manan ff - EXISTENCE of love....updated chapter 11- pg 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice story. manik really loves her a lot and nandini misunderstood him and on a revenge mood.I really like this idea.and please please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaanii078

very nice story. manik really loves her a lot and nandini misunderstood him and on a revenge mood.I really like this idea.and please please update soon.


Thanxxx for the lovely comment...will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys!!! Sorry for the delay but it was my best friend's wedding..and it was so much fun..so next update is here...please... Like and comment...


Chapter 6


Recap - manan were thinking about each other..they talked about past...some revealations..

So here goes next...

Alila diwa Resort ...at evening 7 pm..

A tall and slim girl was shouting at decorators and servants for the perfect preparations. Suddenly cabir came from behind screamed in her ear...
C - muktiii... what r u doing?? And that girl got scared but when she recognized cabir she got irritated..
Mu - joker tu aa gya...kaha tha tu?? Tu aur manik gayab kaha ho jate ho yar??
Yes that girl was mukti vardhan..( ch -3 there was introduction)

C - arey we were here only..bol na kya problem hai??
Mu - party ka time ho gya hai dhruv abhi aata hi hoga abhimanyu ko lekar.. Aur tum logo ka koi thikana hi nahi hai..where is alya, navya and manik??
She asked frustratedly..
C - calm down yar...look alya and navya both are here..

Meet ALYA SAXENA, a barbie doll and member of fab 5...she is diva of the college..she loves dhruv so much and he is her boyfriend..

Meet NAVYA KAPOOR( sorry i changed the name because i dont like naveli ), very sweet and shy girl..she belongs from middle class family...she is traditional yet modern girl and she carries herself very graciously..everyone loves to talk with her..very soft spoken girl..she likes cabir but she thinks she is not his type of girl..

Mu - where were you guys?? Itni der lagti hai ready hone me??
(Alya was wearing pink dress of knee length..and navya was wearing blue short kurti with white tight jeans..)

Cabir was staring at navya without blinking..but his trance was broken by alya..
Al- arey time to lagta hai na.. to get ready..and this navya bilkul nahi maan rahi thi ..to wear a dress..she made a face at navya..
N - sorry i was not feeling comfortable alya..she said sadly..
Cabir felt bad seeing his madhubala sad..so to cheer up her he said..
C - tum kyu sad ho rahi ho madhubala..by the way i liked what you are wearing...he winked at her..and navya blushed hearing it..
Mu - guys..leave it..dhruv ka msg aya.. that they are here..cabir jaldi se lights off karde..
Cabir switched off all the lights.. Two guys entered in living room..one guy was short in height and was wearing a cap...his hair was messy so anyone can hardly see his eyes...and second guy was taller than him and his smile was charming...
Suddenly lights were on and everyone shouted..surprise!!!!
Mukti came running towards guys and hugged the taller guy...
Mu - happy birthday abhimanyu...and kissed him on his cheek...
The guy grinned at her and hugged her tightly..
Guy - thank you so much baby..i love you.. And kissed her on forehead...

Meet ABHIMANYU MURTHY, a very sweet guy with charming personality..totally gentleman..every girl would love to be his friend or girlfriend.. A perfect friend , boyfriend , brother..but not so perfect son..
Mukti turned towards other guy and happily hugged him...
Mu - thank you so much dhruv...yar tu hi ye kam kar sakta tha abhimanyu ko yaha lane ka..
Guy - your welcome mukti and smiled at her cutely...

Meet DHRUV VEDANT, very cute and shy guy..and member of fab 5..loves alya very much..manik 's buddy..he thinks he knows manik very well.. He loves his friends so much..

