The Deal Praja SS Complete Pg 19!!! - Page 15

Di ❤️

Originally posted by: dashingpraja

Di ❤️

it was amazing...

Loved the ending soo much.

Do write more stories.

I simply cant wait for it.😛

Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Hmm so the deal closes on a very very happy note!!! A Good one though.

Sorry was busy with weekend at Inlaws so couldnt post a comment as soon as I read the last part. Nevertheless was smiling all the way while reading the last update of THE DEAL.

The breaking down of team Dheerbai against each other was too good. Dheer you took good amount of time to get them all down. One concentrated approach from them and you are down all within a weeks period.

The birthday sharing was a good surprise. Pratap you are one lucky chap to get it all back with dividends after screwing up all badly. But luck favored you as you were genuinely sorry for what you did. N maybe JB had an eye on you while you were making those efforts and then she also made Ajab aware of it. N the collection of all Amar's important moments with the footnotes was too cute. Pratap undoubtedly you had the bestest of gifts n birthday of your life. N Ajab made sure it shall remain the same throughout.

Amar uttering his first words was again very cute. N yes why would he let Pratap romance his mother unless he has some benefits out of it. Pratap common strike a better DEAL with you son. After all its Ajab that you want n SHE IS NOT EASY TO GET...

Sujata I was wondering when will I see your comment- I wait desperately for a few comments and one of them is from you

Am so so happy that you enjoyed the last update.

Pratap got really lucky because everyone knew that both Pratap and Ajabde were targets of a really bad plan and now that they were together it was time for them to be happy
Amar won't let Pratap romance at all he loves troubling him😆

He would probably as you said would have to make a really big deal with him😆

Originally posted by: ramya06

Omg! This ended? Ye kab hua? 😲 Kyun hua? Itni jaldi?
Res for my review.

So finally, its an unres. Sorry di, bahut wait karwaya aapko. 😛 This story was a perfect short and sweet one and i love everything about it . Be it db and her team's downfall to our cutie pie amar. The best part about the final parts that amar and pratap share the same birthday and bechara pratap can't romance his wife because of his son. 😛
Awesome, amazing,brilliant! 👏 👏 👏
Ab pakka new story par bhi i will read and comment soon.
Right now the news is that my sem end exams are postponed but then i will not be getting any preparation break from 30th dec and practicals may be coming up before the theory papers.
You say di,how are you?

Originally posted by: ramya06

So finally, its an unres. Sorry di, bahut wait karwaya aapko. 😛 This story was a perfect short and sweet one and i love everything about it . Be it db and her team's downfall to our cutie pie amar. The best part about the final parts that amar and pratap share the same birthday and bechara pratap can't romance his wife because of his son. 😛
Awesome, amazing,brilliant! 👏 👏 👏
Ab pakka new story par bhi i will read and comment soon.
Right now the news is that my sem end exams are postponed but then i will not be getting any preparation break from 30th dec and practicals may be coming up before the theory papers.
You say di,how are you?

Ramya

Ohhh that sounds like you'll have a busy new year then. Am doing fine and you take care dear

Glad you enjoyed the story
As I said before take your time is responding it's alright studies come first always

Am just waiting for you to get free and give us updates on your stories

Originally posted by: my_angel...

I read all the chapters right from the beginning and this was just mind-blowing
I loved Ajabde to the core!😊
And I loved how all the villains got such amazing comebacks from Ajabde!!😃
She was the total hero of this story!!!!..amazing...awesome...lovely...😛

fantastic...fabulous...astonishing...astounding...spectacular...😊

.captivating...great...phenomenal...impressive...outstanding😉

...interesting...remarkable concept and story...superb👏

Thank you!!!

Glad you enjoyed the story