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Chapter 17 A


(All those have a problem with my writing and consider me a plot thief please come and pm me..! I will let you know the real me..! Regards:Mawara)


Manik's POV..


"Crap..!"I heard Tiger's curse as he halted the car with a jerk.


"What happened?"I asked worriedly. Actually we were going back to Mumbai. All of us fab5, Alya, Mukti and my girl who was sleeping like a baby is my arms..!


"It's such a stupid car..! I think engine garam ho gya hai.!"Tiger again cursed..


"It's ok na Tiger..! Why are you becoming so worried..! Guys lets walk..!"Mukti and her ideas..!


"Mukti..! Tu pagal hai..? You think we will walk on this stranded highway at this our of night?"Jack asked in a shock and Mukti frowned..


"I am not going outside it's so dark..!"Alya spoke in a scared tone and hugged Max..!


"Guys chill let me call for a driver..!"I sorted out the problem and all nodded...! I called for the driver but the agent told me that Car will be there till morning..! So we had no other option now..!


"We can't sit here whole night..! Come on guys...! Get up I am sure we will get some shelter..!"Cabir finally spoke and all agreed..! I look at Nandini and few frowns on her face..! The grip of her hand on my arm became more tight..! Was she in a dream?


"Man-Manik..!"She muttered my name and I became a little worried..! But before I could do something she yelled my name and with that she opened her eyes..!


"Hay?? I am here..! What happened baby??"I asked worriedly as now she was sweating too all my friends who had started walked run back...! Nandini was looking at me with blank expressions..! "Baby speak something? You are making me worried..!"I held her arms it became helpful in breaking her trance..! She hugged me tightly and I was going insane with worry..!


"It was a very bad dream..!"She whispered in my ear sadly and I sighed..


"You don't need to be afraid I love you I am here..! Nothing bad will happen..!"I consoled her whispering soothing words in her ear and she became relax..!


"Nandu..! Car is out of order..! Can you walk?"Tiger came and patted Nandini's head..! She simply nodded and we got down of the car..!


"She don't need to walk..!"I said smilingly and after sometime she was riding on my back..! Her head was on my shoulder and arms wrapped around my neck..! We were walking on the highway for some shelter..!


"I love you so much Manik..!"She muttered in my ear and I smiled..!


"Tiger..!"Suddenly Mukti shouted as she saw us like this..!


"Kya hai?"Tiger asked in a fake annoyed tone..!


"You are such a useless boyfriend..! Look at Manik and Nandini..! Tum ny mjy kbhi aisy nai uthaya..!"She complaint like a kid and all of us were giggling..!


"Oh hello..! Tum nay apna size dekha hai? You want to break my bones?"Tiger asked with a shock and all of us burst out in laughter..! While Tiger received a tight slap from Mukti..! She started walking with us..!


"Nandu..! You tell me about yourself..!"She asked Nandini while Nandini smiled..!


"About me? Tou I used to live in an orphanage until Manik brought me to his house..!"She covered her story in a single line and I smiled widely..!


"Awww aren't they are cute?"Alya exclaimed and we blushed...! Then we talked and talked while walking..! Only Tiger was quiet..! Actually very quiet..!


"Manik..!"Nandini spoke in her all time favorite sugary voice..


"Hmm?"I just hummed as all my concentration was towards Tiger..!


"Mjy neechy utaar dain na ab..! Ap thak gye hoon gay..!"Her concern was so overwhelming for me..! After a little argument she started walking herself..!

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Nandini's POV..


I was noticing Tiger Bhai's silence..! Something was bothering him for sure..! So I asked Manik to put me down..! After that I walked towards Bhai..!


"Bhai? What happened to you?"I asked shaking his shoulder and he came out of his thought sea..!


"Umm nothing behna..!"He said smilingly looking at me and I frowned..!


"Don't lie bhai..! I know something is bothering you..!"I was adamant on my place..!


"In which Orphanage do you live?"He asked me I was surprised by this sudden question but I replied and he just nodded..!


"Why are you asking?"I asked curiously.He just shook his head and walked away..! Strange..! What happened to him..! Then I walked towards Jack as he was munching a chocolate. An evil plan popped in my mind and with in a flash of eye I snatched his chocolate..!