C - mukti agar tera ho gya ho toh cake cut kre...bhut yummyyy lag raha hai cake..
Mu - bhukhhad tujhe khane k samne kuchh aur dikhta hi nahi...lets cut the cake baby.. She held abhimanyu 's hand and brought him towards the cake...But where is manik??
After listening her question eveyone looked at abhimanyu..who was looking pissed with the news of manik being late every damn time...
Mu - cabir where is manik??
Cabir thought to himself..yeh na mujhe marvayega ek din...kitna cover up karna padta hai isk liye...
C - mukti..woh..he... Before he can make any excuse someone interrupted him...
M - i am here.. Manik came from behind..
cabir finally took a deep breath..
C - see he is here.. and everyone finally smiled.. But abhimanyu glared at manik..and in return manik gave him one of his best fake smile..

Cabir 's Pov.

Finally Abhimanyu cut the cake and both the couples were enjoying coochicooeing in each corner.. But i was literally getting bored..first reason this party is so boring yar..no drinks..no loud music..i mean without drinks and loud music kon party karta hai yar.. Wait...i will tell you only abhimanyu murthy can...arey banda drink nahi karta..aur nahi loud music pasand hai.. And second reason is i dont have any girl to flirt with..i mean navya is here but i cant flirt with her..she is too innocent..but i like that thing about her... I was just staring at her when our very own manik baba..interrupted me..

M - yaar kitni boring party hai..i am feeling sleepy.. He said yawning..
C - this party is exactly like abhimanyu...boring..tasteless..and he laughed..
N - mujhe bhi nind aa rahi hai iss party me to...and that was it..and they burst in to laughter..
Both couple heard them laughing so they came towards them...
Mu - whats so funny guys?? Tell us also na..she asked curiously..
This mukti na..she should join CID...i mean sab kuchh janna hai ise..
I tried to change topic.. C - nothing we were thinking we should go for clubbing..what say guys??
All of them agreed for it..
C - you know i have heard about one awsome club..we should go there..ryt manik?? I teased manik and winked at him.
M - sure cabir...and he glared at me and gave me "if u say anther word i will kill you" look.

End of Pov...

They all headed towards the club..after few minutes they reached the same club where manik and cabir were last night..
M - lets go guys towards the bar..he said pointing towards the bar...
C - ya guys lets go...c'mon lets get drunk...he said excitedly...
Mu - stop guys.. Aj koi drink nahi lega..she said firmly to everyone...
Manik got annoyed.
M - why?? Ab ye konsa naya drama hai tera??
Mu - guys u know abhimanyu doesnt like drunk people around him..please atleast not today..his birthday guys..
M - fine..he said irritatedly..

Suddenly all the lights got off and music changed and one spotlight was on the stage...everything was dark..

( music is in background )

Yaaron mujh muaf karo
Main nashe me hoon
Badi haseen hai zulfon ki shyaam pee lije
Hamaare haath se do-chaar jaam pee lije
Pilaaye jab koi mashooq apne haathon se
Sharaab phir nahi rehti haraam pee lije

Chakko chakko chakko chakko
Chakko yaaro lal pari...
Aaj to jee lo aaj to jee lo
Kal ki hai kisko padi...

Sippin sippin sippin sippin Sippin yaaro lal pari
Aaj to jee lo aaj to jee lo Kal ki hai kisko padi...

( one girl appeared on the stage and she started dancing wildly..she was crazily dancing..she was wearing red tight dress till her midthigh and black hills..crowd also went crazy and started dancing...but all this while group of sevan persons were standing looking at that girl...manik and cabir were shocked because they recognized the girl..yes it was NANDINI..navya was just looking at her amusedly..abhimanyu and dhruv were staring at her and alya mukti were looking angrily at their boyfriends because of their expressions)

Kismat meri jagado, Music thoda badha do
Ik patiyala aur pilado, Is party mein aag lagado
Kismat meri jagado, Music thoda badha do
Ik patiyala aur pilado, Is party mein aag lagado

( aryamann also came on the stage and they both started dancing cozily..
After seeing that manik started feeling annoyed.)

