manan ff - EXISTENCE of love....updated chapter 11- pg 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys!!!! I am not new to this forum or show...but there is soo much negativity in the forum because of this " ohh so big world war of fans". So i am just trying to spread some positivity by writing a new manan ff.. I am writing story in this forum first time...

Hope you guys will support me in it...
I m coming on the story.. It is totally different from the kyy.. I m not giving any character sketch or anything like prologue..the characters trait will be revealed as the story progresses..Hope you guys like it..

Here goes...

LONDON, 3 AM

" THEY ARE NOTHING TO ME BUT JUST A BURDEN FOR ME "

" I WAS WITH YOU OUT OF COMPULSION NOT OUT OF LOVE "

" YES YOU HEARD ME RIGHT.. I DONT LOVE YOU... IN FACT I HAVE NEVER LOVED YOU "

" I LOVE SOMEONE ELSE "

" AND I AM LEAVING FOR FOREVER "

A girl suddenly wake up from her nightmare. Yes, you heard it right.. It was nightmare which haunts her everyday. Its not just a nightmare it is her haunted memory of past which she cant forget..in fact she never wants to forget it...

She drank water from the side table of her bed and she walked out of the room towards staircase..

At the pool side area of the same house...

A guy is sitting near pool dipping his legs in the chilly water. He hears footsteps from behind coming towards him..

Guy - here you come...i was waiting for u..

A girl sits beside him dipping her legs in the water.. Few minutes there was silence between them. Cool breeze was caressing her hair and moonlight reflected their face in the water. The silence was broken by him again..
Guy - again the same nightmare??
Girl - hmmm...
Guy - why dont u forget everything nandu??
Yes. She was none other than NANDINI, NANDINI MURTHY...

N - i cant forget.. In fact i dont want to forget..
He can feel that she is in pain.
Guy - babe plzz let go everything.. It was happend before bloody 8 years.. I cant see you in pain...
N - no i wont let go.. Anger was visible on her face and voice also.. Its easy to advise someone.. When you...

He interrupted her... Ok ...calm down..i understand what you had gone through.. Just always remember i will be always therefore you no matter what...as your shadow...
N - i know..thats why you are my personal diary.. I can tell you everything what i feel..i know u always wait for me here every night so i can come here and talk with you so u can cheer me up..
She kept her head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arm around her..

N - by the way you said one thing wrong..
Guy - what??
N - that... You are not my shadow..but you are my bodyguard...
Guy - That i am... And both burst out in laughter..
N - by the way...have you done your packing???
Guy - no because... Ummm... I ..i am not going with you...
She got angry... May i know why???
Guy - i have some work...and i cant leave dad here alone...
N - she angrily got up... Is Work more important than me??
Guy - he also got up...ofcourse... It is important than you...
She puhed him in the pool...
N - I hate you... And starts walking...
But he yelled from behind... I love you too...
She turned behind...
N - Go to hell... And stormed in to the house leaving him laughing behind...



Sooo...tomatoes and chappals are welcome..u can always throw it at me...but plzzz not eggs bcoz iam vegetarian...
So what do you guys thing..who is that guy???
Hope you guys liked it...waiting for ur response...
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INDEX

CH 1 - PG 1
CH 2 - PG 1
CH 3 - PG 3
CH 4 - PG 3
CH 5 - PG 6
CH 6 - PG 7
CH 7 - PG 9
CH 8 - PG 11
CH 9 - PG 13
CH 10 - PG 15
CH 11 - PG 16
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Posted: 9 years ago
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seriously who is dat guy...if he is manik den who is the one in her past...so confusing...update fast na plzz...really so upset today
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Who is manik the past one or this one confusing continue soon.
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Chapter - 2
NANDINI 'S POV.

i was finally sleeping not so peacefully after 5 in morning last night. But i felt kiss on my forhead..and my lips automatically formed a smile. I lazily opened my eyes.
" good morning rockstar "

I smiled my brightest smile. This is the scene i always want to see every morning for whole my life and till date i havent missed it once..
" good morning paa "

He smiled at me... Hows my rockstar?? Had a good sleep??

I cant lie to my paa but i have to i dnt want to make him sad..so i replied him without looking in his eyes and crossing my fingers at my back..
" Yes paa..i..i slept very peacefully.. " shitt... I stammerred...

" accept it my baby.. U cant lie to me.. I know asusual u havent slept peacefully.. " he sighed.
Anyway here is your filter coffee on your side table.. And get freshen up and come for the breakfast "and he again kissed on my forehead..

I was feeling guilty that i again lied to him.so i stopped him from going out of my room. " paa.. I am sorry. And i love you " he smiled at me and " you know i can never be mad at you..i love you too much my rockstar.. And get ready fast..m waiting for you.. Ok?? "
" Sure paa.. "

I drank my filter coffee asusual it was very yummy...because my paa has made it. I love my paa so much...

Ohh !!! How can i forget to introduce myself...i am NANDINI MURTHY, i am 18 years old and my life revolves around MY FAMILY. i love my family..specially my PAA.. i mean my father SAMAR MURTHY. He is the best father in the whole world and best businessman of whole UK. Murthy industries is my father's baby, ofcourse after ME.. Or u can say he is selfmade man. But he is down to earth man. He loves me soo much. He can do ANYTHING for me. He is my father, my mentor,my friend everything rolled into one. My morning always starts with my dad and i love that.
Oh no!!!! I am already late my paa is waiting for me...
I rushed to the washroom to get ready quickly.

