SaHil SS: HOPE - Thank-You-Note - Pg 13! - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Yaaayyy!!! New SaHil SS!!! And that too from My favorite writer 😆

Wow!!! First installment & I'm already amazed! 👏 What a dramatic setting... One person in coma... another one (perhaps Aahil? 😉) worrying over the first...

And the banner is of course beautiful as usual... Seems like it is trying to give us a hint 😉... spectacles, soldier, 'psychiatrist'?? 😕

I can't express how grateful I'm to you, for giving us another story to look forward to ❤️ God bless you 😊...

Continue soon Mahu 🤗
Edited by innocentangel4u - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Wow! 👏
This is so cool..and great collage too.

Ahil has admitted someone in the hospital...and he is feeling guilty about what happened to this guy. So who is the man?- Rehaan? Shaad? Is this a Military story? Do continue soon. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Sageflower7

Happy New Year, dear. Thank you, Sage. I am so happy to hear from you. I just love when I post something mysterious.. 😆 Hopefully I'll be able to update by the end of the month.

Fariaflower

Thank you so much. I'm glad that the story got your attention. I will try to update soon. 🤗


Innocentangel4u

I told you I wouldn't be able to let go of SaHil completely.. 😆

But seriously though, thank you so much for the beautiful words and for liking the banners. You've truly been one of the loyal readers of mine. - I really admire that. And I cannot express how grateful I am to you for always commenting in depth. I know it's never easy. 🤗

Oh, I've got lots of plans for this story.. I just hope that I will be able to do justice and live up the expectations.

I will try to update soon as I can.


Chicksoup

Aww.. Thank you so much, Lovely. 🤗 It seems like I have lots of mystery in the first part. Hopefully it would be clearer by the upcoming chapters. Hmm, let's see if you're on the right path regarding your ideas.. 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Ooo... I smell an amazing ff coming up, and of course by none other than Mahuu 😉

That was a great start... Is that rehan in a coma????
I can't wait...😆
Please PM me for this... Things are really busy but I don't wanna miss this😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15


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A man in his early thirties stood in front of the mirror, as he buttoned up his dark green uniform. He took a once last glance at himself before reaching out for his familiar dog tags and ran his thumb across it. Reading his name across the silver metal, a sense of proud filled him in.

"This is it." he thought silently while placing them inside his pocket.


He reached forward for his helmet and walked out of the room and toward the base outside. Eyes glancing at various aircrafts which stood ready, he met his superior gaze and nodded in a respected manner.


Climbing into a military aircraft, he slipped on the helmet and attached a mask onto it. Closing the upper half of the jet, he gave a thumbs up to the fellow colleagues letting them know that he was ready to take off.


"All clear, sir."


He pressed a few buttons on the dashboard of the jet, while familiar thoughts slowly made its way into his mind. Like the first time he had to climb in and fly up into the sky. He was dead nervous that day, but managed to get his head right in the game. Alright. You can do this.'


He began to start the engine and eventually the jet picked up speed and took off the ground.


"Can you hear us, AIR?"


"Loud and clear, Kabir."


Kabir, a technician of the military department, typed away at the large screen in front of him, trying to navigate the unknown location.


An
Air Vice Marshal
stood staring at the screen with a thoughtful look on his face as his hands were behind his back. Along with him and the fellow collogues, he prayed that the mission would succeed.


Kabir shifted his attention on the screen and followed the direction of his jet.


"I've send you the coordinators now. Follow them and you'll arrive where the missile is located."


"Got it." They heard him speak through the radio, as they followed him closely on the screen. Everyone were highly nervous and minds were rather occupied to say anything at all.


"You're heading closer. Stay on track."


Once navigating through the skies, the pilot furrowed his brows upon the place. All he could see was clear blue ocean underneath him.


Staring into his dark screen, he noticed the unknown missile being located.


"You sure it's the right coordinates?"


"Yes. Now, you have to lower the aircraft only this way you will be able to reach it. Remember to keep your head cool and be careful."


The pilot did what he was told and lowered the aircraft the best way he could. Pressing a few buttons, he felt the missile underneath the aircraft.


"One wrong move and it's done."


Sweat started to creep on his forehead.. But he had managed to complete the task.


Everyone sighed in relief and the
Air Vice Marshal spoke through the radio. "Good going, AIR. Now head back to the base and let the Navy take care of the rest."