"Nandu..!"Jack yelled and I hide behind Manik..! "Give my chocolate back..!"He shouted furiously and I showed him my tongue hiding behind Manik more and more..!


"I won't give you back..! You too ate all my chocolates once..! Why do you expect me to have mercy on you?"I asked munching the other half..! He was about to pounce upon me when I started running and he chased me..! I heard everyone's laughter behind us while my hubby's concerned shout and it was..!


"Nandini..! Don't run..! It's not safe here..!"

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Manik's POV ..


She was such a kid..! I smiled seeing her arguing with Jack. He was accusing her for eating his chocolate. Both were crazy..! Tiger was walking by my side.


"Are you ok?"I asked faintly and he just nodded..! I knew something was wrong. It needed to be discussed but first I should talk to Nandini about her bad dream which she had..!


"I will not spare you..!"Nandini's yell got my attention I look at them and they were ready to pull each other's hair..


"God...! Here they started again..!"Max said totally frustrated..


"Nandini is a kid but At least Jack should behave like a sensible guy..!"Alya said smilingly..


"They fight like kids..!"Cabir said laughingly..! Mukti was about to shout on Jack when I stopped her..!


"Let me handle it..!"I said smilingly and walked towards Nandini and Jack..!


"I will never ever talk to you..!"I heard Nandini's shout as I approached them...


"Haan tou? You think I am dying to talk to you? You shorty..!"Jack's teasing mode was full on..!


"To whom you call a SHORTY..!"Wohooo Nandu ka gusa chad gaya chat par..!


"Enough..!"I said coming between two and they both turned their faces..!


"At least you should teach your wife a little manners? Tell her that not to snatch anyone's chocolate..! Shorty thief..!"Jack said winking at me and Nandini walked away from all of us stomping her foot..! Jack received a playful smack on the back of his head from Tiger and I laughingly run behind Nandini..!


"Nandini..! Baby..!"I held her hand to stop her..!


"Ap ny dekha..! You see Jack...! He is so bad..!"She complaint to me and side hugged me..!


"He was just teasing you baby..!"I said enclosing my arms more around her..!


"I know..!"She smiled..


'Nandini..! Your dream..! Why were you so scared..! Did you saw something bad?"I asked looking at her this question was making me curious since long time I felt the color of her face changed for seconds then she smilingly shook her head..!


"Ni nothing bad and I love you..!"She said smilingly and before I could say something I heard Tiger's voice..


"Manik..! We have a rest house here..!"

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 17 B


"We have only two rooms vacant...!"Manager's words were not much pleasant for me.


"Simple..! We girls in one room and boys in other room..!"Mukti exclaimed and all were smirking looking at me..! Tough time..! But I have to act a little mature I think..!


"Okay..!"I agreed without hesitation and unexpectedly Nandini spoke..


"No..! I want to be with Manik..!"She spoke in a little voice..! All look at her hell shocked including me..! What was happening? She was behaving like me..! But before I could speak...


"Nandu..! Come on baby..! If you will get a nightmare you can hug me..!"Alya said smilingly and dragged her away followed by Mukti..! She was staring at me all the time being dragged with Alya..


"Is she ok?"Cabir asked patting my shoulder..

"I don't know..! I just hope..!"I said shaking my head...!

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It was midnight and I couldn't sleep. Ufff Nandini..! Max, Cabir and Jack were snoring..! But Tiger..! Suddenly he got up from his bed and walked out of the room..! I was noticing his behavior since hours what has happened to him? I should talk to him...! I too got up and walked behind him..! I came out and spotted him sitting on the staircase of courtyard...! He was smoking..! WHAT??? I sighed..! He was hell tensed or something was bothering him a lot..!


"Smoking is injurious to health buddy..!"I said softly pulling the cigarette out off Tiger's fingers and sat beside him..! He smiled faintly..! I threw the cigarette away..!


"What's bothering you?"I asked looking at his face and red eyes..


"Nothing..!"He spoke faintly..


"Come on..! Whenever you smoke it's a clear sign that you are tensed..!"I smacked his shoulder..


