Ek Saza Ya Dua RN FF - Page 5

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Awesome dear.plz update & pm me

thank u iv updates the nexxt part.

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Nyc part dear
Finally av pta toh chala naina ka thoda sa sach
Bt reveal it soon yar
Naina ir manav ka divorce nd who is manav whts his identity nd must sure he is bad guy
Naveen concern for naina
Raj nw also know about naina real identity
Plz reveal soon dear

Love lots
Millee

thank u. updated the next part waiting for ur reviews

Originally posted by: Acad10

Wonderful update!!

Cont soon

thank u :)

Really nice n loved it cont soon

Grt story line dear..but the pace is too fast I guess..u may be a little slower and descriptive:) otherwise grt going

Originally posted by: gargy4u

Grt story line dear..but the pace is too fast I guess..u may be a little slower and descriptive:) otherwise grt going

thank u. Dis is my first ff ive neva written nything in my life. Tryon my best will surely keep ur point in mind :)

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Really nice n loved it cont soon

thank u :)

Part 7

Next day Raj goes to the BCs office and tells him everything. Raj goes to shift the triggers to a safer place. Naveen meets naina and ask her regarding her health and tells her to take rest. Naina meets her friends and decides something.

Pooja : Oye tera matlab hai Captain Naveen tere bhai hai? Tune humlogo ko bola kyu nahi? Humlog tere dost nahi?

Naina : Pooja aisi koi baat nahi. M sorry.

Pooja : Chal theek hai maaf kiya tujhe. Ab bol kya karna hai?

All the cadets smile.

Naina : Tumlogo ko jaise pata hai kal humlogo ko free day hai toh meine socha hai ki kyu na hum Captain Naveen and Dr Shalini ke liye engagement party rakhe?

Huda : Naina matlab tera bhai aur woh motherindia ek dusre se pyaar karte hai?

Naina : Haa aur tu meri bhabhi ko motherindia mat bol and laughs.

Huda : Kya phoolan tu janti haina. Chal ab plan bata?

Naina : Pooja tu aur Ali jaake rings leke aau. Me jaa nahi sakti warna shak hojayega.

Alekh : Naina yeh laila majnu gayab hojayenge aur saala kaam bhul gaye toh.

Pooja : Oyee qaidi tu chup kar samja me karlungi.

Ali : Kya alekh bhai hum aisa kuch nahi karenge.

Huda : Dekh yeh chalo hogaya apni laila ka majnu.

Alekh : Nataunki Salaa.

All of them laugh.

Naina : Yudi aur Alekh khaane ur decorations par kaam karenge. Huda tu mere sath chal humlog bahar jaate hai shopping ke liye.

Yudi : Naina tum mujhe apna fav color and all bolo me abhi sab karta hu don't worry.

Huda in his mind : Aaj pehli baar phoolan ne mere sath bahar jaane ki baat ki hai.

Alekh : Zyada mat soch saale meri behen ko tang mat karna. :p

Naina : Huda kaha kho gaya chal bhaiya ke samne kuh bahana banate hai.

Naveen : Kaun kidhar jaa rha hai? Naina u are not aloowed to go anywhere.

Naina : Plz bhaiya mujhe huda ke sath baju ke mandir me jaana hai!!

Naveen : No need Naina u are still not well.

Huda : Sir me naina ka dyaan pakka rakhunga.

Naveen gives a stern look to Huda.

Huda : Sorry Sir.

All the cadets leave and do the respective work except Huda.

Naina : Bhaiya plz aap jaane do pakka me jaldi aa jaungi. Aur huda mujhe kuch hone nahi dega.

Naveen : Theek hai aaj tak teri zidd kea age me kabhi jeeta hu?

Naina laughs : Nahi me abhi huda ko dekhti hu.

Naveen : Yeh meri car hai usme jaa. And apna plz khayal rakhna. Me huda ko bhejta hu.

Naveen calls Huda and gives him instructions too.

Huda and Naina go out to some mall.

Naina : Huda jaldi kar humlogo ko jaldi academy jaana hai.

Huda : Haa phoolan chal rhe haina tujhe itni jaldi kya.

Naina : Huda jaisa me bol rhi hu waisa kar warna tu gaya.

They both are unaware some people are following them.

They both reach the mall.

Naina : huda yeh dress kaisi rahegi?

Huda : Bohot acchi tujh par bohot acchi lagegi.

Naina : Me apne liye nahi shalini mam ke liye dekh rahi hu.