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A black haired man placed a shaking hand against the window of the hospital room. Seeing his own refection upon the window, he began to feel sick. So sick that he could feel the unfamiliar feeling floating through his being.


Clasping his hand into a fist, his eyes caught a three-months-old scar across his right arm and forehead.


"If only it had been that easy." Aahil Raza Ibrahim whispered.


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One Month Later:


A pair of heels clicked into the hard floor as a woman made her way into the long hallway. Holding into a blue colored file in her hand, she nodded warmly at the gazes she met by her fellow colleges.


She arrived at her personal cabinet where her name was written across the wooden colored door, before closing it behind her. Placing the file on the table, she sighed before sitting down behind the black table and began to look through the pages.


Out of somewhere the phone rang.


The woman pressed a button as it was on loudspeaker and spoke in a soft voice. "Yes Maria."


"There's a call for you, should I connect the line?"


"Yes please, go ahead."


A moment later, the woman spoke. "Hello?"


"Hello. Am I speaking with Sanam Ahmed Khan?"
A deep yet kind voice spoke from the other line.


"Yes, who is this?"


"My name is Rehan Imran Qureshi and I have been recommended your name from one of the Bhopal's hospitals."


Sanam closed the file as she adjusted her attention on the caller. "Yes, Mr. Qureshi. How may I help you?"


"I'm calling because I need your level of expertise on a case.."


"Who am I supposed to help?"


There was a small pause before responding. "My brother."


Rehan turned around to stand in front of the tall company windows of his cabin on the 12th floor.

"Aahil Raza Ibrahim."


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To Be Continued!


Hello Lovelies. I know, this was very short, but I still hope I managed to get your thrilling attention. Please, do leave a comment and tell me how you liked it. :)

I will try to update as soon as I can.

Edited by mahwash22 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Amazing update dear
Loved reading it
But why so short! 😕
But the story definitely is interesting
Aahil's seems mysterious
Sanam come to help aahil
Looking forward to the story
Please continue soon
And thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Damn, why I didn't realise he was a soldier, when I commented on prologue! I swear, I had an inkling in my mind, coz of the banner! It was there in the back of my mind, somewhere! And then I saw the banner again, and it came back again, yes he is a soldier! Ugh!
Anyway. I just had to get that out in open. Feeling much better 😆

Okay. Can I just die how I felt while reading those first lines of this chapter?! I think I did, too 😆 No seriously! Uniform, dog tags, name on that plate, a base, pilot, helmet...all these amazing things!

But wait, is he in Air Force or Army? When you wrote green uniform, I thought he is in Army. But when you talked about going to his plane, I thought he is in Air Force. But well, Air Force too has a day when officers wear green one though... But then, you said Navy too! Okay I am confused now! Eh, I think I just got carried away. Coz my dad was in Air Force, and now seeing ARI in uniform...did something to me. It made me actually think! You know I usually don't think in these situations...I am not able to...😆😆

But damn! You got me hooked from those lines itself! God, I am just imagining in that uniform now. With his glares and him holding the helmet in his hands, walking down the base... There is something SO EXTRA charming about the men in uniform! The real heroes! Okay I am sorry again, you see I am a daughter of a retired Air Force officer, and I miss those days! 😭

But hey back to the story. I was right about two things I guess - He was the one who got hurt. And of course SHE has to enter to save him! Pun intended 😆 I know it was a little short. But I was so thrilled reading that italics part. All that mission and all the technical talk you did there... I could almost hear the sound of the plane taking off, and when the technical men around there cover their ears to not get deaf by the sound of the engine😆

Damn this was SO SO good! Loved the entry of Sanam too! This is so exciting! So want to know what happened to that mission! I am still in the aftermath of the euphoria this part created...sigh!

You are beautiful. You write so so beautiful! Love you loads! ❤️
Edited by Junoon-e-SaHil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
great job! loving the starting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Great start ! Can't wait for more !👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
The beginning of the weekend for me, and I finally got to read these SaHil updates! Loved it! Sounds very intriguing.

Great banner. One of their short, yet so meaningful, conversations. Perhaps hinting at what the tone of this story will be? 😛

What happened on that mission? What is happening to Aahil now? Why does he need Sanam's help? And what exactly does Sanam do? So many questions! And such a short update, Mahwash! 😭

You're off to a great start. Can't wait to read how Aahil is broken, and how Sanam will help him. And of course, how these two will fall in love.

Update soon! Can't wait to read more.
Edited by darkice7_12 - 9 years ago

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