SaHil SS: HOPE - Thank-You-Note - Pg 13!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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H O P E

Hope is a four letter word.. So are Love and Pity..

A SaHil Story

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Prologue:


A young man stepped inside a white colored room as his brown soft eyes were lowered slighty. He carefully slumped down on a chair while staring into his hands. It was quiet in the room.


So very quiet.. Almost like if he dropped a needle to the ground, he would be able to hear the sound of it.


"Promotion huh?" He spoke in a dull voice. "I should be happy about the achievement you have gained, but I'm not. Like it doesn't really matter at all. - These promotions, degrees and status.. They're nothing..."


He shook his head. "How did things turn out so wrong? I should have had your back. You always seemed to have mine."

The man clenched his jaw as a anger was slowly burning deep inside of him. He stood up and walked toward the window. Perhaps, hoping it would calm his mind.


"You have to get through this. I know you can do it."

He slipped a hand inside the pockets of his trousers. He looked to the side and glanced down at a small table on a piece of paper.


A name was scribbled upon the document.. A name which meant the world to him.


One bullet wound..


Broken ribs.. Blood loss..


Scar..


Coma..


He inhaled a small breath allowing the familiar sounds fill his ears, no matter how much he had tried to avoid it. The same beeping tone he had kept hearing for one and a half month.


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The paramedical staff rushed an unconscious man, who was lying on a stretcher, into the operational theatre. A brown haired man was closely following behind.


One of the paramedics turned to him as she noticed his clothes were stained with blood. "Sir.."


He shook his head with a unfamiliar empty look in his eyes. "The blood isn't mine.. Please, help him.. Help him.."


Hours later:

"He has lost a lot of blood. His body has suffered from serious injuries. He has a gun wound on his left shoulder followed with a few scars and two broken ribs." The doctor placed a hand on the young man's shoulder before pausing.


"Doctor.."


"I'm afraid that he has slipped into a coma."


"But.. Is he going to be alright?"


"We'll know once he'll wake up. That's all I can say for now."


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"Wake up. Please," he whispered. The guilt was slowly building up inside of him once seeing the person he was close to, lying on the bed with verious machines attached to him


"Come back.. Come back.."


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To Be Continued!



Story Index:

Prologue - Page 1


Part One
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/130423480


Part Two:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/130772026


Part Three:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/130962362


Part Four:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/131224906


Part Five:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/131499808


Part Six:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/131767701


Part Seven:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/131938629


Epilogue - Last Part:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/132141085


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muskaan17rocks thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prologue dear
And really very interesting
I guess the story has a medical background to it
Although very confusing just like the start of your other stories😉
But i am sure the following chapters would we worth reading
Love the title of the story. Gives a positive feel to the story
And beautiful banner dear
I guess i would want to take classes from u to make such banners😆
Really looking forward to this one especially after your last story
Very excited for it
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
Edited by muskaan17rocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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And lastly wish u a very happy new year
I know it is a little no very late but it's better late than never i guess 😉
And seriously this story seema to be a new years gift from you
Really very happy
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well, well..here we go again. What's new in this though? You can't seem to get your "hands off" 😉😆 Couldn't resist saying this to you my awesome blossom maniac! 😛

But this was very intriguing, mysterious, indulging, and yes not divulging. Lol I don't know what am I even saying?! 😆

Okay first up. First thoughts regarding this and with the banner in my sight (Which was REALLY distracting in an AMAZING way throughout me reading the prologue) 😆

I saw glasses and the word psychiatric. Is Aahil mental, like in some nerdy sorta way? 😆😆 I am sorry, but these are the thoughts that conjured up in my mind, as it was quite confusing. Like he was shot, or was it some other guy? Or is this the double role way? Or like he was shot, he lost his mental balance, after coma he has lost brainy powers and is now a nerd, or like autistic? And if he is mental, so is Sanam his psychitarist? And there are two guys here - so is Rehan shot?

