Manmarziyan FF Missing pieces- Last Epi 25-Pg.38 updated on 24/08/2016 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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jealous Arjun and caring Neil..what a combo!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
hey Renu...bit busy vth work...

nice update yaar...

hmm...so neil bought a mobile to radhika...neil z cool friend yaar...i liked dat he gav dat through dadaji...


y i am feeling like neil knows wat happend n dng it as friend n also to see arjun's jealousy...

truly speaking i didnt expect neil vl give dat surprise...i was thinking someway arjun vl buy it, after he saw how close radhika truly z to dadaji...so it came as a surprise to me...lol

i think dadaji already started his brain it seems...

neil z making both d main targets jealous...(arjun for radhika, sam z for neil...)...

nice one...continue...

Edited by lovv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Someone's burning in jealousy and it will only increase I guess 😛 but we're definitely loving this envious Mr Mehra 😉

Dadaji-choti convo was so nice! Always loved their bond and you made made it even more sweet 😳in love with the way your story is progressing. Keep it going pls! Thanks for taking out time to write for us 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: krithi12

loved neil a lot i the epi.really this is how dym has to be proceeded but they made mockery of the show by bringing nandu so early.i am so happy u started this ff


Thank you deary,..
Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishwarza1

Someone's burning in jealousy and it will only increase I guess 😛 but we're definitely loving this envious Mr Mehra 😉

Dadaji-choti convo was so nice! Always loved their bond and you made made it even more sweet 😳in love with the way your story is progressing. Keep it going pls! Thanks for taking out time to write for us 😊


thank you dear,...sure wil continue it dear
Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hanishank

wow...renu...radhika and neil bonding is so good and heart touching...

very nice

keep updating :)


Thanx hani,...

Originally posted by: mmzmahi

jealous Arjun and caring Neil..what a combo!


thanx mahi,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovv

hey Renu...bit busy vth work...

nice update yaar...

hmm...so neil bought a mobile to radhika...neil z cool friend yaar...i liked dat he gav dat through dadaji...


y i am feeling like neil knows wat happend n dng it as friend n also to see arjun's jealousy...

truly speaking i didnt expect neil vl give dat surprise...i was thinking someway arjun vl buy it, after he saw how close radhika truly z to dadaji...so it came as a surprise to me...lol

i think dadaji already started his brain it seems...

neil z making both d main targets jealous...(arjun for radhika, sam z for neil...)...

nice one...continue...


Lovv,...M glad that you liked this update deary,...

I hope u will like my next epi too dear,...

& ya Planned sth with dadaji too,..I wont disclose it now,...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiii friends,...This update will have more Nesam Scenes and next update will be more of our Ardhika,...Hope you guys will enjoy this ride,... Last note,...Sorry guys,This update will be slightly shorter than previous updates,...But Next update will be lengthy as I promised,...As usual, Ignore my Grammatical mistakes here and there,...

Episode 7 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Arjun yelled Sam's Name loudly made everyone to listen him including Radz and Neil,...Sam asked Arjun, the reason for his loud call with a confused face,...

Sam: Arjun???

Arjun after looking at Sam started,

Arjun: I hope everyone here knows that the purpose of this get together is to complete our Assignment by today,.. (Said angrily eyeing at Radz)

Neil: Ya Arjun,...Of course, We all knew yaar,...In fact, If I am not wrong, We are working on our assignments only.Now what's your problem in that???

Teji,Zubin and krithika also looked at each other confused,..Sam just saw Radz puzzlingly, who also didn't catch Arjun's turbulence at that moment. Arjun, who didn't want to hear anything from his opponent turned towards Sam and started,

Arjun:I suspect more gossips here rather than work done,... (said this, while staring Neil with his burning eyes),..

Sam: But Arjun,I couldn't figure anything like that yaar,...We all are seriously engaged in our assignments,...

Arjun ignored Sam's sayings turned towards Teji Gang and started assigning works to everyone,..

Arjun: Teji,U come here,...U and neil will work on Themes for the Pamphlets,...Sam,..U,Zubin and Krithika work on outer designs for the pamphlet,...And Radhika,U write Suitable quotes for this Pamphlet just keeping the Ad's concept alone in your mind,...(Arjun said this in a sarcastic manner),... From now,Work will be according to my commands,...

Neil: But Arjun, Me and chasni already started writing quotes yaar,..& sam too Partially completed her Outward designs,...Teji,Zubin and krithika were already gathered necessary themes to be used for this Pamphlet,..Just we all need a final touch in this,...Nothing Else,..If u just inform us, What changes to be needed in our work,..We will alter the things accordingly,...

Arjun: I don't wanna hear anything,..Work will be done according to my orders as I am your boss,...I hope if u ppl understand this sooner, It will be good for u all ,... No more questions,..Get back to work,...

Saying so,Arjun seated with an evil smirk on his face poking his mobile silently,...Sam too din like arjun's attitude towards her friends,..Radz dinn utter anything,...But, Neil was bit annoyed at Arjun's commands and rude behaviour,...He tried to oppose arjun but remained silent by Sam's Request,...

Sam: Neil,..Please,Leave this na,...Don't make it a issue yaar,...We will work according to arjun's sayings,...Please, for me,...

Neil: How can I? Sammy,...It's Boss Order,...We have to follow na,...I understood yaar,...Not a big deal,...U don't worry,...Teji, come yaar,.. lets start our work,...

