Manmarziyan FF Missing pieces- Last Epi 25-Pg.38 updated on 24/08/2016

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey friends,...This is my first ever trial of writing A short story on ardhika,...So,please lemme know u like it or not,...so,that I will proceed further,...And please Excuse me for many grammatical errors here and there,...

Prologue:

I don't wanna start a fresh and I personally felt that MMz original track was changed after lonovla trip with Nandhini and Saral's Entry.So,I decided to write missing parts after Episode 64 -Radhika's accident and after completing the above said missing part, I will continue with next missing parts if and only if u people liked it.

Episode 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dosti-yariyaan-manmarzian/4527275/manmarziyan-ff-missing-pieces-last-epi-25-pg-38-updated-on-24-08-2016

Episode 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dosti-yariyaan-manmarzian/4527275/manmarziyan-ff-missing-pieces-last-epi-25-pg-38-updated-on-24-08-2016?pn=2

Episode 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/129400541

Episode 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/129441315




Episode 8: https://Episode 7: www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4527275&TPN=7&#p129604953

Episode 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dosti-yariyaan-manmarzian/4527275/manmarziyan-ff-missing-pieces-last-epi-25-pg-38-updated-on-24-08-2016?pn=10

Episode 10 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/129777336

Episode 11 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dosti-yariyaan-manmarzian/4527275/manmarziyan-ff-missing-pieces-last-epi-25-pg-38-updated-on-24-08-2016?pn=12
Episode 1 of My First Missing part (Epi-65):

Arjun entered the ICU with huge heart after hearing Doctor's statement. His heart beats faster remembering his promise to radhika that he wont let anything happen to her. He remembered their cute moments earlier in the lonovla trip.He came near Radhika and shouted her to wake up from her sleep which is hurting him like a knife on his neck.He started revealing his intention by holding Radhika's hands.

Arjun: Radhika, Wake up and don't sleep,...Why u saved me radhika by risking your life and I am not worth of your concern radhika.I am bad and I always live in dark radhika,..U asked me the reason for hurting Sam na,I ll tell u the reason now,..Yes u are right ,I din love her and Her tears are the medicine for my deep wounds. U said na that one cant get happiness from other's tears but her tears are the ly left over medicine for my wounds.But I cant see you hurt in these radhika,...Please wake up radhika,...

Saying so Arjun's tears fall on radhika and Radz got consciousness by moving her hands,...with that arjun stopped his confession and tried to wake up radhika.He kissed her hands seeing her gaining consciousness and held her chins to make her open her eyes slowly,..

Right then Arjun heard the sound of someone opening the room door,...He was shocked to see SAM there,...After seeing SAM there, He left radz chin and had a puzzled look on his face turning his back to radhika,who opened her eyes slightly,...

Sam: Arjun,What happened to radhika?? Is she fine??

Arjun: Hmmm,She is here...U take care of her,...I ll b in few minutes,...

With that Arjun left the ICU Room,...Sam who stood still seeing radz condition,...turned her back and cried for few min before reaching her Bestie,...Radz was blinking her eyes slowly as wound on her head causes her pain while opening her beautiful eyes,... then Sam reached her friend and teased her for talking continuously even after huge accident and both the girls had some light moments,...And radz who accused arjun earlier said that He is nice guy and cox of him ly she was alive,...After hearing these words from radhika, sam was in cloud nine.

And she called Neil and informed him that radz is fine and also Arjun's help by saving radz soul,...Neil on hearing those words cried his heart at the other end whose silent screams were not heard at this end,...Neil was happy that his chasni was fine and sad that his love went far away from him.Sam then urged him to come to hospital and neil informed her that he will be there within an hour with Teji,change-mangu(zubin and krithika)

Arjun who went to consulting room, had a chat with doctor heard that radz need a complete rest for 10- 15 days and doctor asked him to sign the formalities but before signing he excused himself from the consulting room witnessing Sam nearby talking on the phone outside the consulting room.He crossed Sam silently and reached the Ganesh Idol in the front corridor of the hospital remembering radhika's accident which is like a nightmare for him,...

Then he went to radhika's room where radz trying to sit with the help of pillows on the other side but was helpless due to heavy pain in her abdomen,...She screamed in pain,..Right then arjun rushed towards radhika and hold her shoulder and kept the pillow by her side and makes her sit comfortably.(background music: Kwaishon pe likhi)Radz who was surprised to see this new arjun , stared him without blinking her eyes.then arjun continues his banter on radz.

