Ek Saza Ya Dua RN FF

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Ek Saza ya Dua RN FF

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Naveen Singh Alluhwalia : He is a army officer posted in KMA. His best friend is Raj. His sister means the world to him. His parents are no more. Naveen has misunderstood Naina so they are not talking to eachother since 2 years. He doesn't know where Naina is currently.

Naina Singh Alluhwalia : She is in 1st year cadet in KMA. Loves her brother as she lost her parents at a very small age. Currently Naveen and Naina are not in talking terms. She is not aware of his posting too.

Rajveer Singh Shekawat : He is posted in KMA. Naveens best friend. Naina's lover.

Alekh: He is 1st year cadet in KMA. Naina's best friend. He understands Naina very nicely.

Pooja: She is 1st year cadet in KMA. Has come here cuz her parents wanted her to marry so she ran from her house.

Ali: He is 1st year cadet in KMA. Known as Usool Bhai very serious person. He is from army background

Yudi: He is 1st year cadet in KMA. He is a technology person. Funny nature. He wants to prove his parents thats y he is here in KMA.

Huda : He is 1st year cadet. He joined KMA cuz he lost bet wid his mom. Loves his "Bhains".

Shalini: She is a doc in KMA. She is Naveens lover. But has never met Naina but has heard alot about her. She always encourages naveen to talk to Naina but he is guilty.


Sherry: Rajs best friend. She is Lala Ghelots daughter.

Karan: Naina and Naveen cousin. Stays in abroad. Has always supported Naina. He is close to Naina after Naveen.

Neelu : Yudi's sis. Very smart. Has fallen in love with Alekh but is not ready to accept it.

B.C : The head of KMA

Abhimanyu Chouhan : He is Raj and Naveens friend. He is prince of balmer. Hates to be treated as prince. He considers Naina to be his younger sis. He helped Naina when she was all alone. He is still looking for his dream girl.

Manav : Naina was in love with him. But he took her advantageand misused her. Left her on the day of marriage. Naina ran away from her house as Naveen was against it.

Dr Ritu : As a psychologist in KMA. Tries to flirt with Raj and Naveen. Related with Manav too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am always eager to read Rajveer-Naina fanfics. Here's another one. 😊 Thank you for choosing to write on Rajveer-Naina. 😊 Interesting characters. Waiting to see how the story shapes. 😳
Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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wow new rn ff
really nice intro yr
manav misused naina ???? i just hope not in that way hope every think will be gud
waiting for further parts...
cont soon
n plz update regularly

love Arti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RNforever

wow new rn ff
really nice intro yr
manav misused naina ???? i just hope not in that way hope every think will be gud
waiting for further parts...
cont soon
n plz update regularly

love Arti

waiy for further parts lits of twist and turns
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice characters
Cont soon. Dear
It's some thing diff
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi
the intro is really nice
plz cont soon and pm me
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Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

I am always eager to read Rajveer-Naina fanfics. Here's another one. 😊 Thank you for choosing to write on Rajveer-Naina. 😊 Interesting characters. Waiting to see how the story shapes. 😳

Thank u soomuch. will update soon.
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Originally posted by: rkchandni

Really nice characters

Cont soon. Dear
It's some thing diff

thank u :)
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Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the intro is really nice
plz cont soon and pm me

thank u will surely pm u :)
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Part 1

Today its a big day in their life. All the 1st year cadets have started coming to KMA. KMA is one of the best institute in India. The rules and regulations are to be followed no matter what he criteria is! BC is waiting for all the cadets to come. Naveen and Dr Shalini are already in the academy. Naveen is unaware of Naina's admission in KMA as he is not in contact with her after the dreadful incident. Raj is posted in KMA as a new faculty. Naveen and Shalini are really excited to meet him.

Soon the cadets start coming. The very first cadet to arrive is Cadet Ali at BC offie

Ali : Cadet Ali reporting sir.

BC : Welcome to KMA. I hope you will not disappoint me and follow all the rules. You may go to your respective room and remember donot roam in the academy after light out.

Ali : Yes sir. I will surely not disappoint you.

Now all the cadet start entering as follow

Pooja : Cadet Ghai reporting sir.

BC : Welcome to KMA. Remember you got admission here cause of your sports. I hope you will be able to pass through all the exams.

Pooja : Yes sir I will clear all the exams.

Alekh : He directly reports Suriji.

Alekh comes from the prison and questions Suriji Kya karenka hai apunko?

Suriji : Kuch nahi puttarji. Tu yaha sirf desh ki seva ke liye aaya hai. Tujhe bas wohi karna hai ab chal tujhe tera karma dikhata hu.

Yudi : Cadet Yudi reporting sir.

BC : Cadet aap aisa bikul na samaje ki aapko yaha aapke parents ki sifarish ke wajase liya hai. Aap yaha apne kabilat ke wajase hai. Aap apne room me jaa sakte hai.

Yudi : Thank you sir.

Naina : Cadet Naina reporting sr.

BC : Yes cadet tum yaha training ke liye aayi ho. Apna dyaan sirf usme hee rakhna na ki saajne savarne me. Agar tum chaho abhi bhi backout kar sakti ho. Tum modelling kar sakti ho fir desh ki seva kyu karna chahti ho?