"Manik I am missing Mom and Neha a lot..!"Finally he spoke...! Oh his Late Mom and Sister..! "Your girl..! Reminds me off my sister..!"He said with a little smile..! "I still remember the day when Dad beat Mom..! Because of Neha..! He never wanted a girl..! I just wish..! I could have stopped Mom..! I just wish I hadn't slept that night..! Mom..! Mom left with Neha and the very next day Police found Mom's scarf near a bank river...! Tjy pta hai Nandini is so similar to Neha..! Whenever I see your Nandu na..! Neha he yaad aati hai mjy..! The way she smiles..! The way she pout..! Such an adorable girl..!"Tiger ended in tears..! He had told me the story of his Mom and sister thousand times..! Whenever he used to be sad he narrated the whole incident again to me..! And I used to listen him patiently..!


"Relax bro..!"That was all my answer and he hugged me..! He used to love his Mom and his 9 months sister a lot..! I was not in the country when his sister born I was out for almost two years and all this happened in my absence..!


"Tu Nandini ka bohat khyal rakhna..! She deserves happiness..!"He uttered the words breaking the hug and got up to leave..! I kept sitting there for long time..! Life kbhi normal q nahi ho skti for Tiger..! I too got up and was about to leave when two tiny hands crawled my waist from back clutched my shirt front..!


"Why are you up?"I asked politely as I pulled her from back..


"Because I can't sleep without you..!"She said cutely and hugged me...

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Nandini's POV..


Alya and Mukti were sleeping peacefully. I can't sleep..! Manik..! Those bloody dreams..! They were scaring the shit out of me..! I have to see Manik..! I quietly sneaked out of the room and saw Manik in the gallery..! I jumped with joy and run towards him..! I back hugged him..!


"Why are you up??"He asked softly and pulled me in front of him..


"Because I can't sleep without you..!"I said pouting a little and hugged him..


"Nandini..! I know you are worried..!"He said politely and sat on the stairs with me in his lap..


"I am not..!"I said shaking my head I know I am bad liar..


"You can't hide from me..! You know..!"He said in a serious tone. I know he will make me tell the truth I have to distract him..! I held his collars and pulled him closer..


"Mr.Malhotra don't you think kay ap aj kal batoon me bohat time waste krty hain?"I said naughtily and was about to kiss him when he palmed my lips..! I was shocked..!


"Don't try to distract me Mrs.Malhotra..!"He was so furious..! I gulped the lump down my throat..!


"Man-manik..!"I stammered..


"Chup..! You think you can lie to me haan? Pehly in morning you lied that you woke up because of thirst..! Then after that you freaked my name in your sleep..! Then in front of everyone you said that you want to be with me..! You think I am an idiot? I know you more than you know yourself..! What has happened to you? Where is my expressive Nandu? Tum tou har baat share krti ho mj say..! Now what happened to you?"He spoke non-stop and I lowered my head..! You dumb Nandini..! You think you can fool Manik with your silly tricks?


"Main ap ko preshan ni karna chahti the..!"I said in a little voice and he sighed..! He gently held my chin and made me look in his eyes..


"Baby..! Tum nay mjhy na bta kay ziada preshan kiya hai..! Please tell me what is bothering you? We can get over the problem together na?"He said softly this time and tears twinkled in my eyes..


"I can't lose you Manik..!"I cried hiding my face in his neck...


"Hey..! Jaan am not going anywhere..! Why are you so worried..?"He was worried..! Worried for me..! "Acha look at me..!" I look at him..! "You are worried because of Dad?"He asked and I nodded like a kid..! "The dreams..! Bad dreams are about me?"He was so caring and concerned. I nodded again..! "You...! you should have told me na? Hey..! These dreams na these are nothing..! Don't trust any of your dream just trust me..! Your Manik..!"He whispered his last words in my ear and I felt like the fire cooling down in me..! The thing which was making me restless flew away instantly with his words..!


"I trust you Manik..!"I whispered near his lips. Finally he covered the distance and our lips met..! The KISS of TRUST..! My hands were around his neck and his one hand was on my waist other on my nape..! The kiss was slow..! Yeah romantic one..! I was not ready to broke the kiss but he broke it as we needed oxygen..! Then I hide my face in his neck and we sat there...! Quietly..! In each other's warmth and embrace..!


"Manik..!"I called him after a long pause..


"Hmmm..!"He hummed looking at me..


"Why Tiger bhai was worried?"I asked curiously..!


"He was missing his mother and sister..!"He said in a low tone..


"Oh where are they?"I asked sadly though I guessed the answer..


