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Part 2

Next day morning everyone assembles in the hall. All the cadets are waiting and the BC arrives.

BC : Good Morning cadets jaisa ki aap jante ho aapka aaj pehle din hai KMA me. Let me now introduce you to the faculty of KMA. Captain Naveen will be your drill incharge. Captain Rajveer will be your strategy teacher. Dr Shalini you know. You all will be having a psychologist soon. She will arrive tomorrow her name is Dr Ritu Mishra. Now you may dismiss for your drill.

As Naina hears Naveens name she is shocked and in tears but controls her emotion and leaves for the drill.

Naveen has his first class and takes the introduction from all. As he sees Naina he is shocked and at the same time gets irritated but doesn't reacts and commands everyone to take 50 rounds on field for an hour and leaves.

Pooja : Yeh sir ko kya hua Naina? Ajeeb hai yaha ke log waise bhi.

Naina : Chod Pooja ab jaldi karte hai warna fir lunch karne nhi milega.

Alekh : Yaha nhi yeh left right chalo. Chal apun apna yeh pura karke thoda pita hai.

Yudi : Kya peene wale ho tum cheif?

Alekh (gives his no nonsense wala look) : Aa teko kya karna hai. Apun kya karta hai kya nahi. Tu apne kaam se kaam rakh.

Ali : Kya Alekh Bhai aap fir sharab pee rhe ho. Yeh galat baat hai.

Huda : Arre Ali jaane de woh waise bhi qaidi hai kisko samja rha hai tu yaar.

Alekh gets angry and is about to punch Huda but Yudi and Ali stop them.

They all go to the mess. Huda flirts with Naina.

Huda : Arre oo Naina tuumhe me kaisa lagta ho?Arre oo kudiye aisi koi ladki nhi jispar Huda ka charm nhi chalta samji. Tu jaldi meri hogi.

Naina : Huda faltu ki bakwas mat kar.

Pooja : Arre Jat kyu pareshan kar rha hai use.

Huda : Arre punjaben tu beech me mat aa.

Ali : Huda thoda tameez se. Aur yeh sab mat kareiye. Hum yaha sipahi banne aaye hai.

Alekh and Yudi are least interested in their conversation and leaves for his room.

Naveen is in his room thinking about Naina. Shalini and Rajveer enter his room but he doesn't comes to know as he is lost in his thoughts.

Shailini : Kya soch rhe ho tum Naveen?

Naveen : Woh kuch nhi jaane do ( He decides he wont say about Naina that she is his sister)

Raj : Shalini chod woh aur kiske bare me soch sakta hai jab tak tum ho uski zindagi me.

Naveen : Raj aisa nhi hai dost. Me yeh naye cadets ke bare me soch raha tha. Bohot alag hai yeh log.

Shalini : Woh toh tumne sahi kaha me aaj woh cadet Naina se mili woh bohot alag hai dusri ladkiyu se bohot alag. Uske dimag me kuch toh chal rha hai. Raj ne sahi kaha tha uske bare me.

Raj : Ha ab kal pata chalega mujhe meri class me. Kal mera class hai in cadets ke sath. Naveen tum batau tumhe kyat um bhi Naina ke bare me waisa sochte ho?

Naveen is shocked but replies : Raj yaha sab bohot determined aate hai sabko ek sipahi banna hai. Yeh sab chodho arre Shalini tum kaha jaa rhi ho sath me lunch karlo.

Shalini : Nahi mujhe kuch kaam hai tumlog carry karo. Me tumhe baad me milti hu.

Naveen : Theek hai jaisa tum chaho.

Raj : Kya baat hai Naveen tum mujhse kuch chupa rhe ho kya ?

Naveen : Nahi raj aisa kuch nhi. Tu bata kya teri Chouhan se baat hoti hai?

Raj : Naveen tu sidha sidha puch. Tujhe Naina ke bare me jaane na haina?

Naveen : Nahi meine aisa kab bola. Woh jiye ya mare mujhe koi farak nhi padhta.

Let me clear Raj has never met Naina. But knows about her lil cause of Naveen as he use to talk about her during his academic days.