Naina : Sir me yaha apne desh ke liye aayi hu. Mujhe modelling karne me koi interest nhi. Me apne desh ke liye apni jaan kurbaan kar sakt hu. Har ek exam me top karungi chahe jo hojaye

BC : I like your attitude cadet. Ab aage dekhte hai tum kya kar sakti ho. You can leave for your room now.

Naina : Yes sir. Me aapko prove karke dikhaungi.

BC : Orderly kya sab cadets aagaye ?

Orderly : Nahi sir abhi tak Cadet Huda nhi aaya hai.

BC : Theek hai time hone ke baad kisiko bhi entry lene mat dena. You may leave.

Huda : Cadet Huda reporting sirji.

BC : Tum late 2 mis late ho cadet.

Huda : Woh siriji raaste me gadi kharab hogyi thi. Sorry siriji yeh aakhri galti hai.

BC : Theek hai. I hope tum aisa wapas nhi karoge. Now you may leave.

All the cadets meet their roommates. Ali and Alekh are roommates, Huda and Yudi, Naina and Pooja.

All six meet in the canteen and have introduction section. Huda tries to flirt with Naina and ignores him. Meanwhile Naveen and Shalini are together in Naveens room having coffee together. Suddenly Shalini ask Naveen about Naina.

Shalini : Tum kabtak use naraaz rahoge aise. Usne kitni baar maafi mangi tumse bacchii thi woh galti hojaati hai.

Naveen : Nahi Shalini me use uski yeh harkat ke liye kabhi bhi maaf nahi karunga. Accha hai Maa Baba ab nahi warna un par kya guzarti yeh koi nhi jaanta. Tum kyu uske bare me jab dekho baat karti ho. Kal ke bare me socho aur naye cadets ke bare me. Mere liye woh mar chuki hai jis din woh us Manav ke sath bhag gayi thi Shaadi karne ke liye. Accha yeh sab chodo meine sunna hai yeh time ke cadets bohot determined hai.

Shalini : Haa yaha jo bhi aata hai soldier banke jaata hai. Dekhta hai yeh time ke cadets ka josh. By the way pata hai raj kab aane wala hai?

Naveen : Nahi usne yeh sab ke bare me kuch bataya nahi hai. Par woh kisi bhi samay aata hoga.

BC : Welcome to KMA Captain Rajveer. I'm proud of you Captain. Aapne KMA ka naam roshan kiya hai. Appko pata hoga aapke dost bhi yahi posted hai.

Raj : Thank you sir. Me janta hu ki Captain Naveen and Dr Shalini yahi hai

BC : Aap yaha Strategy ke faculty honge hai. Aapse umeed hai ki aap cadets ko bohot acchse train kare. Aap jaa sakte hai aur apne dosto ko mil sakte hai.

Raj : Yes sir.

On the way to Naveens room he clashes with Naina.

Raj : Fresher ?

Naina : Yes

Raj : Name?

Naina : Cadet Naina Ah Singh

Raj : Captain Rajveer Strategy Teacher. You may leave cadet as its going to be light out time.

Naveens Room

Raj : Naveen me aagaya mere dost. Kaisa hai tu? Kaha tha itna time laga diya tune. Arre kuch nahi woh ek cadet mil gayi raste me. Bohot ajeeb thi aisa lag raha tha jaise apne saare dukh andar daba ke rakhke hai.

Naveen : Interesting!! Kya naam hai uska?

Raj : Cadet Naina

Naveen : (Shocked) Kya Naina? (He remembers everything and has tears in his eyes)

Raj : Kya hua Naveen? Tu uske bare me fir soch raha hai. Tu baat karle use agar itna yaad karta hai. Baachi thi woh maaf karde

Naveen : Nahi Raj aisa kabhi nhi hoga aaj bhi mujhe woh din yaad hai jab mujhe us Manav ke bare me pata chala tha. Bohot samajaye use but Naina ne meri ek nhi sunni aur ghar chodhkar chali gayi. Chal chod tu aaram kar Shalini ko me batata hu kit u aagaya hai.

Shalini : Iski koi zarurat nahi. Me khud yaha aa gayi hu. Raj kaise ho tum? Kaisa rha tumhara safar? Tum hange karlo me kuch laati hu tumhare liye

Raj : Tum abhi tak waisi ho. Kitna bolti ho ek sath. Safar aur me dono hee acche hai. Aur plz jaldi lau mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai. Me abhi aaya hange karke.

Nainas Room she is thinking how her life changed after that dreadful incident.

Naina : Kyu hua mere sath aisa. Kash meine bhaiya ki baat maan li hoti toh aisa kuch nahi hota. Manav kyu kiya aisa me kitna pyaar karti thi tumhe aur tumne. (tears in her eyes)

Pooja : Oyee Naina tujhe soona nhi. Kal se hum sabki lft right left shuru hone wali hai. Sooja kal jaldi uthna hai.

Naina : Haa kal se nayi zindagi ki shuruvat hai.

She goes to sleep.

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