"They are dead baby..!"He too was sad..! "You remind him of his sister..!"He smiled a little and I too smiled..


"Hmm..!"I had nothing to say..! "What was his sister's name?"I asked as suddenly the question popped me..


"Neha..! Neha Khurrana..!"He said looking at the sky while I just nodded..! Again Silence..!


"Aik baat pochoon?"I whispered after a long pause..


"Pocho?"He too whispered..!


"Manik life me if a time comes when you have to choose between me and your Dad what will you do?"I know I know it was a hell stupid question..!


"Are you crazy?"He almost shouted..

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Chapter 17 C

Manik's POV..


Was she crazy? How can she even think like that?


"Answer me please?"She pleaded..!


"I don't even think kay mjy is tarha kay stupid question ko answer krna chye?"I yelled in frustration..! I was angry why was she feeling so much insecure..! After I done so much for her..!


"Manik..! Ap gusa q ho rahy ho?"She said making a pout..


"Wow..! Seriously Nandini..! At this hour of night you are here to ask me these stupid questions? And don't expect me to get angry..!?"I was so angry I got up with her..! "Go..! And sleep..!"I said coldly and her mouth hung open..!


"Manik..! Acha sorry..!"She immediately surrendered...


"No..! Koi sorry nahi..! Go back to the room..!"Punishment was needed..


"I will cry..!"She threaten me..


"Please do..!"I said playfully and started walking back to my room..!


"I hate you..!"I heard her shout and smiled inwardly...!


"I know..!"I shouted back..


"I can't go to sleep without a good night kiss..!"She yelled again this time a little hesitantly..


"Come and have it..!"I shouted back smilingly..! Suddenly she came running and tip toed..! She pecked my lips instantly and pecked my cheek even harder..


"You are a monster don't even try to forget..!"She whispered in my ear immediately..


"I am your monster..! Fight is not over..!"I whispered back emphasizing on the word 'your'..! Then she run back giving me a glare..! I smiled on her cute antics..Night passed..! Morning came..! I didn't slept and I knew she also didn't slept..! I was a little surprised she didn't came after me again..! I was just teasing her I just hope she didn't took it seriously..! Tiger was the first to get up..! He was still stressed..! I think I should follow him..!

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Nandini's POV..


Huhh..! What Manik think of himself..! Agr poch bhi liya question tou why did he became so gusa..! Ab sorry nahi boloon ge..! As the morning rays sneaked from the window I got up..! I came out of the room and saw Tiger Bhai walking leisurely in the garden..


"Good morning..!"I exclaimed near his ear and in back I got a huge smile..


"Morning..!"He replied polietly..


"Hows you?"I asked as I tried to cheer up his mode..


"Ab tum aa gai ho na tou am good..!"He said patting my cheek and I smiled..!


"Ap ko pta hai am angry with Manik and he is angry with me..!!"I told him about our fight..


"I think fault is yours..!"He said nodding his head as I poured my heart to him...! I don't know why I was sharing such a personal talk with him but I just feel like as I had a trust that he will listen to me..! I feel like having some connection with him..


"Haw..! You think it's my fault?"My jaws dropped open...


"Yeah..! Manik did so much for you Nandu..! You shouldn't have asked that stupid question honey..!"He made me realized politely..! "You are his light Nandu..! You are his everything..! I have saw true love in his eyes for you..! You were with him when we were not..! I think he felt hurt on your question because you are his only family..!"He spoke gently and I felt a little guilty..!


"Ab what should I do? He is very naraz..!"I said sadly..


"Maybe if he had done so much for you..! Now it's your turn to say a thank you..! Right? And waisy bhi tomorrow is Manik's birthday I am sure you remember it?"He winked at me and that idea clicked me..!


"YEah...! You are awesome bhai..! You are the best..!"I shouted happily..! I was about to run back when suddenly something came in my mind..! "Umm bhai..! I just wanted to say that you can consider me your sister..! I would love to be your sister..!"I said hesitantly fidgeting with my fingers..! He gently held my hands..


"And I would love to be your brother little kid..!"His words were so so overwhelming..! I never felt like this with Cabir bhai..! I felt tears brimming in my eyes..


