Manmarziyan FF Missing pieces- Last Epi 25-Pg.38 updated on 24/08/2016 - Page 3

Originally posted by: hanishank

sooo good renu...

waiting for next epi :)

Hiii Friends,...I wanna convey One thing before starting this episode that I didn't use any old scenes in this Episode and its purely my imaginary. Dadaji is my favourite in MMz after Radz.So,In this Episode,My Dadaji gonna enter our sweet blossoming Ardhika's Love life journey,...May be it looks bored and M not sure about it,...I hope u people will like this slow journey of Remodeled Manmarziyan,...As usual,Please Excuse me for many Grammatical Errors here and There,..I hope u never Mind it,...

Episode 4 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Neil: Wohooo!!!!! Chasni, Here my first surprise for youuu,...

Saying So,Neil waved his hands towards Dadaji,...Radz was on cloud nine seeing her Dadaji there in Mumbai which she never dreamt,...She was in full of joys of the spring at this moment,...Tears of Happiness rolled down her cheeks was visible to all standing there including Her Hero Arjun sir,...Dadaji walked slowly towards his choti and gave her a warm tight hug which in turn gives his choti, the needed strength after this huge accident,...

Dadaji: Choti,..Are You Fine???You made me cry choti,...

Radz: Dadaji,I am fine and You came na,...See, Now I am not feeling any stress Dadaji,..I miss your talks dadaji,...Really I miss you sooo much,...

Radz hugged back her dadaji and dadaji wipes his choti's tears,...Dadaji kissed his choti's forehead affectionately,...Arjun was taken back by the strong emotional bond between Radz and her Dadaji,which he was witnessing for the first time in his life,..Everyone there were amused by this cute convo btw Radz and her Dadaji,...

Neil: yahooo!!!! Chasniji,...How's my Surprise yaar???

Sam: stop it idiot,...My surprise is also nice,..Chasni,tell me yaar,..U likes mine ly na,...I accept dadaji's arrival is a nice surprise,..but who gave that Idea yaar???

Neil: Sammy,U didn't do anything,You just called Mala Aunty and Dilip Uncle,..I only made all arrangements for Dadaji's Arrival,...I confirmed his Ticket and everything,..So,...

Dadaji:Harree u both shut for few minutes,...Stop your Fights,...here my choti is crying and you too are go on blabbering,...

Radz:I wont cry Dadaji,...Neil,Thank you so much,...

Neil: I told u na,..In friendship,...No sorry and No thanks,...Wipe your tears,...Or else you will catch Ullu Flu,...

Sam:hey one minute,... what's this Ullu flu???,...Hmmm,..

Neil: Ask chasni,...Sammy,...what chasni??? ,..am I correct ???

Radz laughed at Neil's comment and wiped her tears,...Everyone was happy seeing this but Arjun felt a bit irritated by Radz and Neil's Friendship which he tried to cover by moving away from there,...

Arjun: Sam,I think Its time for me to go,..So,...

Neil: Harreee Arjun,Wait for few minutes yaar,..We have arranged a lunch and a small get together to make chasni happy,...So,I hope u will join us,..

Radz then remembered that she din intro her dadaji to Arjun,...

Radz: And Dadaji,...This is Arjun Sir,...today I am talking with u na,..Its ly cox of Arjun Sir,.. Dadaji,...

Arjun: Namaste,..(smiled lightly from his heart without any faking)

Dadaji: Arjun beta,..Thank you so much for saving my soul...

Saying so Dadaji folded his hands before Arjun in gratitude with tears for saving his choti,...Arjun felt hurt seeing this,.He unfolded Dadaji's hands as his deeds are not so big and its his duty to save her.For the first time he felt ashamed for his past deeds,...He felt guilty for everything that happened to Radz as the real truth for Radz today's state was cox of him,which was still unknown to the rest of this world hurts his conscience badly.

Neil tried to lighten the present moment called everyone to come inside,..

Neil: dadaji,Mala Aunty and Uncle,...Shall we go inside,...As Chasni was standing here for a long time,...And arjun,..Please join us,..I hope U will,...

Neil noticed Arjun's worried face for the first time,..But he didn't pay any attention to it,...

Sam: yes,..Neil is right,...Chasni,..common yaar,...let's go inside,...

