would she tell him...anything.. he did not want to face a negative attitude... what if she asks me to mind my own business...
But the heart won over...
He looked at her... he could see that her eyes were wet she was stopping herself from crying...
"TWINKLE"...
that was it and she broke down... letting out all the pain she carried in till her long walk till the gurudwara...she let out all the tears that threatened to fall...and her cry converted to sobs...
Kunj shocked at her reaction first thought she was crying becoz of him... but comforting her he put his arm around her... lettin her all the pain out wetting his shirt... he knew something was wrong ...he just could not bear her this sight of crying... she was nit even crying on that farm house night...when all the media accused her and questioned her... she stood strong but what on the earth would have happened that she is not able to control herself...and broke down...
First thought that came to his mind was of Yuvi... did he do something wrong... if that was the case he promised himself that he would skin yuvi alive...anger rose in him...
But he controlled ... she calmed herself down and took her head back... she murmureed a sof sorry... seeing his wet shirt... he replied its okay...
Before he could ask anything... twinkle spoke, "ma ko pata chal gaya!!"
It dint take him much time to understand why she was upset... aunty would not have accepted Yuvi...and he imagined what anger she must have shown towards twinkle...seeing the condition in which twinkle was... while he was thinking he heard "maa ne kaha ki me unke liye mar gayi hun.."...Kunj was shocked to hear that...aunty was very angry and she is not going to forgive twinkle easily..."sab thik ho jayega"... were the words he was able to say... her face was expressionless... to try make her better he added..." tu kahe toa me aunty se baat karu"...
To say she was surprised was an understatement in front of her the one person with whom she never had a normal talk.. whom she thought took advantage of her...whom she disliked and she remembered numerous time he mentioned how much he disliked her... he was the one whom she said no to marriage...the person whom she insulted that night... just to defend yuvi... and now when she is broke she needs some1s support the most where was yuvi to be seen...no where he dint even bother to call her after last meeting not even check on her whether she was okay or not... did yuvi really love her...she was surpried at herself on questioning the love she believed to be in from years... its validity...its genuiness it mocked as if if its not true love... her all the years back are ruined and will remain with her as her dark past...and here was the person sitting beside her... who she thought was no one to her and dint care about her... was asking to convice her mother so that she could mary Yuvi...what kind of a person is he...!!!
Her thoughts were intrrrupted by a long iron rod coming from behind and hitting Kunjs head...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks fir the back to back update.
Amazing update loved it.
Good to see Kunj supporting Twinkle in her bad times. Hope nothing happens to Kunj though.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi
thanks for the back to back updates
just loved it
eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for all the updates appreciate it!
Who hit kunj oh no! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice ff.
Read all parts in one go.
Continue soon nd add me to ur PM list.

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