"Can I hug you Bhai?"I asked in a little voice trying hard not to cry..! And and he himself hugged me...! He made that easy for me..! His hug had so much of warmth..! So much of affection..! I blinked my eyes to shove my tears away...! I felt his lips lightly pressed my head and I smiled..!


"Stay happy sister..! You deserve it..!"He whispered politely..! I never wanted to break the hug but Manik's voice forced us to break apart..


"I think koi emotional scene chal raha hai behan bhai me..! Myny disturb to nahi kiya..!"He said softly and Tiger shook his head..


"No it's ok..!"He was smiling finally and I witnessed wetness in his eyes..! I look at Manik he smiled at me and suddenly we both remembered that we were angry on each other so we turned our face immediately..! I went close to Manik and pulled his cell phone from his pocket..


"What are you doing?"Manik asked raising his eyebrow..


"Ni bataoan ge..!"I said stubbornly..


"Wow..! You are using my cell phone without my permission and you are not even telling me?"He asked angrily..! I showed him my tongue and ran away with his cell phone..! I know he must be smiling on my acts..! I know he love me..! And that too a lot..! I reached a corner and called Mohan Dada..! MY PARTNER IN CRIME..! I have to do lots of preparations..!

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Manik's POV..

I witnessed a very beautiful scene as I came out in the garden..! Tiger hugging my girl..! I know he was trying to find his sister in Nandini..! Then she ran away with my cell phone I knew something was surely cooking in her mind..


"She volunteered to be my sister..!"Tiger said softly sitting on the bench and I sat beside him..


"Are you happy now?"I asked patting his shoulder..


"Yeah..! Am happy as long as you don't have a problem with our closure..!"He said in a little voice looking at my face..


"Hey buddy..! How can you even think that...! I don't have any problem..! I know you since years man..! Come on..! And I trust my love girl more than anything in this whole world..!"I confessed purely and he smiled..!


"I missed you so much Manik..! Only I know how I spent these years without a brother like you...!"Tiger said averting his gaze towards the sky pigeons..!


"I missed you too buddy..!"I too said smilingly...


"And I missed you both..!"Cabir's chirpy voice and he sat between us..!


"What about me?"Max encircled his arm around my neck and we all smiled..


"Where is our lazy jack..!"Tiger asked wiping his eyes..


"Kahan ho ga..! He must be sleeping..!"Max said laughingly..


"I was sleeping..!"We heard Jack's annoyed voice as he came in front of us. He was all wet..


"Why are you wet?"Tiger asked curiously..


"You had bath with clothes?"Cabir had an awesome chance to tease him..


"Your shorty wife threw a bucket full of water on me Manik..!"He was so much annoyed and we all burst out in laughter..


"To whom you call shorty?"Nandini came towards us stomping her foot and they started again..!

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"Are we still fighting?"She asked holding my hand as we were about to leave...! I smiled a little and pecked her lips..


"Of course my darling girl..!"I whispered in her ears and she blushed the darkest shade of red..!

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SO..! Am back..! here you go..!I know a little less MaNan but when u have so many characters in a story you can't neglect others..! So Manik's birthday bash is coming soon Share ur views what u want to see ?..! Manik's Dad is coming soon..! Is Neha really dead? Loads of mysteries and questions are here..! But guys trust me on that I Love u all..! That to so much..! I missed u all..! Thank you for waiting for me..! Thank u a thousand times thank u..!

Ky2 is ending but we all are here..!

Keep Smiling..! Keep shining..! Show some desperation..! Pm's abhi nahi..!

Lots of LOve..!

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
Divzonly thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Jack Nd nandu awesome
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Welcome back & wid a bang...
Awesome update...
Waiting for neha mystry to unfold...
Manik ka birthday wow...
Manik's dad coming...waiting for next...
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
love it
and finally ur back with a bang
its amazing
the bond which tiger and nandini is sharing is amazing
continue soon
and haan do pm me please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
U r back. Miss u. Amaizing update. Love the bond between Tiger n nandu. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
hi dear
awesome chap
i think nandini and tiger are real sister and brother nd i love there bound
im impatient for manik's birthday
continu soon
take care

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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Finally after so long read ur work... Good to see u back...
Update was awesome.. well written..

Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it
finally ur back with a bang
amazing update
loved the bond between tiger and nandini
and the way nandini expresses her right to manik as a wife is nice
continue soon
and haan do pm me

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