Huda : Accha hai. Mummy ji tujhe aise dekhti toh abhi rishta le aati tere ghar.

Naina gets angry : Huda tu plz shaadi ki bakwas mat kar samja. Kitni baar bola hai. Aur sun me kisike sath shaadi nahi karungi. Shaadi sirf ek saza hai bus samja tu.

Huda : Phoolan chill sorry galti hgoyi ab jaldi kare warna problem hojayegi chal.

Naina and Huda take the dresses respectively.

Alekh and Yudi are seeing the decoration and food stuff.

Alekh : Yaha aake me kasam se bawarchi hee ban gaya hu. Behen ke pyaar me kya kya nahi karna padhta.

Yudi : Cheif kaisa lag rha hai yeh?

Alekh : Salale teko jo karna hai kar apun ko apne kaam me dyaan dene de.

Yudi : Ek kaam karta hu me Neelu ko bhulata hu.

Alekh : Teko jo karna hai tu kar but apun ka beja mat kha.

Neelu enters the mess.

Neelu : Mujhe kisine yaad kiya?

Alekh : Shaitaan ka socha aura a gayi woh.

Yudi : Sis yeh decoration kaisa hai?

Neelu : Accha hai.

Yudi : Neelu ek kaam karu yeh Alekh ki bhi madad karlo warna pata nahi kab tak khaana banega.

Neelu : Kya baat hai mera bhai khud setting kar rha hai. Chal kaam par lag jaa.

She goes to Alekh and flirts with him.

Alekh : Tu apun ko madad karne aayi hai yaa kaam bigadne. Zyada shaani nahi ban aur kaam kar samji.

Neelu : theek hai hal bol kya karna hai.

Alekh explains the work to her and she does that nicely.

Pooja and Ali are back to the academy.

Huda and naina are on the way. Naina sees someone from the car and gets scared and faints again. Huda gets tensed and takes her to the hospital. Naveen comes to know rushes to the hospital.

Naveen : Kya hua do sab theek.

Doc : Aisa kabhi kabhi hota hai she is jus stressed. Aap unhe leke jaa sakte hai.

Naveen : Theek hai doc.

Naina in her roomsays something : Firse aagaya woh mujhe bacha lena bhaiya.

Naveen : Kya hua kaun aagaya Naina?

Naina : Koi nahi academy ce. M sorry bhai.

Naveen : Chal theek hai. Huda humara wait kar rha hai halo.

They reach the academy and even Raj arrives now. He is shocked to see naina in the situation again. Naina and Huda leave for their rooms.

Naina goes near the telephone booth and calls someone.

Naina : hello bhai kaisie ho?

Person : Me theek hu tm batau?

Naina : me theek hu woh firse aagaya hai. Mujhe dar lag rha hai.

Person : Daro mat ab Naveen aur raj bhi sath hai tumhare.

Naina in her mind wohi dar hai.

Person : Hello Hello.

Naina : Arre haa me bol rahi hu. Yeh sab tension me aapko batana bhul gayi ki kal aapko academy aana hai. Bhaiya ki engagement party ke liye. Yeh suprise hai soo plz.

Person : Theek hai aap jaise chaiye waise hoga and haa tension mat kijiye.

Naina : Ok byee me rakhti hu. Kal bohot kaam hai.

She hangs and goes to her room now. On her way she sees Rajs room open.She goes there as she forgot to invite him.

Naina : Sir kya me andar aa sakti hu?

Raj : Yes sure cadet. Kuch prob hai?

Naina : Nahi sir. Woh me aapko bhaiya ke engagement ke liye invite karne aayi hu.

Raj : Kab kisse ?

Naina : Kal aur aap aise mat banye jaise aapko pata nahi?

Raj : Tum toh badi smart nikali cadet. Me aa jayunga koi kaam hai toh batana.

Naina : Sure and leaves.

Naveen comes to Raj room den. He informs about what happened.

Raj : Naveen tu tension mat le abhi me kisiko bolta hu pata lagan eke liye.

Naveen : Dekh kal uska birthday hai mujhe kuch nhi chaiye.

Raj in his mind : Me kaise bhulgaya kal naina ka birthday hai.

Naveen : Raj tu sun rha haina me kya bol rha hu.

Raj : Haa tu tension mat le jaake sooja.

Naveen : haa theek hai.

Raj calls someone and tells to keep a watch and sleeps.

Its a big day for naina and naveen too lets see what happens..

Really very niceee cont soon

Good update!!