Saying so,Neil too left sam confused,...The entire gang were working silently as per Arjun's Instructions,..Radz was busy in writing attractive quotes,...But Arjun was busy in watching his ladylove's every moments,...After a while,Teji gang came to Arjun and asked his permission to leave as they completed 75% of their work,...Arjun allowed them to leave,...Sam informed arjun that she & neil will complete the remaining work,...Arjun accepted her proposition,...Finally they started leaving biding goodbye to everyone,...Radz,who also went out to bid good bye to them stood silently in the balcony for a few minutes lost somewhere in her own thoughts,...Arjun also came outside in search of Radz,...

At the Same time,Neil was working silently on the themes was interrupted by Sam,...

Sam: Idiot,...One minute,..Turn this side yaar,...

Saying so,Sam turned neils chin towards her,...

Sam: I know u r angry on Arjun,...And U know na,this Arjun is always like this,...But,He is something Neil,..That draws me towards him,...I dunno what it is,...

Neil felt a bit hurt Seeing Love for Arjun in Sam's Eyes,...But he din showed it to her,... He holds Sam's cheeks lovingly and started,

Neil: No Sam,I din get angry on Arjun,...Your Happiness is mine's Dear,...U are happy with Arjun na,..then there will b no problem for me,..So,You don't worry much about this,...I just over reacted for pineapple's commands, sammendher singh,...

With that Neil made sam smile by his funny comments,...Then he starts to continue his work, was again interrupted by Sam,...And Sam, this time started with an hesitation,...

Sam:Idiot,...

Neil responds her while working,...

Neil: Hmmm tell Sammy,...

Sam: Nothing Neil,...I wanna ask u something,...

Neil: Hmmm proceed,...

Sam:Idiot,...Listen to me na,...

Neil turned towards sam and started,..

Neil: Now what? Sammy,...

Sam asked neil her Doubt hesitatingly,...

Sam: U have to answer me truly,...OK,...

Neil: Ok Yaar,...What's your doubt?,...& why u r behaving differently yaar???

Sam: Who is your Best friend?

Neil: What's this stupid question??? U disturbed me to ask this silly question?

Neil again started his work,...

Sam:Idiot, Answer me now,...please, face me yaar,...

Neil:You only my all time Best friend,...Ok,Tell me y r u asking this now???

Sam: Nothing,...Then chasni,...

Neil laughed at sam hearing her words,..

Neil: Sammy,...What happened to you yaar???,...Chasni is our best friend,...

Sam: No,Tell me neil,...Who is your One Best friend?,...Me or chasni,...

Neil:Sammy,I dunno why are u asking these questions suddenly,...U r my Soul,...I will do anything for u Sam,...& chasni is also my Best Friend yaar,...I cant differentiate u both,...U both are like my eyes,...

Sam: Neil,...I know chasni is our Best friend but,...

Neil stopped Sam by putting his fingers on sam's mouth and started clearing her doubts,...

Neil: Sammy,Please don't come into any conclusion without knowing about anything completely,..Chasni is really a nice girl sam,...She is so selfless and she will do anything for her loved ones,..She loves u more than I do Sam,..Whatever I Gift her or gave some surprises,...Its very less before her love for you sam,...I saw true affection for you from her eyes Sammy,...Its difficult to get a friend like her Sammy,...I think,We are gifted to get a friend like her sam,...Please,Don't ask such questions before chasni,...It will hurt her badly,...Already she is in pain,...Don't cause her much more pain Sammy,...

Saying so Neil stood up to leave,...Sam holds neil's hand and apologize to neil,

Sam:Idiot,...Sorry,...I didn't mean to say anything against chasni,...I knew her,...Truly I got my mom back ly after her entry in my life,...U r right,..M really gifted to have a friend like chasni,...I just wanna knew whether chasni is ur Best friend,..& M really sorry to ask such question neil,...U both are my Best friends,...I was stupid neil,...How could I think like that,...Please forgive me idiot,...

Neil: Its ok Sammy,...Don't be so tensed yaar,...Its nothing,...We three are friends now and ever in our life and no one can separate us even your Pineapple,...

Sam sighed in acknowledgement to Neil's comment and both had a tight warm hug,...(Background music: Teri meri Dosti )

Precap: Arjun pinned Radz against the wall and their lips were barely an inch apart,...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Hi renu nice update yaar. But ur precap is delicious.plz plz update soon. Well arjun character is shown exactly as v have seen. I can visualize all this.Nesam interactions r described beautifully. If possible pl update asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Hi renu a small query plz. As u have handsomely added a lot of missing scenes to already beautiful story , I would still like to know few things if possible. Will nandini &Saral make an entry?? Will radhika too start feeling for arjun b4 samrj marriage controversy??? Or will radhika only realize her feelings aft ardhika marriage?? Just like mmz??? Will she guess whether arjun has feelings for her? As in d previous episode radhika breaks d eye contact with arjun deliberately. So it looked like she instinctively knows smth is brewing btw them. Can't help it. Just too curious. And also will radhika guess abt Neil 's feelings for Sam. As this is aptly titled missing pieces. I would like to know how these missing pieces would unfold too. I understand u can't disclose d whole plot. But if possible a small hint 😉. Heee.. I love ur story thanks for filling in d missing gaps. This is wholesome.
Edited by Ramyagirish - 9 years ago

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