Raj : Naveen mujhe jhoot mat bol. Tu kyu nhi milta use ek baar. Bohot saal hogye hai. Ab maaf kar le.

Naveen : Nahi Raj usne jo kiya galat kiya. Mujhe use koi rista nahi rakhna.

Raj : Jaise teri marzi. Me tujhe force nhi karunga.

They had their lunch.

Raj : Waise Abhi ko bhi filal nahi pata hai teri behen kaha hai kyuki woh 2 mahine pehle waha se chali gayi thi and leaves.

Naveen in his mind : Mujhe pata hai dost kyuki woh yaha hai. Mujhe nahi chaiye kit um sab jaano ki Cadet Naina Singh hee meri chutki Naina hai. Woh waise bhi purani wali Naina hai hee nhi.

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Naveen : Chutki me jaa rha hu. Plz tu roo mat.

Naina : Theek hai bhai apna dyaan rakhna. Abhimanyu bhaiya ko mera puchna.

Naveen : Theek hai chutki. Aur koi tujhe tang kare toh batana mujhe.

Naina : Bhai aap tension mat lo me sambhal lungi.

Flashback ends.

Naveen : Kash tum pehle jaisi hoti jo meri har baat manti.

Naina in her room.

Naina thinking : Bhaiya I miss you. Aap mere samne hai par bohot dur. Mujhe maaf kar diye plz. Manav ko me chodungi nahi. Agar uss din me use shaadi ke liye bhagti nahi karti toh shayad aapki jinda nahi hote. Me jaanti hu meine aapka barosa thoda but me mujhbur thi.

I hope ul like it. Sorry if there are any mistakes.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi
the up is really good
so the introduction class started and Naveen is shocked to see Naina over there but he composed himself and also hide the truth from his friends ie Raj and Shaliny
aww poor naina and naveen both are suffering
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
so the introduction class started and Naveen is shocked to see Naina over there but he composed himself and also hide the truth from his friends ie Raj and Shaliny
aww poor naina and naveen both are suffering
plz cont soon and pm me

thank u n will surely update it soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1 n part 2
Both parts are awsmm dear
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting start dear
liked it
do continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome concept dear
Continue soon
Egar to know wht ll happen soon
Do pm me dear whenever u ll update
I had send u req
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Awesome concept dear
Continue soon
Egar to know wht ll happen soon
Do pm me dear whenever u ll update
I had send u req

thank u will surely pm u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prerna1

interesting start dear
liked it
do continue soon...

Thank U :)
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Part 3

Next day they have lecture of Captain Rajveer. Naina came early for the lecture. Captain Rajveer enters the class and is shocked to see cadet naina early.

Raj : Cadet aap jaldi ? Aap ke sathi kaha hai?

Naina : Sir bus yuhi and looks down.

Raj : ( Cadet Singh kuvh toh chupa rahi hai. Par kya iska pata me laga ke rahunga.)

Meanwhile all cadets arrive.

Raj : So cadets aa sab toh jante hai me aapka strategy lecturer hu. And starts explaining something. Naina is concentrating on it.

Huda : Oyee phoolan tu kya itna dyaan se sun rhi hai.

Naina : Ignores him and gives him a killer look.

Huda throws a chit on Naina and that time Rajveer sees it and tells her to read it.

Naina : Sir meine kuch nhi kiya.

Raj : Cadet Im jus saying read it.

Naina : Sir isme likha hai ki "yeh class kabtak hai. Mujhe bohot neend aa rhi hai."

Raj : Sorry cadets agar meine bore kiya. But mujhe nahi pata tha aaplog itna jaldi bore hojauge.

Naina sees that his fone is ringing and interrupts him

Naina : Sir woh...

Raj : Its ok cadet. You may dismiss (he says this in full attitude)

All the cadets leave. They have the next drill with Dr. Shalini.

Shalini : So cadets me aapka medical check up karungi kyuki aapk job hi drill kare usme aap fit rehne chaiye. So aap sab cadets eke k karke aage aayiye.

She checks all the cadets bt at that time again Huda troubles Naina. Naina punches him. Dr Shalini is shocked..

Shalini : What is this cadet? Thats wrong don't repeat it again. Cadet Huda aap bhi plz inhe tang mat kijiye warna mujhse bura koi nhi hoga. Aap sab ab chup chap apna check up karvaiye.