Saying so Neil and Sam went first with their usual amusement,...Mala and dilip followed them and finally Dadaji helped his choti to walk. Radz started talking with her dadaji about her short stories which she left incomplete after her Mumbai Arrival happily,..Arjun,who saw Radz happiness forgot himself as his eyes were glued on Radz,...He smiled unknowingly to Radz and Dadaji's jokes,..

Neil and sam were busy in arranging lunch for everyone in the Dinning hall,..At the same time,Mala took Radz inside to change her Dress,...Where Dilip,dadaji and Arjun sat in the hall with arjun alone busy in Fixing something in his new mobile,...

Radz,who dressed in a simple as well as an elegant blue Maxi came to Hall slowly with the help of Mala grabbed Arjun's full attention towards her,...Arjun,who turned from his new Mobile, His full body,His eyes were so intense, they resembled glowing coals,...He took a look at Radz from bottom to top,...Radz felt the same spark,...She diverted her gaze from arjun indirectly saying him not to look at her as all are watching them,...But Arjun cant take his eyes off from Radz,...Dadaji who called Arjun a few times noticed arjun's intense Gaze on his choti,...

Dadaji: Arjun beta,...Arjun,...What you are looking for???,..I asked you what is your hobby???

Arjun murmured something,.. stood straight and informed Dilip,Dadaji,that he had some important work,...So, he has to move now,..He didn't expect their reply and he went out straightaway leaving every one perplexed,...

Then,Everyone enjoyed their lunch together except Radz who still remained in an agitated state,..Dadaji noticed his choti's change in behaviour,...After lunch,Neil and Sam went for shopping in a nearby super market,...

Its Night,.Sam was talking with mala about neil's antics in the Super market and dilip slept in the hall,...Radz was sitting on the steps alone lost somewhere,...Dadaji came near his choti and asked what's the reason for her worries,...

Dadaji: Choti,why you are sitting here alone,...What's bothering you choti???

Radz:Nothing Dadaji,...

Saying so Radz tried to wipe her tears was stopped by dadaji,...

Dadaji: I know you more than you know yourself choti,...Arjun was the reason right,...

Radz hugged dadaji hearing this,...Dadaji wiped her tears and enquired what happened between them,...

Radz: Dadaji,...I dunno,...He saved me and helped me whenever I was in trouble but He was behaving rude dadaji,...I knew he was good at heart,...and he is hiding something from me dadaji,...Sam accepted Arjun sir's love ly cox of my assurance about him Dadaji,...I wanna become his friend dadaji,..Nothing else,...

Saying so,Radz cried her eyes out,...Dadaji wiped her tears,..cuddled her affectionately narrates a short story,...

Dadaji:choti,...One day a saint asked his Disciple to get him some water from the nearby lake,...Disciple went there and noticed some ppl who were washing clothes in the lake and a bullock cart started crossing through the same lake.As a result,the water was muddy,...So,he came back and told the saint that water is not suitable to drink.After a while,Saint again asked his Disciple to get him some water .The disciple obediently went back to lake.This time he found that the mud had settled down and the water was so clean,..So,he collected some in his pot and brought it to saint.choti,now tell me, what he did to make the water clean?,...

Radz after wiping her eyes and nose answered her dadaji like a child,...

Radz:dadaji,..He let it as it is and the mud settled down on its own,...

Dadaji: Haan,...the same go with the mind and heart too choti,...When it is disturbed, just let it be,..give it a little time and it will settle down on its own,...

Radz who,rest on her dadaji got something new and Clear cut solution for her many unanswered queries,... Screen freezes on Radz cuddling her Dadaji,...

Precap: Dilip questioned Radz,...how this accident happened??? let Arjun and Radz so Tensed

wow...renu
ur short story in between the show has much inner meaning... very good...it suited well for Arjun

Enjoyed it...episode 3 was so cute and rads again into questioning and detective mode askin arjun about his behaviour..and asusual arjun askin her to stay away...i liked how u elaborated the scene from the original episode..

Episode 4 was good,loved dadaji and dadaji noticed some sparks b/w ardhika already

Waitin for the next epi dhamaka epi...