Yes-yes I want it more, Aaj na chalega zor
Khulegi daaru machega shor
Aajao saare on the floor
Bas isi baat pe botal kholo
Kiye jo saare paap woh dholo
Aao mere saath me holo
Put your hand's up zor se bolo

( nandini and aryamann came down from the stage towards bar and started gulping shots one after one.)

Main sharabi, main sharabi
Main sharabi, main sharabi
[repeat]

Seena jalta hai, Peena padta hai
Dard ghat.Ta hai, Jaam chadhta hai
Meri aankhon me mehboob mera
Sharaab likhta hai, sharaab padhta hai
Tabhi toh

( suddenly nandini caught one pair of eyes staring at her continuously..she recognized him it was manik...
she looked into his eyes and they shared intense eyelock...after few seconds she broke the eyelock and gulped down one more shot)

Main sharabi, main sharabi
Main sharabi, main sharabi

Sharaab peena agar basahoor hota hai
Sharaab peena bada bekasoor hota hai
Sharaab peene ka ye fayda niraala hai
Aam sa chehra bhi jannat ki hoor hota hai

( aryamann gave nandini one more shot and she started walking towards the fab 5 and navya ,abhimanyu..she stopped infront of abhimanyu and removed mukti 's hand from abhimanyu 's hand..made him drink the shot which was in her hand...all of them looked towards abhimanyu and nandini shockingly..and before mukti can do something..nandini pulled abhimanyu on the dance floor)

So lemme get you boots on fire
U wanna set this floor on fire
I am noticire
Come on baby let's go higher
Kudi kanwaari ho gayi jhalli
Nachi jaandi kalli kalli

( she started dancing with him...hands of abhimanyu were on her waist and she kept her arms around his neck...they started dancing cozily )

Aao mere saath me holo
Put your hand's up zor se bolo
Main sharabi, main sharabi
Main sharabi, main sharabi
Main sharabi, main sharabi
[repeat]

( nandini said something in his ear
N - happy birthday..and kissed on his cheek.. Abhimanyu smiled..A- thank you princess..and kissed on her forehead.. And finally nandini dragged him outside the club...)

Fab 5 were very much shocked seeing the behaviour of abhimanyu..but mukti was fuming in anger..and manik was very much annoyed towards abhimanyu.. They all also followed both of them outside...

Precap -
Manik and abhimanyu fight..mukti and nandini fight.. Cabir stuck between nandini and mukti.. Manan small banter..


Hope you guys liked it...and silent readers plzz it will take your one or minute to like and comment...so please do it...
Sathyasahana thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Read all part in one go its just awesome
Manik & nandini r childhood friends
Y Nandu wnt to take revenge
Waiting ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Study in one go

Reallly awsmmm

Lots of twist

Want to study more

Plsss coun sooonn

Manan part was awsmmm

Cabir and arya tooo
awsmmm

Abi is nandu bro???.

Awsmmm

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hey dear just saw ur story
And read last part
Now iwill read remaining parts
It was nice
And i think nandu and abhi are siblings only
And this thing they dont know
Pls update next part soon
richa002 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: riyaparo

Awesome update
continue soon

thanxxx...will update soon
richa002 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sathyasahana

Read all part in one go its just awesome

Manik & nandini r childhood friends
Y Nandu wnt to take revenge
Waiting ...
Continue soon

thanxx.. To know more about the story..stay tuned and ya will update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: jamunamanik

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Study in one go

Reallly awsmmm

Lots of twist

Want to study more

Plsss coun sooonn

Manan part was awsmmm

Cabir and arya tooo
awsmmm

Abi is nandu bro???.

Awsmmm

Coun sooon


Thanxx for such a lovely comment..
richa002 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: rajirock123

Hey dear just saw ur story

And read last part
Now iwill read remaining parts
It was nice
And i think nandu and abhi are siblings only
And this thing they dont know
Pls update next part soon


Thanxxx...hope you will like other parts also..and do tell me you liked it or not...will update soon dear

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