At dining table..

Me - Paa.. Whats for the breakfast??
Paa - Sandwitches...hope you will like it..because aj maine jaldi mein bnai hai..as i am running late for my important meeting.

I took bite of it... Its yummm...you r the best paa..
Paa - where is arya??
I remembered incident of last night..i got angry...
Me - dont take his name infront of me..i am going to kill him.
Paa chuckled..and looked behind me.
" woww...murthy so much hatered for me wo bhi early in the morning.."

Ohh so he is already here.. Before he can sit on chair beside me..i pulled his chair from behind and he fell down and i laughed.
Paa - tum dono ka kuchh nai ho sakta please stop fighting both of you..

I cant deny my paa so i just glared at that idiot and he winked at me. Bloody idiot arya..arghhh..

Meet arya...Aryamann khurana. Unfortunately my best friend, my body guard and my personal diary. He is son of the best friend of my paa. But after his parents death he is living with us and calls my paa "dad" which i really dont like. I mean c'mon he is MY paa and i dont like to share my paa with anyone but i cant do anything about it because of paa.

A - morning dad, soo all prepared for meeting??
P - yes all prepared. Nandini come to my study Now..
My chain of thoughts werebroken by paa. Did he just call me "nandini" oww..that means its serious.. Lecture is on the way...
P - nandu i m talking to you..he called me again..
Me - yup paa, coming.
A - but dad your meeting??
P - nothing is important when it comes to MY daughter..he said sternly to arya.
A - yeah..how can i forget!! He said under his breath but i heard it and i smirked at him and gave him "my paa loves me soo much" look.

Meanwhile paa had started walking towards his study..so i silently follwed him..
He sat on the chair in study and gestured me to sit opposite him.

P - tum aj india ja rahi ho and i know if i will ask u a reason u wont say truth to me.. And tumhe yeh bhi pta hai that i dnt want you to go there and phir bhi tum ja rahi ho so i am going to set some ground rules which you have tofollow.. He said sternly..there was blank expression on his face.

Me - mujhe pata hai paa that u dnt want me to go to india but i need to go there.. ...I need to settle some scores with someone.. Last part i said under my breath..so paa cant hear me..

Paa - he held my both my hands in his hand... Nandu i know why r u going there but just be careful... I dnt want any revenge thing..but mujhe pta hai u wont listen to me..so just promise me u will do what i say...he is really concern for me i can see it on his face.. So i smiled..

Me - what are the rules??

Paa - first you wont go alone anywhere withou arya and yes arya is coming with you.. No arguments..

Second you wont drink at all.. No discs, pubs, nothing...india is not safe for alone girls..

Third u will take care of urself..no fights and u will call me everyday..

Me - Whattt??? No drinks ?? Paa your second rule is bullshit..i am not going to follow that.. I said impulsively...and paa glared at me... Ohhk...i will follow but lets make some changes in second rule...pleaseee paa..i show him my puppy which always works...and tada!! It worked...

P - fine u can drink but not too much..u wont get drunk..fine now??

Me - u r the best paa..i hugged him..i will miss you soo much.. And tear escaped from my eyes...i love you soo much paa...

P - then dont go naa beta..
i felt wet on my neck.. My paa is crying..i have to stop crying..i cant make him upset..

Me - paa plzz na dont cry..i will call u ten times a day..i will disturb you everyday..and dekhna you wont be even able to work properly ...and finally he smiled...


Soo...here is another update..hope you guys liked it..in next chapter there will be entry of our hero...thank you for giving me motivation guys.. Without any response how will i get to know that i should continue it or not... Criticisms are also welcome..

Thank you...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting story

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazingg
Interstngg story
Nycc start
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update so nandu is going to take revenge from manik that jerk has played with nandus feeling I'm already started hating manik if this is true n ya pls its a hearty request pls manik KO relationship me mat dikhana don't show that he has gf I hate that thing when it shows that he has gf show him single that will be fun why should always nandu be second in his life n ya show bold nandu with modern clothes Jo kisi se nhi darti update soon the next part n long one waiting for manan meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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revenge story!!!!interesting!!!! nice starting...
dream scene mae jo lines tha wo kya manik tha???
manik sa revenge laga nandini???
a lot of question... plz next part asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update so nandu is going to take revenge from manik that jerk has played with nandus feeling I'm already started hating manik if this is true n ya pls its a hearty request pls manik KO relationship me mat dikhana don't show that he has gf I hate that thing when it shows that he has gf show him single that will be fun why should always nandu be second in his life n ya show bold nandu with modern clothes Jo kisi se nhi darti update soon the next part n long one waiting for manan meet

dont hate manik...wait for story to unfold..nd nandini is very much bold and her behaviour will shock u all..and thanks for the comment..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poushi

revenge story!!!!interesting!!!! nice starting...
dream scene mae jo lines tha wo kya manik tha???
manik sa revenge laga nandini???
a lot of question... plz next part asap...

i cant give you your answers aise hi...so stay tuned to story ..thanxx for the comment..

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