Read episodes 2,3 & 4 in one go. Absolutely love love love it 😳 I so wish it was shown like this in the original show 😕 The best parts were jealous Arjun moments hehe. Always wanted to see this side of him, but damn SP 😡 And Neil was cool as always 😆 Thanks for writing this beautiful FF. Enjoying how you're putting your own ideas into the original story and making it more spicy!! Keep up the amazing work 👏 Will be waiting for the next update. Hope it comes soon 😉

Thanks for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: hanishank

wow...renu
ur short story in between the show has much inner meaning... very good...it suited well for Arjun

Originally posted by: -rosel-

Enjoyed it...episode 3 was so cute and rads again into questioning and detective mode askin arjun about his behaviour..and asusual arjun askin her to stay away...i liked how u elaborated the scene from the original episode..

Episode 4 was good,loved dadaji and dadaji noticed some sparks b/w ardhika already

Waitin for the next epi dhamaka epi...

Originally posted by: Aishwarza1

Read episodes 2,3 & 4 in one go. Absolutely love love love it 😳 I so wish it was shown like this in the original show 😕 The best parts were jealous Arjun moments hehe. Always wanted to see this side of him, but damn SP 😡 And Neil was cool as always 😆 Thanks for writing this beautiful FF. Enjoying how you're putting your own ideas into the original story and making it more spicy!! Keep up the amazing work 👏 Will be waiting for the next update. Hope it comes soon 😉

Thanks for the pm 😊

Hiii Friends,...I wont blabber anything about this Episode,...I left it in your hands and I hope you people will like this slow ride,...As usual Ignore my Grammatical mistakes here and there,...I hope u never mind it,...

Episode 5 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

The Mobile starts ringing,..Arjun who came out of his Restroom in the morning attends the call with Someone on the other end, makes him to remember his lifetime goal again,...

Arjun:Ya,...I knew,...I didn't forget anything,...U take care,...hmm,...

Arjun after ending the call, dressed up in a determination to set his mind in his old path after passing a sleepless night yesterday to reach his destination for which he spent his whole life,...He reached Birdsong and entered his cabin after taking a long breath,...But the Irony is His heart didn't mind his words or his life time goal.It was strong in its decision that it wants what he wants,...Teji, who came inside to get a sign from Arjun distract him from recollecting his deadly past,...Arjun after signing the document go through some files of Maybeline Newyork's account was lost in thoughts of newly found Ray of Light in his Dark world,...When he turned each page in the file, He remembered each Moments he spent with Radz in lonovla,...It brings smile on his face. In fact, it glitters his face,...

He looked outside of his cabin to have a glimpse of his ladylove, rather he had sight of the empty chair alone which made him highly disappointed,...Then, He tries to divert his profound thoughts by concentrating on his works was again lost to his heart,...He stood up from his chair and walked for a short to make him normal and to divert his gaze from that void space of Radz in the Office,...

After a long struggle between his mind and heart,...He questioned himself that why the heck,did I go caveman?,..What's distracting me from my goal?,..Why?',..Though he knew answer for all his question unlike Radz, He was not ready to say it once,...He threw the files from the Table and hit the table strongly by his hands,...His Fists were so tight that he was in the danger of Fracturing his own bones,...He knew his goals and in fact he was free from his so called Roadblock Radz' in his travel towards his destination now. None of that made any difference for his present restlessness,...

It looks like he had Ice Pick Headache at that moment, Her mere thoughts were so vicious as it has ability to shutdown his consciousness,...Uncurling his fingers with sheer force of will,He watched his blood strains rush back in,...When she risked her life to save him,that moment he found that she is important for him in his life more than himself,..He even made it clear that he'd already crossed too many lines in fact,he forgot everything even his donkey years revenge before her and broken too many rules,..Soon it would be too late to draw back from her thoughts completely,...

His each and every thunderstorms in his heart stops hitting him after the knock of someone's call,...He turned back to hide his flooding emotions,..Wipes his face,...Felt a bit relaxed to know it's a sub staff's call as he informed Arjun that Piyali Mam called him to her cabin,...

Arjun: Ok,..come here,..these files were mistakenly fallen from the table,...So, clean my table before I come,...

Saying so Arjun went out with his mask to face Piyali in her cabin,...

Piyali: Arjun,..Yes comin,...I wanna hear your opinion on this matter,...

