secret mission ay fic

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey hi ppl postin after a long time. Just thought of postin dis. hope ull like it if ull dont dan im really sorry n wont post the other part.

(Ashi is sittin in da canteen alone. uv comes there grabs a chair n sits next 2 her.)

ashi:sycho im busy!

uv:ya dikh raha hai kitni busy ho.can u ever talk properl with me.

ashi: atleast tumhare saath nahi.

(uv very seriously)ashi im serious.plz meri baat suno.

(ashi bcomin serious)thik hai bolo.

uv:dad ne muche ek secret mission ki copy di hai jo muche yahaa se 100kms ki doori par ek jungle hai jahaa muche ek aadmi milega usse deni hai its very imp.

ashi:toh main kya karu noe dunt tell me ki u want me 2 carry out dis secret mission.im busy u see.

uv:ashi tum phirse....

ashi:uv tum yeh jis tarah mujse bol rahe ho main kya sochu. say it clearly na tumhe mujse kya chahiye.?

uv:thik hai meri bike kharab ho gayi hai n i want ur bike.

ashi:thik hai lekin im comin wit u. kyunki pata nahi tum meri bike ke saath kya karoge.

uv:allrite but ill drive.

(ashi felt somethin diff how did uv agree so soon)

ashi:so kab jana hai

uv:abhhi

ashi:ok lets go!

(uv drives da bike n they reach da jungle which uv was talkin about)

uv:2 a person walkin there. bhaisahab ye velugaon jaane ka raasta kidhar se hai?

that man: woh aage jaake baye mud jaana.lekin wahaa se motorcycle aage nahi jaa paayegi.wahaa se chalke jaana padega.

uv:ok thank u.

(ashi gettin off da bike.)ok thank u .r u mad. im not leavin my bike here u go .ill stay with my bike.

uv:paagal mat bano ashi. yeh road dekho its so deserted ur comin with me.

ashi:im not scared ok!

uv:tum scared nahi ho naa sahi but im 4 u....mera matlab hai ur comin with me.

ashi:no!

uv:ashi 4 once plz listen 2 me.

(ashi was surprised 2 see a very concerned uv)ok!

uv: rite lets go!

(they reach da turn which wud leave them 2 velugaon they leave da bike n start walkin inside they cant see even 1 person there.)

ashi:uv r u sure yahaa par koi village ho sakta hai i mean yahaa toh koi bhi nahi hai.

uv:hai ashi aayenge.

ashi:what!

uv:i mean koi na koi toh yahaa se jaayenge na..

(ashi thought uv was bhavin very strange after 5 mints of walkin dey saw some ppl walkin from there)

uv:excuse me !aap log kahaa jaa rahe hai .

those ppl:woh hum velugaon jaa rahe hai camp ke liye.

ashi:strange how can it b possible that same village?(in a doubtfull tone)

1girl:arrey iss route se yeh ek hi gaon hai toh possible hoga hi na.

uv:can we come along hameh bhi wahi janaa hai.

dat girl:ya sure lekin wahaa kyun jaa rahe hai

ashi:tum se matlab just get us there.

that girl:thik hai itne angry kyun ho rahe ho humne toh bas poocha aise hi.

ashi:ab chale!

every1 chalo.

(after some time of walkin)

uv:tum uss girl par itna angry kyun ho rahi thi

ashi:look uv main pata nahi jungle main tumhare saath kyun hu upar se my sweetheart akeli bahar khadi hai n ur askin me main angry kyun hu?

uv:oh muche lagaa tum uss ladki se....

ashi: uss ladki se wat yuvraj dev?

(just dan some terrorist gather round uv ashi n da other ppl dey catch hold of ashi from her neck)

bata inmain se yuvraj dev kaun hai(ashi at once thought of da mission papers)

ashi:muche nahi pata!

jaldi se bata warna yeh goli tere bheje main utaar dunga.

ashi:maine kahaa na nahi pata.

da next part ill post if ull like dis!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hiiiiiii where hav u beeeen hav been missing ur write ups u knwwwww and ofcorse u tooooo 😃 😃
good to see you here againnnn hope alls welll 😳
i havnt read this yet as right nw am short of time bt i wld read it in night 😃 😃 and am sure am gona loveee it since its all about ay 😳 😳 infact we all wld love it reee so u better post the next and the next next and the next next next partsssssss 😳 😳
and be more reguler from now on 😳 its so good to have u back here 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

hiiiiiii where hav u beeeen hav been missing ur write ups u knwwwww and ofcorse u tooooo 😃 😃
good to see you here againnnn hope alls welll 😳
i havnt read this yet as right nw am short of time bt i wld read it in night 😃 😃 and am sure am gona loveee it since its all about ay 😳 😳 infact we all wld love it reee so u better post the next and the next next and the next next next partsssssss 😳 😳
and be more reguler from now on 😳 its so good to have u back here 😳

my write ups i havent written ny?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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by not commenting u all have let me known that i shud not cont n so im really sorry 4 even postin da 1st part thank u!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey babessss plzz dnt say that reee
we havnt had time to read this through am having my exams in two days so i just cme at rf for ten mins i dnt wana read such a beautyful write up in haste and do injustice to it
plzzz be patient naa most of the ay fans havnt cme am sure they wld see and reply soon
and just a suggesiton change ur topic name to indicate this is an ay fic
people miss topics but if it wld hav ay in the name no one wld miss it
and plz dnt be disheartened everyones really hard pressed on time these days specialy me u wld realy hav to wait for my comment am sowiee bt no time at al
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Posted: 18 years ago
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natash i hav even posted your fic link to the most active ay topic at rf ie the ashi yuvi love station 😃 heres the link to it

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=692037&TPN=1 03&#13102536


and now u dnt need to feel bad or be upset coz am sure u wld soon get loads of replies and i promise i wld reply to it real sooon

tc and better keep posting 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳itz greatttttt....!!!!!! i just loved it re......itz just toooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud.....👏

i wud love to read the second part......nd plzzzzzz dont say this....we all love to read fics...itz just that we dont reply...i know itz sad....but coz m reading n smriti is also there to appretiate so do post the next part......😳😳

now plzzzzzz post the next part asap...

we ll b waiting....

love ya loads....😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

natash i hav even posted your fic link to the most active ay topic at rf ie the ashi yuvi love station 😃 heres the link to it

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=692037&T PN=1 03?


and now u dnt need to feel bad or be upset coz am sure u wld soon get loads of replies and i promise i wld reply to it real sooon

tc and better keep posting 😳

thanx 4 doin so much dats all i cant say😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonam1509

😳itz greatttttt....!!!!!! i just loved it re......itz just toooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud.....👏

i wud love to read the second part......nd plzzzzzz dont say this....we all love to read fics...itz just that we dont reply...i know itz sad....but coz m reading n smriti is also there to appretiate so do post the next part......😳😳

now plzzzzzz post the next part asap...

we ll b waiting....

love ya loads....😳😳

thanku so much sona luv ya 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woow!! hei this is awwsommmmmm!!!!!!!!! 2 interesting luved it wooww!! plzz plzz cont...... really excited 2 read further!!!!! 😛

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