Arjun: U are really a fool radhika,If you want to get up u could have called me or sister here,..why you stressed yourself as stitches in the abdomen will hurt you na,...

Radz: no sir,Sam is there to help me but she went just now to attend neil's call.so,ly I tried to wake up myself.And it din hurt me heavily,...

Arjun: stop ur nonsense radhika,...next time if u tried to do sth like this,...I will never help you understand,...And you will be all alone,...

Radz: Sir,why you are so tensed,...nothing happened to me,...And sir,..Thank you very much for saving my life again and,...

Arjun: Stop it radhika,...I already said na next time u tried sth like this,...

Radz: but sir,I din do anything and why u r scolding me,...

Arjun: u know,U have spoiled my car seats,...

Radz:don't worry sir next time I ll keep the towel beside me to clean the blood strains,...Pinky Promise,...

Arjun: I think this operation makes you further stupid,...

Then Both arjun and radhika had intense eyelock with concern and affection,...Right then Sam came inside calling chasni,which makes them to break their eyelock and Arjun stood up facing sam and sam,who wants to talk with arjun was interrupted by Teji,Zubin,krithika and neil,...Everyone entered the ICU with huge noise which makes Doctor to shout at them to get out leaving one or two here with radz,..Arjun,went out first following sam,teji,zubin and krithika to leave the room,...Neil who was concerned about his chasni felt hurt seeing his friend like this,...

Neil: chasni,what's this yaar,... how it happened yaar??

Radz: nothing big neil,arjun sir saved me,...so,I am alright ,...

Neil:chasni,be careful yaar,...this time arjun was there so,he saved u,...next time if anything happened to you when you are alone,...what we will do yaar?,...promise me that you will b careful hereafter,...

Radz:neil,...don't worry,...And I ll b careful from now,...OK,...pinky promise,...

Radhika and neil held their fingers linked with big smile doing their pinky promise,...Right then Arjun who wants to take his wallet which he kept in the ICU came inside noticing radz and neil's little finger bonding,...and screen freezes on arjun's jealous face.

Precap: Arjun told sam that whatever he did earlier was wrong and these two days brought a big change in him cox of Radhika and he wants to start a fresh beginning from now

P.S: I hope you people will like it and I will continue the next episode based on your reviews guys as I am not confident on my writings,...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start.. plz do continue!
love the end btw 😛 by now everybody knws how much i love radz arjun neil jealousy track 😆

and i'm so so glad you people still writting on ArDhika ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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renu...
good start...I liked it
Neil and radhika bonding is cute

continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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good one
like it

missing DYM so much
really want to know what happen after d accident .
cont soon...

Edited by vishu10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi renu I read urs in telly updates. It's gud of u to update in both d sides. Looking forward to c ardhikas off interactions. And nesam bonding. Plz continue writing. Thank u all writers for keeping mmz alive through ur stories.. it's lovely plz update soon tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Huma-

nice start.. plz do continue!
love the end btw 😛 by now everybody knws how much i love radz arjun neil jealousy track 😆

and i'm so so glad you people still writting on ArDhika ❤️


thanks yaar and m glad that u loved it

Originally posted by: lovv

Renu nice one...

continue...


lovv,..m pinching myself that u liked it,...

Originally posted by: hanishank

renu...
good start...I liked it
Neil and radhika bonding is cute

continue soon :)


sure hani,..will continue this in my free time,...& m glad that u liked it,...

Originally posted by: vishu10

good one

like it

missing DYM so much
really want to know what happen after d accident .
cont soon...


Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

nice start.continue soon


thanks dear,...sure will continue this FF,...
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Originally posted by: Ramyagirish

Hi renu I read urs in telly updates. It's gud of u to update in both d sides. Looking forward to c ardhikas off interactions. And nesam bonding. Plz continue writing. Thank u all writers for keeping mmz alive through ur stories.. it's lovely plz update soon tc


S dear,...during MMz,..i used to comment in TU and DTB,...

But after its closure,...I dinn visited those sites often yaar as I loved Ardhika discussion here in IF dear and everyone's perspective on same ardhika scene,...And another reason i dinn have enough time to participate in the discussion there,...Bu ti got many friends there too like u all guys,..