Arjun:Yes Piyali,...(acknowledged her with fake smile)

Piyali: U know very well,..these people were working in your team,...& We also knew that Radhika met with an accident,..& u knew, Without her contribution, we might missed this account,..So,Its better if we take Radhika's opinion into account while making any further move in this Ad,...Every one here wanna discuss some ideas along with Radhika to finalise the pamphlets for Maybeline Newyork ad,...So,Why cant you guys work with her in their flat after completing Noon session in Office,..I didn't compel you as your decision will be final,...

Sam: Arjun,I myself wanna talk about this in personal but mom started it,...I hope you will agree,...I noticed chasni's change in her demeanour after accident,..Neil tried so much to make her normal but still I felt she was disturbed somewhere,...I knew about her very well,When we work with her means,she may forgot her pains for a while,...Please Arjun,..

Arjun with a light smile agrees to sam and Piyali's proposition,...Sam thanked arjun,.. at the same time, neil and Samrat too joined their convo,...Piyali was busy in her call walked outside her cabin called samrat,who engaged in their funny convo,...

Samrat: Yes my love,...

Saying so Samrat excused himself from these buddies funny talks,...

Neil: well Arjun,We didn't informed chasni about this,..I think it will b a nice surprise for her,...I hope you too will join us,..

Arjun smirked hearing this,...

Sam: ok Idiot,..Tell me one thing,...How many surprise you planned for chasni???,...Hmmm,...Is chasni my friend or your friend yaar???

Neil: Sammy,do u smell something burning here???

Sam: where???

Neil: I think its coming from ur side ly yaar,...

Sam chased neil to beat him but arjun who lost himself didn't do anything other than staring them lifelessly,...

Neil:ok Sammy,..i agree,..just 2 surprise ly yaar,...This surprise was planned by all of us,...So,it wont counted in my account,...Another surprise,..i wont disclose it now,...

Sam: oh!!!,..Ok baba,I wont ask u what it is??? Now happy,...And Arjun,...I forgot to tell u that we planned our assignment in our flat today evening 6.00pm,...So,come sharply at 6.00pm yaar,...

Arjun: ya sure,...

Neil and sam walked past Arjun left a hope for arjun to come out of his prolonged restlessness,...

Its Evening,...Arjun came half- an hour before but hesitated to go inside,...Finally he made up his mind to go,... Radz,who just came from the hospital was seated with the help of her dadaji in the hall,...Mala was busy in her kitchen making some healthy food for radz alone,...Just then Dilip,who went thru Radhika's reports started questioning his choti about the accident,...

Dilip: choti,...I wanna talk with you some thing important,...

Radz: haan papa,..

Dilip: How did this accident happened choti?,..Now,Tell me the truth as sam also not here,...

Radz stammered for few seconds,..then answered her dad by covering the major truth,...

Radz: I told you already na papa,...I didn't see while crossing the road and a truck hit me behind,...Arjun sir,who saw me lying on the road fighting with my death saved me,..that's it papa,...

Dilip:Oh,..then where is Sam and your other friends during this accident?,...Y they didn't admit you in hospital?,..Y arjun alone saved you???

Radz felt uncomfortable with her Dad's questions as she didn't have any truthful answer to give him,...

Dadaji: Harree dilip,...just stop Questioning choti like a criminal,...Our goodwill only saved our choti,..Now she is fine na,...That's enough,...And Arjun saved our choti on time,..So,we were obliged to him forever,...If someone heard ur questions, it will hurt them badly,...

Dilip:See choti,...Our family has some respect and I trust you more than myself beta but I cant see you facing these pains,..Today after chatting with the doctor,I came to know that this is a major accident and you escaped from this by god's grace,..Your dream is important for me that's y I gave you these 6 months,..But not at the cost of your safety beta,...

Radz took his dad's hand in her and started assuring her papa,..

Radz: Papa,..I knew,...U trust me more than yourself papa,...I swear, I will never do anything against your trust papa,...Believe me papa,...

Dilip: I believe u beta,...Can you do me a favour?,...Please come to Hrishikesh along with us till your wounds get cured completely,...I booked flight tickets for you too beta,...

Arjun,who standing at the doorsteps heard the entire convo between the duo was extremely shocked,...The screen freezes on Arjun's terrifying face.

Precap:Neil pinches Radz cheeks with a big smile,...Arjun who witnessed this burnt literally in jealousy,...

First like and comment yayyy!!!

Fantabulous update! Loving the slow and steady progress in story coz it's more detailed and interesting to read 😊
Next update of jealous Arjun's gonna be super fun 😆