CRAZY LOVE - Chapter 1 Page No 8 Updated 29/12

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Friends,

This is my 2nd story. It's a small story, i will try to finish this story 4 or 5 chapters based on your feedback. Please let me know if you want me to continue this story. Prologue posted below:

PROLOGUE:

Today was tiring for Ishita not physically but emotionally, her marriage is in 20days and everyone seems to be busy with the upcoming marriage. But she is completely lost.

Amma: Ishu Kanna, Please come for dinner. Everyone is waiting for you, she said smiling lovingly

Ishita: Amma, please wait let me freshen up and join you guys, she said leaving to her room in the upstairs

Once she entered her room she was shocked to see him there.

Ishita: Tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Appa neche hai, agar vo tumhe dekh liye tho? Please chali jao, she pleaded

Man: Why should I go? I need an answer today. Come let's elope and get married today itself.

Ishita: Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho? I'm engaged and my marriage is in 20days. Please leave

Man: What's the big deal about getting engaged? Remember we were on the verge of getting married and you ran away from the altar leaving me hanging.

Ishita: Please that is all in the past. Please leave, I'm begging you she pleaded

They heard a commotion from downstairs. Suddenly Ishita's Appa screamed her name and asked her to come down immediately.

Ishita: Ayyo!!! Appa is calling me. Please leave.

Man: No I won't leave or let you leave from this place till you answer me.

Ishita: Please let me go. I will be back in 5 mins, I promise.

Man: Fine go. Ishita was about to go when he called back

Man: If you don't come back in 5 mins, I will drink this poison and die in front of your eyes.

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When she went down she saw her entire family has been held hostage by 3men who are holding machine guns in their hands. The gun was pointed at her father.

Ishita: What is happening here? Appa, who are all these people?

Man 1: We all are terrorist. Police is searching for us but we have an important mission to accomplish. You all will be held hostage in your house for the next 10days. Is anyone else there in your house?

Mr. Iyer: No, all my family members are already present here.

Man 2: Ok, drag them and lock them in one bedroom, he said pointing the bedroom .

Ishita was tensed. She tries to break away from them and tries to run upstairs. A terrorist catches her & holds her tightly

Man 1: Where do you think you are running off too? Are you trying to contact police?

Ishita: No, there is a man in my room. Please leave me, I have to go to him

Man 1 signals other man to go to her room and get that man.

Man 1: Who is he? By clutching her tightly

Ishita: He is Raman. My Raman, she cries bitterly

That's it friends. Please take 2 mins to leave your feedback.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow! okay a different kind of story!
nits nice one
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new story..
It looks a bit different Nits..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting prologue nitya.continue soon.thanks for the pm dr.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue
hope ishita saved raman on time
continue soon
thnkx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story
different plot and nice prologue
Pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow aapko aise idea aate kaha se hai plsss update soon part 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sush_rddt

wow! okay a different kind of story!

nits nice one
update soon



Yes, it is a different kind of a story. Fun going & a short one.
Will update the 1st part soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaya1867

Interesting prologue

continue soon



Thanks dear😊
Will update soon

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