Guilt: Abhi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Tia, please take this big hug from me!!! 🤗🤗🤗 First off, I was reading your Chashmish OS (again) and was thinking if you could somehow continue that - I loved how subtly you had portrayed abhi's pov.. While that thought jus passed my mind, I was totally surprised to see your pm and to top that an Abhi OS!! It was like a cherry on top!! Thanks for reading my mind voice😳

And guess what! I discussed some TaBhi stuff in the Shabz AT earlier with Nadia and thought, lemme write something TaBhiGya. And then I saw that "Chashmish" fic brought to first page by a reader and it made me write it as Abhi's POV and it became an Abhi OS. I am glad our thinking matched.. actually it matches so many times. You read my POV out so well in my fics.

Anyway, you somehow make me love your abhi jus way too much every single time and this time is no different.. The stress of a busy workday taking a toll on the rockstar who wants nothing more than to complete the day's work before heading home - and there comes tanu invading his privacy or free time to get a break through for her career.. It shouldn't have come as a surprise to rockstar considering his line of work yet he wasn't expecting tanu to show up unannounced and throw herself on him jus so he would recommend her err., get her the chance for the movie.. He was too shocked, stunned to react and what with the hormones getting the better of him although it lasted jus for a moment - guilt took over his very being although he did nothing wrong jus losing himself for a second made him so guilty - jus loved how he came running back to his fuggy, his wife to find his solace... Loved how he was honest with fuggy and told her what happened earlier with tanu.. Fuggy was able to guess something was off of him within a min depicting the depth of their relationship.. Fuggy being the ever caring, loving wife was able to bring abhi out of guilt at the same time told him about how her trust in her husband always surpassed her insecurities.. Fuggy saying about warding off evil eye was soo cute😆 Fell in love with your Abhigya all over again esp your abhi!! Simply a beautiful one!! 😛

And thank you for catching on the important points of the story. I feel good when readers get what I want to tell about the characters. My work feels done.

Originally posted by: anamika.vg

Nice OS tia :)

Her trust on him & understanding ...loved the way he shared his feelings

Broon burning 😆..I think it's a ritual followed in all parts of India ..

Loved her possessive too

& thanks for putting the spl notes on top 🤣..I know its not possible for u to not mention her & me to like her 😆..she has tht effect on me

Thanks for the pm too 😆

Originally posted by: harisha_kb

Girl, u wrote this before I wake up 😆
If u direct ur shabo.

You will take some 10 soaps in the Span of 5 years 😆

Res

Originally posted by: sanya_p

OMG what a morning treat Tia!!!

I love this Abhi-Fuggy. Abhi's POV in your writing is always a treat for me. I loved the way how he changed after marriage. Whatever had happened couldn't have been new for him given by his Rockstar status but the way he felt guilt this time was so real. How he is a human no more a celebrity.

Fuggy is our as usual typical fuggy.😊

Loved it.

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Very nice OS Tia ( I hope I can call you that 😊)

I have read some of your writings of this forum and I must say you understand Abhi the most .. Your posts helps us to understand him better .. 😊 Will be looking forward to many more stories from you .. 😊