25th October Written Update!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here Is How It Starts........

Pratham Is Leaving The Hospital And Meets Gauri Outside. Gauri Says....."Pratham, Sanskriti?" Pratham Says....." She Just Told Us. She Fell. Fell. Is that Clear? Now Do You Know? You Said That, Right That Once Sankriti Is Conscious, The Truth Will Be Revealed? Now Do You Know The Truth? Or Is There Anything Else? With What Confidence, You Blamed Hiten? Talk! Now Why Aren't Who Talking? Sankriti's Explanation Lock Your Mouth Right? You Blamed Hiten, And Now You Have To Do One More Thing......APOLOGIZE!!!" GM Is Staring At PM With Widened Eyes. PM Continues..."Ab Aise Kya Ghoor Ghoor Ke Dekhri Ho Mujhe. You Made A Mistake......You Will Have To Apologize!" Gm Replies Immediately... "Pratham For Your Friend-" Pm Interrupts...." Not Only Is He My Friend. He Is Also The Going To Be Son-In-Law of The House." Gm Says..."But, Pratham" PM Interrupts Again...."Tumhe Mafi Mangni Hogi Matlab Hogi! Thats It."

In The Next Scene, Sanskriti Is In Bed And Hiten Is Kneeling Beside Her. Sanskriti Says... "You Didn't Tell Me Why You Asked Me To Lie." Hiten Goes Into A Flash Back.... Here Is How It Starts.... "Hiten is About Touch Sankriti's Head But She Pushes His Hand Away. Hiten Asks "Why Did You Push My Hand?" Sankriti Replies...." I Don't Want To Talk To You Hiten! You Broke My Trust. You Cheated On Me." Hiten Replies "In Life, A Person Makes Mistakes." Sanskriti Replies..." There Is A Big Difference In A Mistake And Doing It On Purposely. After Our Engagement, With Sheetal You......" Hiten Says " I Don't Want To Hide Anything From You, Sanskriti. Seetal's Dad Was My Business Client. And Nowadays His Health Is Not Very Good. So Sheetal Is helping Him Out. And With The Business Meetings And Stuff. We Grew A Weird Relationship. I Can't Call This Love, It Was Just An Attraction. Please Forgive Me For My Mistake Sanskriti. Just Give Me One Chance, I Will Never Hurt You. Please Sanskriti."......Flash Back Over. Sanskriti Say " You Didn't Tell Me Hiten Why You Told Me To Lie." Hiten Replies.."Because I Didn't Want To Go Away From You. I Gave You So Much Sadnees That I Thought You Would Tell Your Family That Because Of Me You Tried to Kill Yourself. And If This Happend, Then, I Would Have Lost My Family's, Your Family's, Pratham's, And Everyone's Trust. Then Our Marriage Probably Would Not Happen. Its Ok, If You Don't Want To Forgive Me, Don't. But Just Know This That Without You I Won't Be Able To Live." Hiten is About To Leave But Sanskriti Grabs His Hand. She Smiles At Him. Chotti Chachi Comes In. She Says "Uh...Hiten You Go Home Now, I Will Stay With Sanskriti." Hiten Looks At Sanskriti And She Smiles At Him. He Smiles Back. He Says Bye And Leaves.

Hiten is Now In The Hospital Hallway And PM And GM Come To Him. PM Says " Hiten..." He Stares At GM. He Continues..." Hiten... Whatever Happend Yesterday, Was Wrong. (he looks at gm) Gauri Shouldn't Have Done That." Hiten Says..." Oh, Its No Problem Pratham." Pm Says..." Hiten..Gauri Will Apologize To You." Hiten Says.."What Are You Talking About, Pratham? Its Ok, Yaar. A Person Has Misunderstandings Sometimes." PM Looks At GM. Gm Says.." I Am Sorry, Hiten." She Looks At PM. Hiten Says.."Bhabhi." Gm Looks At Pm An Leaves. PM Says.." I Don't Know What Has Happend To Gauri These Days. With Little Things She-" Hiten Interrupts.." Pratham, I Am Your Friend. And In Friendship You Don't Have To Be So Formal. Now Leave Everything. Forget It. Now Go To Bhabhi." PM Nods And Leaves.

In the Next Scene....GM Is In The Car Thinking About All The Fights PM And Her Have Had On This. She Looks Up And Sees Anita, Her Best Friend There. She Tells The Driver to Stop And Comes Out Of The Car. They Both Say Hi. Gm Says" Where Had You Gone?" Anita Says" I Just Had My Engagement." GM Replies "Engagement? Wow You Already Had An Engagement And You Didn't Even Tell Me." Anita Says " Everything Happend So Fast. i Couldn't Tell Anyone. But This Was Just An Engagement. Wait Till The Marriage. But Before It I Will Surely Let You Meet Him." And They Just Joke Around About How If Gm Doesn't Like Him Then She Will Reject Him. Anita Asks GM To Come To Her House And Drink Coffee. Gm Agrees And They Go In Gm's Car.