Sorry couldn't help but ask these questions, never mind.😆

That's some real thinking I have done there. I should stop. Maybe I am getting too..."deep" in there. There is nothing like that I know. But I just love to be intrigued and make random thoughts 😆 So I'll leave it to you.

Oh and Happy New Year sweetheart! 🤗
Edited by Junoon-e-SaHil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Oooh, sounds interesting and very mysterious. 😆

As always, love the banner, Mahwash!

Can't wait to read who is in the bed and who is the one regretting. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing prologue dear

And really very interesting
I guess the story has a medical background to it
Although very confusing just like the start of your other stories😉
But i am sure the following chapters would we worth reading
Love the title of the story. Gives a positive feel to the story
And beautiful banner dear
I guess i would want to take classes from u to make such banners😆
Really looking forward to this one especially after your last story
Very excited for it
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊


Thank you so much for liking the beginning despite of having let out all the answers.. But that's my trademark now days.. 😆 Yes, it does have something to do with medical background.. You know, I was really confused about the title.. Hope just sounded good to me and I hope I do justice to it too. Aww, I LOVE making banners. You already know how much time I spend on them before I post the actual story. Haha.. Trust me, there are better people out there who do such amazing banners for their stories.

Oh, and happy new year to you too. I guess you are right about this being a gift to my beautiful readers. 😉 I hope you'll stay tuned for the next chapter. Promise It'll answers some of your questions. 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: darkice7_12

Oooh, sounds interesting and very mysterious. 😆

As always, love the banner, Mahwash!

Can't wait to read who is in the bed and who is the one regretting. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!


Being mysterious is my second name, Hah! 😆 Thank you so much for liking the beginning and the banners. I LOVE making those.. You're such an amazing person. I will try to update soon, so stay tuned🤗
Mahu34 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

Well, well..here we go again. What's new in this though? You can't seem to get your "hands off" 😉😆 Couldn't resist saying this to you my awesome blossom maniac! 😛

But this was very intriguing, mysterious, indulging, and yes not divulging. Lol I don't know what am I even saying?! 😆

Okay first up. First thoughts regarding this and with the banner in my sight (Which was REALLY distracting in an AMAZING way throughout me reading the prologue) 😆

I saw glasses and the word psychiatric. Is Aahil mental, like in some nerdy sorta way? 😆😆 I am sorry, but these are the thoughts that conjured up in my mind, as it was quite confusing. Like he was shot, or was it some other guy? Or is this the double role way? Or like he was shot, he lost his mental balance, after coma he has lost brainy powers and is now a nerd, or like autistic? And if he is mental, so is Sanam his psychitarist? And there are two guys here - so is Rehan shot?

Sorry couldn't help but ask these questions, never mind.😆

That's some real thinking I have done there. I should stop. Maybe I am getting too..."deep" in there. There is nothing like that I know. But I just love to be intrigued and make random thoughts 😆 So I'll leave it to you.

Oh and Happy New Year sweetheart! 🤗


HAAIII! I was smiling like.. a manic when I saw that you had posted a comment. 😆 And I have to tell you how much I have missed you, even though I am not as much much on the forum, I only come here for my stories. Prags, you awesome maniac, you are loved. Happy New Year to you too, Lovely. 🤗


Yes, I can't seem to get my hands off this amazing couple.. It seems like my mind refuses to let go and keeps thinking different scenarios - hence how this idea got born. 😆

Yay, you loved the banner. *does a happy-dance* I love to keep my readers on the edge of their seat, even if I have to confuse them a little. 😆 It seems like it has become my forte..


I'm so glad that I got your brain into work because damn, woman! Not even I have the capacity to think this far - AND I LOVE IT! 👏 Hmm, let's see who is lying on the hospital bed, who needs help and what's the real connection between the banner and story.. *Hint-Hint* All questions would be answers in the next episode. Dekhte rahiye Drama serial; "Hope." 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooo so intriguing! !
Super curious now... love the mystery you're weaving in the prologue. Can't wait for more.

Happy new Year!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW! It sounds so interesting! I can't wait to read the first chapters. Continue soon 😊

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