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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

jogicad- azsumay - blueberry02 - kabhi_asya - Linsie - Persiko

THANK U SO MUCH GUYS 🤗

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan
Res. Cannot believe I am seeing this so late. Sorry was out of action due to an accident.
Will unres soonish. Happy birthday beautiful girlies! Hope you have a blast! Wishing you lots of love, success and happiness. MWAH!

oh my god! Did i read it right? U met with an accident ??? ARE U FINE? 😲😲 😲

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 9 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
a joirney frm lover boy to certified kameena

THIS kameena role I wanted him to do always 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Now comes the ORIGINAL REPLY

BIBI

First and foremost.

SUCH A LONG COMMENT

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Huh? 😕 I write so much and ask you for more, in the answer you ask me if you are dreaming? 😲 lol

it felt so trust me 😳😆

U know that hum apse beintehaan mohobbat karte hai 😳

Adios

p.s. : yea aiv aise hi mil gayi so 😆

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Dude, you post Shahid Kapoor's Gifs and think that I will pay attention to your words? What the? 😕 Haha, so I had to re-read the whole replay after saving all the Gifs, but still got only that you can't believe that I said all these things, so I say, you keep writing such beautiful FFs/SSs/OSs and keep giving me Asad and then see, I will write 1000 long praises wale posts...Because you are too damn good...

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
<font size="2" color="#0000ff">aww thank u sweets 🤗 I hope I did justice to your time and your expectations.😳</font>

of course. . Yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai.. 😉
it's a pleasure to read your stories 😊

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

may i come in😳😳😳😳😆

m so sorry ankie i just realized ki mai yaha aa to gai thi but review ni kiya abhi tak
and this os ko mai leke bethi 5 se bhi zada baar
evrythime i read someone called me up and i left. i came and re read the first para again and agin but kabhi poora padh hi ni paai update😳😳😳
to aaj to bas thaan li padh ke hi rahungi.
and ankie i have read ur otherr works too
what i find common is u always start your updates from dialuges😃 and that too someone calling out loud😆
like in some os zoya chillati he asad pe haha and yaha asad dil ko awaaz laga ra
ok getting back
the writing is well
but i did think kya asad eating and raat ka sama with waajid thoda boring hoga esa mene socha but nooo😆😆😆 it was only then when waajid opened his mouth
and the dialouges were superbly written

aur then the best part...asad in the bedroom of radil😃
awesome and the whole convo with zoya ke dost was really well written
specially the dialouges containing the urdu words👏👏
that carried a different sense and aura...there was something about that
like i could feel the night ka sannata around me... i coukd see the scenes playing in front of me...fairly imaginable😊

and ofc it was entertaining as well...and thats whr the beauty lies...!!!!
a person exchanging no dialouges nothing
even then the monolouge was pretty cool and funny via the eyes of asad when the can rolls at his feet and he enters the room to see the destruction hahahaaa😆😆😆 oh i can wholly imagine the case😆
description was entertaining enough...ayaan cute...zoya is well zoya😆😆
love the asya scene again the real one
and how naturally u wrote it ankie
that is indeed very nice job👏👏
this was beautiful for sure whatever it was😃😃😃