In the Next Scene Siddarth Is Walking Around His Room. And His Friends Come. He Greets Them. And They Are Talking About A Plan. And They Got Delayed Because They Had To Get Walkie Talkies.

Int The Next Scene, Gm Is In Her Room On The Bed Looking At A Radio. And Raghu Comes In And He Asks Her What She Is Doing With The Radio. She Says " Nothing, It Just Has Been Lying Around For So Many Says That I Just Want To Play It And See If It Works. He Asks Where He SHould Put The Tea And She Just Says To Leave It. And He Leaves. GM Finally Starts The Radio. And It Picks Up Siddarths Walkie Talkie. And They Go Over The Plan. About Getting The Test Papers. Siddarth Close It and Starts To Leave The House. And GM Stops Him. She Asks Him "Where Are You Going This Late?" Sid Says.." Oh I Am Just Going To Study With my Friend, Kapil. We Have Exams Tomorrow." Gm Asks Him.." Without Your Books, What Studying Will You Do?" Sid Says They Are At Kapil's House. GM Says" There Is No Need To Go There. Just Study Here." PM Comes Out. And Asks What Is The Problem. Sid Says" I Want To Go To My Friend's House And Study But Bhabhi Told Me Not To." Pm Looks At Her. He Tells Sid To Go. He is About To Leave But GM Tells Him To Stop. PM Comes To Her And Says " What Is Your Problem? Go,Siddarth." Sid Leaves. PM Is About To Go In the Room. GM Says " Before I heard that Because Of The Big Brother The Small One Became Bad. Now I Have Seen It." Pm Comes Up To Her And Says "What Do You Want To Say?" GM Says.."He Has Gone To School In the Principal's Office. And At This Time No One Goes There." Pm Says.. "Stop Your Nonsense! You Just Want To Blame Everyone. First Hiten And Now Siddarth." GM Leaves.

In The Next Scene.. They Are Discussing Their Plan. They Are Sending Sid And Another Friend To Do It. The Other Two Are Just Going to Stand Guard. A Car Comes. The Four Look At It. Guess Who Comes? PRATHAM!!! Siddarth Looks At Him. He Says " Bhaiya, Aap." The Three friends Leave Sid And Run. Sid And PM Stare At Each Other.

In The Next Scene, Sid And PM Enter the House. Pm Says " Go To Your Room. Don't Even Say Sorry! If Someone Found Out About This Then What Respect Would We Have! All College Will Call You Paper Thief!" Sid Says "Bhaiya. I Came Under The Influence Of My Friends. The Friends Said So You Will Do It?! If They Plan A Bigger Robbery Then Will You Help Them Out In That Too? Look Sid, I Had A Lot Of Fun In College Too But I Have Never Done A Thing That Our Family Will Be Disgraced. You Understand?" Sid Says " I Promise You. I Will Never Do This Again." PM Says " Good. Siddarth,The Time And Brain You Put On Doing A Bad Thing. If You Had Done It Studying Then You Would Have A Good Score. Best Of Luck And GO Study😊" Sid Leaves. Now Pm Thinks To Him Self.....This Means Gauri Was Right, Without Knowing The Truth I Shouldn't Have Said All That Stuff.

In the Next Scene PM Goes Into The Room And GM Is Sleeping. Pm Sits By Her. he Is About To Touch her Head But Stops And Brings His Hand Back. He Smiles And Says To Himself " Good Thing Your Sleeping. Because I Wouldn't Be Able To Say That My Brother Was Wrong. And You Were Right. Because Of You I Found Out.Please For-" He Realizes She Is Sleeping. He Gets Up. And Thinks That She Is Awake Because His Kurta Is Stuck And He Thinks She Held It. But He Turns Around And She Is Sleeping. He Laughs And Leaves. And Then GM Smiles. She Thinks About All The Fights They Have Had. And Then A Couple Of Cute Scenes.

In The Next Scene, The Chachus And And Umesh Are Talking. They Are Talking About The Wedding. PM Comes Too. And A Police Officer Comes...And Says " Oy umesh,Congratulations!!!" Umesh hugs Him.They Have A Few okes. And The Police Off. Says " I Have To Go. My Nephew the Police Off. Is Waiting For Me." PM Says " He Should Have Came. I Will Go And Get Him."

PM Is Now Outside And Say Excuse Me to the Off.. It Is The Officer He Went To With the Girl. The Off. Says"What Are You Doing Here?" And GM Is Coming. PM Is Confused....And It Ends!

SRY For The Delay My Comp Is Actually Frozen And My Cuzn Mailed It To Me....I Am At The Library And Doing This....It Was Her First time.......Sry For Anything.And Plz Comment. 26th Coming Soon!!!!!

Edited by kmishra - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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no replies? 😭
im sry it took long
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey kalee.. thanx for the superb update. its fantastic. thanx a ton 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very well written thanks alot dear.. 😳 😳

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