Guilt: Abhi OS - Page 4

Nice os. Loved Abhi a lot and glad to see the faith for Abhi in Pragya. Hate that tanu. She wanted to distract Abhi but she should know the how much Abhi loves Pragya...Thanks for pm. Feeling happy to read stories from you.

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Nice os. Loved Abhi a lot and glad to see the faith for Abhi in Pragya. Hate that tanu. She wanted to distract Abhi but she should know the how much Abhi loves Pragya...Thanks for pm. Feeling happy to read stories from you.

Thank you so much

Semma semma update tia tiyu.
Omg taht tanu bhi na always evil.
Really evil eye ritual is needed.
Abhi guilt feeling really I liked how genuine he is.
Superb upd

Hi 🤗

Sorry Tia. I am so so late. Well, firstly my gifts were incomplete and then the forum was on fire when I last logged in which made me refrain from posting for I felt you might not be in a good mood, followed by my internet throwing tantrums when I next tried and then the show got engrossing deviating my attention from this. Aldo I felt just a Nice OS' comment doesn't suit me so...lol

And whatever I am posting on all four of your works is a combined draft written by me on the 5^th January, 2016 which I am splitting and posting as it is on the Desi Girl OS, Guilt OS, Restless FF, and 30 Year Old OS.

Draft dated 5^th January, 2016

Guilt is the source of sorrows, the avenging fiend that follows us behind with whips and stings.

-Nicholas Rowe

You wear guilt like shackles on your feet like halo in reverse.

-Depeche Mode

The worst guilt is to accept an unearned guilt.

Guilt can be a gift from God.

The OS justifies these quotes.

Return gifts( Experiment no. 2 by this novice after Restless one!!)-

Some( rather quite a few 😆) posters.😃 Like last time, I am posting all for I experimented a lot here and there and ended up confused as to which ones I should be posting here. Also I would like to add here that wilting flowers/roses here symbolise Abhi's guilt to me and hence I chose them for the backdrop. But I know which ones you will like more(hoping u will like them)! 😊 Find them below.

Frenzzy & u...i agree.

Moh moh ke dhage is perfect for this true to themselves, cute, so-much-in-love couple.

Moh Moh Ke Dhaage Lyrics

Moh moh ke dhaage, moh moh ke dhaage

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe
Hai rom rom ek tara
Hai rom rom iktaara
Jo badalon mein se guzre

Ye moh moh ke dhage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toh toh na lage
Kis tarah girah yeh suljhe

Tu hoga zaraa paagal
Tune mujh ko hai chuna
Tu hoga zara pagal
Tune mujh ko hai chunaa
Kaise toone ankahaa
Tune an-kahaa sab suna
Tu hoga zara paagal
Tune mujh ko hai chuna

Tu din sa hai, mein raat
Aana Donon mil jaayein shaamon ki tarah

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Yeh teri jhoothi baatein mai saari maan loon
Ke teri jhoothi baatein mai saari maan loon
Aankhon se tere sach sabhi, sab kuchh abhi jaan loon
Ke teri jhoothi baatein mai saari maan loon...

Tej hai dhaara behte se hum awaara
Aa tham ke saansein le yahaan

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah yeh suljhe

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JbDktrsnH40[/YOUTUBE]

Did your urge to have fuggy back in the show make u sketch your fuggy so beautifully? She is the fuggy u want to see...we all wanted to see, isn't she??

Oh,by the way, your name reminds me of this girl all the time.

Broom ritual..lol...India mein kaha se hain aap- n, s, e or w?? As always I won't quote lines, itna sab likhne/read karne ke baad neither of us have the stamina..and people have already covered more than I can think. U must be bored repeating the same responses to the same line being quoted so many times. Punishment quote+ frenzzy's comment summarises it well..! Isliye I won't quote. Thank u for 3 sorted Abhis back to back after a complex Abhi of Restless. Thank u for giving all these mushy scenes, lovemaking scenes/SR whatever, kissing scenes, thrills and frills all with the right tone/essence of Abhigya feel which won't ever be seen in the show/is lost somewhere. Nobody can match ur writing speed. Points to your spontaenity of thoughts, of everything else and in totality. Is it with time, experience and practice ya shuru se hi? Isliye I say, write a novel that can be oficially recognised, else I wish all of this could be published as a compilation with similar names or whatever way it is allowed or could be proceeded with.

Ps- when i set out, my brain was at sea wondering what to write and when i began writing, it turned into Sanya's pragya..Lol

PPS- I myself don't remember what all I had written and what all I referred to in the posts. But anyway posting things.

Posters

NB-It is the @bold moment that I have chosen for the poster. Apt or no??

"That broom burning ritual? Not again Fuggy!!!!", I laughed at her rolling her on to her back and noticed a film of tears in her spectacle covered eyes. I removed her glasses and asked what she was thinking.

"Thank you for sharing all that with me. You could have not told me anything at all. You could have slept with her and not told me at all. But you shared. It just strengthens my faith in you. Honestly, I do worry about all those pretty women around you. But I also believe in your genuine eyes, in your pure heart and in your love. And I know you will not betray me. Don't feel guilty about that one fraction of a moment. It's human and I understand. But I am proud of you, that you have it in you to share this with me. I love you", she wrapped her arms around me to hug me.

"I love you too, Fuggy", I said hugging her as tight as I could. I felt so much better.

NB 2- I am blank abhi bhi about what I am posting. Please ignore the follies. And since I talk about the show only through this and not elsewhere on the forum, perhaps I end up writing a lot.

I know my message is stale par ab late ho gaye to kya karein?? Hum post na karte in messages ko ye humein bilkul gavaara nahi!!😛

Haaye, my book cover is ready here! You know what this was a tiny bit OS, but this cover makes me feel like this one can make a whole story.. like Abhi meeting Tannu, sort of attracted... and all.. and guilt bothering him.. and finally him getting over the attraction...and coming clean with Pragya about what he went though. I should contact you for a cover now, rather than making my own edit for a banner!!

I can't even thank you enough for doing so much for my stories. I want to cry.