I dont know,..may b its my over thinking but wanna share that we ardhika fans are always sweet yaar in IF,twitter,FB,TU and DTB,...
Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago
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Hiii friends,...Before going into this Episode of my Missing pieces part 1,I wanna clarify the meaning of my Title of this FF.Why I have chosen this title is that I gonna write the new series with some good old existing scenes and I will post the Epi number so,that you all can connect with that scene which I remodelled according to my story...And in this episode I used Episode 65 and 66.As usual, Excuse me for grammatical errors and I hope you will enjoy this ride,...

Episode 2 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Arjun who opened the door was irritated on seeing Radz and Neil's finger bonding.He stared them with anger which occupies his face completely.The sound of arjun's entry makes Radz and neil to distance their little finger by breaking their cute finger bonding which indicates their flawless Friendship.While distancing,Radz screamed in pain as it's the same hand where Drips has been injected which makes Neil to chide her friend lovingly ignites fire in my Hero Arjun's Heart.

Neil:chasni,what yaar just now u promised me u will take care of urself na,...Wait I will help you,...

Saying so Neil hold radz hand and placed her hand slowly on the bed pours oil in already burning fire in Arjun's Heart.

Radz: Neil,I said na its nothing yaar,..u don't worry,...

Hearing this confirmation from his chasni,Neil turned towards our angry bird Arjun and thanked him for saving his friend,..

Neil: Harre yaar Arjun,...I never think that you will be such a nice person but you have saved my chasni today,..For that I am liable to you,..Thank you Arjun,..

Arjun who was angry on neil came towards radhika's bed where he kept his wallet on the side tray beside her bed and intentionally hurt neil by his words while taking his wallet there,..

Arjun:I came here to take my wallet not to hear any nonsense,..And I din like gratitude from the monkeys which escaped from the zoo,...So,its better if you stay away from me,..

Right then,Sam came inside noticing high tension btw Neil and arjun after ending her call with Radz mom who was on the other end enquiring about her choti's well being,...

Sam:Arjun,...What's happening here?

Arjun who saw sam dinn utter any words and simply passed her throwing few angry stares at Neil,who already in full angry mode,...And closed the door with a sound thud',...Even Hospital door also became victim for Arjun's anger cum jealousy,...Sam then turned towards neil to make him calm after arjun's exit,...

Sam:Idiot,..Dont be angry yaar,...

Neil ignored her words and turned back at chasni to bid his goodbye just to walk out of the room.Sam who was puzzled by the happenings around her followed her Idiot to calm him was highly disappointed,..Radz who witnessing everything around her was shocked and confused,...

Sam:Idiot,..please don't be angry yaar,...

Neil: Angry,...How its possible Sammy,...I am monkey right,...So, you better ask your Arjun to be calm,..It will suit him yaar,...& M returning to Mumbai right now Sammy,...U take care of chasni,...

Saying so neil din wait for sam's reply and walked towards visitor hall where Teji,Zubin and Krithika were chatting among themselves,...Sam who also followed him was disappointed by neil's Decision,...

Sam: Neil,...stop there yaar,...please,listen my words,...

Neil: Teji,Zubin and Krithika,...I have arranged a Cab for returning to Mumbai now and if you people willing to accompany me,we will move right now as we have to arrange everything in Mumbai na,...Tomorrow chansni will b discharged and her parents were arriving in morning flight,...So,its better if we start now,...

Saying so neil left the visitor hall and puzzled sam,...Teji,Zubin and krithika too informed sam that its better if they join Neil as its difficult for him to arrange everything in Mumbai single handed,...So,they are going now,...Finally all the gang bid goodbye to their friend chasni before starting their return journey towards mumbai,...

Doctor who checked Radz informed Sam to give a light and warm Barley Soup to radz before giving the prescribed medicines to her,...Sam nodded yes to the Doctor and sit beside radz with worried face starts transferring the soup in a bowl and added some Pepper to it to make it eatable,...

Radz: Sam,Is neil still angry???

Sam: Dunno chasni,..you leave it yaar,...I will handle this idiot,...

Radz who din satisfied with Sam's answer also remained in an agitated state,...She took her engagement bangle from the tray and tries to wear it but end up playing with the bangle by her lost thoughts,...Same sam,who also added pepper in the bowl started stirring it continuously by her lost thoughts,...Both were lost in their thoughts thinking why their respective love was angry,...Radz who was lost in arjun's thoughts remembering arjun's harsh words towards Neil couldn't speak anything but just playing with her bangle and Sam who was lost in neil's thoughts remembering Neil's words about arjun too couldn't speak anything but just stir the hot soup continuously,...