After the check up they all leave Shalini goes to the mess. There she meets Naveen and Rajveer. They are having coffee.

Shalini : I hope meine do doston ko disturb nhi kiya?

Naveen : Nahi meri jaan.

Raj : Tum kya kabhi disturb karti ho? Aur Naveen ko kiya bhi toh woh chup chap tumhare samne kuch bol pata hai :p

Naveen : Raj tu mujhe pakka pitwayega ek din and gives Raj a look to shut up.

Raj laughs and Shalini is siting now. Seeing Shalini so quiet Naveen question her.

Naveen : Kya hua Shalu tum itni chup?

Shalini : Arre Naveen aaj me sab cadets ka check up kar rahi thi tabhi cadet Huda ne cadet Naina ko firse irritate kiya hoga. Toh cadet Naina ne usko ek punch mara. Woh itni sorted hai mujhe nahi pata that itni strong bhi.

Naveen in his mind : Sahi kiya Naina ne. Woh toh aisi hee hai. Sirf woh Manav ke wajase badal gyi thi.

Raj : Haa mere class me bhi aaj aisa hee hua but mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki cadet singh kuch chupa rhi hai.

Naveen : Raj jaane do na naye hai and tries to change the topic.

Raj in his mind : Jab bhi hum me se koi Cadet Singh ka name lete hai pata nhi Naveen aise kyu react karta hai.

All the cadets enter the mess. Tabhi Naveen sees Naina. As Naina sees Naveen she gets a tear from her eye but looks somewhere else to avoid him. Naveen at the same time notices it and feels bad but ignores and leaves from the mess saying he has some work. Seeing him i this way Shalini also follows him. This all is noticed by Shalini too.

Raj : Suriji aaj kya hai khaane m?

Suriji : Aree puttar jot u bol. Tere liye specially banwa deta hu.

Raj : Nahi suriji iski koi zarurat nahi.

Oderly enters at that time. He calls cadet Singh aapke liye fone hai.

Naina in her mind : Mujhe kaun fone kar sakta hai. Kisi ko pata thodi ki me yaha hu. And goes to receive the fone

Raj at the same time leaves

Naina : Hello kaun

Person : Arre meri jaan tune mujhe pechanna nahi ?

Naina gets angry and replies : Tumhe kaise pata chala me yaha hu. Koi zarurat nahi mujhe fone karne ki. Tumhari wajase me bohot kuh kho chuki hu. Agle baar fone mat karna and keeps the fone and leaves.

On the way see again is lost in her world and clashes with Rajveer. They have a eye lock.

Naina : Sorry Sir.

Raj : Its okay cadet but aap kaha khuyi hui hai?

Naina: Kuch nhi sir lights out ka time hogaya hai and leaves to avoid more questions.

Raj : Sure cadet.

Raj in his room.

Raj in his mind : Aakir kya hai jot um chupa rahi hu cadet? Kaun ho tum aur kya maksad hai tumhara. Iska pata toh me karke rahunga. Kya yeh Naveen ki behen toh nhi kyuki uska naam bhi Naina hai. Jo kuch bhi hai me pata laga ke rahunga.

Naveen in his room thinking about Naina.

Naveen : Kya Manav ne Naina ko chod toh nhi diya. Naina yaha kya karne aayi hai. Woh aise toh pehle thin hi itni chup. Me bale hee tujhse naraaz hu Naina but tere aakho me aasu nhi dekh sakta me jo kuch bhi hai dhund ke rahunga ki kya kiya usne tere sath.

Shalini : Kisne kya kiya Naveen? Tum kya khud se badbada rhe ho?

Naveen : Aree kuch nhi meri jaan. Me soch rha hu bohot din hogaye hai hum dono date par nhi gaye. Kal waise bhi Sunday hai sath me lunch par jaate hai.

Shalini : Kya baat hai aaj bada pyaar aa rha hai? :p

Naveen : Kya yaar jab me roamnace karta hu tab problem nhi karta tab. Kya karu me?

Shalini : Kuch nhi bus mera khayal rakho and hugs him.

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