Arjun,who was about to enter the room had a sight of Radz from the glass door brings smile on his face to whom he lost himself which he didn't realize. But his smile vanishes when his eyes met sam beside radz which reminds him his duty to fulfil his donkey years revenge,...Then he entered the room slowly makes radz and sam to come back to their present,...

Radz,who saw arjun entering the room smiled unknowingly in return to Arjun's smiling gaze,...Sam,who saw radz intense smiling gaze turned back and found arjun's arrival there,...She stood up and called arjun's name which breaks arjun and radz intense eyelock ignoring sam's presence,...Arjun who turned his head towards sam accepted sam's wish to talk,...

Sam: Arjun,..I wanna talk with you,..

Arjun: sure Sam,..I too wanna talk with you,...

Both went outside the room to talk out their relationship,...

Arjun:Sam,..whatever I did earlier was wrong and these two days brought a big change in me cox of Radhika and I don't want to remember the hurtful things happened before as I want to start a fresh beginning from now.

Arjun said those things seeing radz from the glass door who lost in her own world playing with her bangle still,...and he turned towards sam hearing sam's words,...

Sam:Arjun,I agree ,... we will start a fresh from now,..and thanks for saving chasni yaar,..Tell me one thing,... how did you saved chasni from this major accident as I heard from teji that accident happened near kandla hotel,...

Arjun:I hope u understand that it will be good for all of us if something unsaid,...

Saying so arjun smiled sarcastically and both entered the room increasing radz curiosity,...

Sam: Chasni,I said u to distance arjun from me but you,...As usual cleared all the mess,...give me a hug,...

Sam hugged Radz and kissed Radz cheek,...

Radz: I knew Arjun sir will do the things that will be correct,...

Sam:hmmm,..Oh chasni,I wanna talk with this Idiot now or else he will b angry with me for this too,..

Then sam went outside to have a chat with Neil leaving Arjun and Radhika alone,...Arjun saw bowl full of hot soup and asked radz that she had her dinner or not,...& cute banter between the duo.

Arjun:Do you have your dinner,Radhika?

Radz: No sir,..Sam will feed me after her chat with neil on phone sir,...

Arjun: y u r so careless radhika,..Doctor advised u to take your food on time right,...Wait I will feed you,...

Saying so Arjun took the bowl sitting beside radz and tries to feed radz,...Arjun took a spoon full of soup near radz mouth to feed her,...Radz hesitated to eat from arjun's hand,...

Radz:Sir,...Its ok,..Sam will feed me and you no need to worry,...please sir,...

Arjun: what radhika,..I wont add chilli in your food,...so,don't worry much,...Have this,...

After this radz had no choice other than eating silently,...Both had eye lock in between this,...(Back ground Music: Kwahishon pe likhi),..while eating radz spilled some due to dry cough,..So,Arjun makes her drink the water from the glass by holding her head softly,...Radz was stunned to see Arjun's care for her and she lost herself in staring this new arjun,...

Arjun: Are you alright radhika,..

Radz: hmmm,..Enough sir,..I cant eat more than this,...Please,...

Arjun accepted and kept the bowl on the tray and took a cloth to clean radz mouth,...Radz was uncomfortable seeing arjun coming near her to clean her mouth,...

Radz: Sir,...Leave it na,..I will do it myself,..please give it to me,...

Arjun again stared radz and he put his finger on his lips signing radz not to talk,...

Arjun:ushhh!!!! Keep quiet Radhika,...cant u remain silent for few minutes,...

Saying so Arjun cleaned radz mouth which induces butterflies in radz stomach,..she diverted her gaze when arjun cleaning her mouth and her cheeks using the towel,...Then, Arjun gave her the medicines after food,...Radhika had her medicine looking at her hero Arjun Sir without blinking her eyes lovingly,...The screen freezes on Ardhika's intense Eyelock,...

Precap: Dadaji and mala welcoming their choti in Mumbai.Radz hug her mom with Dilip patting his choti's Head affectionately,...

Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update.oh my god arjun jealous of neil.so cute of arun feeding radhika
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Posted: 9 years ago
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renu...so nice
at least hear...arjun is taking care of radhika which we missed in the show...
thanks for giving such a cute moment

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