Manmarziyan FF Missing pieces- Last Epi 25-Pg.38 updated on 24/08/2016 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Aishwarza1

First like and comment yayyy!!!

Fantabulous update! Loving the slow and steady progress in story coz it's more detailed and interesting to read 😊
Next update of jealous Arjun's gonna be super fun 😆

Originally posted by: aartee22

have just finished reading all the 5 parts in one go...only one word AWESOME

plz continue soon im dying to know wat will happen next

thx

Originally posted by: lovv

k ...i am too late here i think...

as i said nice start...u wanted d origianl show to extend after d accident r8...Renu u r doing dat in a nice way...

i really wanted dadaji after accident...but they didnt show it...i wanted to see a scene where dadaji asks radhika y she didnt tell abt arjun totally...u know in a teasing way...

so, dadaji introduction here z very nice to read...thanks for dat...

in chapter 4,

i liked one line u wrote...wen arjun z looking at her, wen radhika-dadaji met...radhika looks away...n d way u said like she z asking arjun to stop looking at her bcz they r surounded was too cute...

dats wat d tru meaning wen she introduced saral to arjun on d show...n in other cases also..wenever she looks away or looks down, then only he vl stop looking at her...dats his clue to stop eying her...their way of talking to each other...

its so nice yaar...

in 5th chapter...liked arjun missing radhika in d office n becoming moody n restless...

so d gang z gng to work in apartment...so expecting few nice scenes to read...y bcz i am thinking dadaji vl surely gng to change MR.dilip's plans of leaving to hrishikesh...hoping..may b he vl make all d gang visit hrishikesh one weekend...ok...its my wish...lol...

totally nice updates yaar...great gng...

Hiii Friends,...This Episode may look slightly bored but I hope u all will enjoy another Slow Ride of this Missing Pieces,...As usual Ignore my Grammatical Errors here and there,...I hope u never mind it,...

Episode 6 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Radz:Papa,..I said na,..I am perfectly alright,...So,u don't be tensed papa,...Doctor said after 2 days,I can walk normally,...I will do whatever you want me to do papa,..U r important to me more than my dreams papa,...But,...

Dilip:Choti,I said my decision already regarding this,..So,U get ready for tomorrow's journey to Hrishikesh,...

Saying so Dilip went to his room leaving Radz worried,...Dadaji,who saw this sat near his choti and hugged her to give assurance as well as needed strength to his choti,..

Dadaji:choti,Y r u crying now?,...Hearing your father's decision???,...

Radz: No dadaji,...I felt that today for the first time in my life, I hide truth from Papa dadaji,...& this 6 months are more important to me dadaji,...I have less time to live my dream like a Butterfly dadaji,...

Dadaji:U hide about Arjun from Dilip right???,...

Arjun,who was listening everything at doorsteps watched Radz keenly,...Radz looked at her dadaji with tears hugged him back and started confessing,..

Radz:Dadaji,U know about papa already na,...If he found, I was alone with Arjun Sir in lonovla,..Then,He might have been hurt badly dadaji,...& I don't want to hurt my papa at any cost Dadaji,...I came to Mumbai to live my dreams and wanna show my achievements to this world in these 6 months Dadaji,...

Dadaji wiping his choti's tears,..started assuring his choti,...

Dadaji:Choti,Don't let anyone steal your dreams beta,..Follow your heart,No matter what might happen,...I will handle Dilip,...u r not going anywhere till you achieve your dreams beta,...

Radz:But how Dadaji???

Dadaji:He is father of u but I am father of your father,...

Dadaji laughed out loudly and cuddled his choti in assurance,...Arjun,who looking this silently forgot himself before their strong affectionate bond,...Right then,Teji and his gang entered inside with a bang,...

Teji,zubin and Krithika: We also came to work,...

Was stopped seeing Arjun standing there,...Radz and her Dadaji broke their hug and Radz was happy to see them here,...Neil and Sam too joined them,...

Teji: Chasni,How r u now???

Radz: fine teji,...What, you all are here???,...

Radz looked puzzled and saw sam to get answer for her puzzle,...Sam answered her with a grin,..

Sam: We all gonna work together with you on Maybeline Newyork account here in our flat,...

Hearing this, Radz had a big smile on her face forgetting everything happened before their arrival,...

Neil: And chasni,...I told u na,...I had one surprise for you,...That surprise is,...

Neil took some gift wrapped box from his pocket and hand over it to Dadaji,...Everyone there were puzzled including Dadaji,...

Dadaji: what's this beta???,...Y r u giving this to me???,...

Neil: wait Dadaji,..Open the gift now and then give this gift to chasni,..there will be a nice surprise in this,...

Dadaji still looked puzzled tries to open the gift wrappers ,...Sam helped dadaji to open the gift,...Finally everyone got answer,...It was a beautiful black silver coated Smart phone,...

Neil:Chasni,You lost your mobile which dadaji gifted to you na,...So,You gonna get back your same no more than that of your old mobile's love from your dadaji to you thru this mobile with latest features and that too from your Dadaji's hand,...wohoo!!!

Radz eyes were filled with tears of gratitude for her friend,..Sam too felt somewhat uncomfortable along with our superhero Arjun,...Arjun almost ripped the hanky from his pocket into many pieces seeing this,...He dunno that he had to witness more from now onwards,...(Author's note:Arjun, please save some pieces of cloth for future, U need a lot)

Later, Dadaji gave the Neil's New Branded Mobile to his choti and hugged her back,...Further Dadaji who saw the real affection from Neil for his choti was overwhelmed by their Friendship kissed Neil's forehead in return,...Arjun was hyper tensed seeing this and he decided to leave from there was stopped by MAla,...

Mala:Arjun beta,where are u going?,...I prepared Evening Tiffin for u all,..Have some beta,..

Arjun cant explain his state to anyone, simply nodded yes,...Everyone started enjoying their Evening tiffin except arjun,whose eyes were turned blood red as it has capacity to burn anything at that moment,...It was fixed on Radz and Neil,...He didn't start eating rather he was busy in throwing deadly stares on Neil,who was busy with his chasni and his love sam,...Radz,who also enjoying her moments with her friends turned towards arjun accidently witnessed arjun's angry glares,... Those unearthly eyes were so intense, she could see the reflection of her own furious expression in their depths.It was broken by Dilip's sound call,...

Dilip,who came to Hall informed everyone that Mala,Dadaji and himself gonna attend a Puja In lord siddhivinayak temple as they prayed for choti's safety,..So,its time for them to start now as Puja will start at 7.00PM,...Arjun offered help,..But Dilip informed him that they already booked Call taxi,..So,Asked all of them to concentrate in their work,...

Mala:Sam beta,..Please take care of choti na,..I think we will come after 9.00PM,..So,After dinner,Don't forget to give medicines to choti,..She wont take medicines on time by herself,...

Sam: Aunty,..Dont worry,..I will take care of chasni,...PAkka,...And have Nice Darshan,...I think uncle and dadaji are waiting outside,...

Everyone including Radz after biding goodbye to them started their work on Designing pamphlets,...Arjun portrayed himself as busy in his mobile seated opposite to the Radz,who started writing quotes suitable for the pamphlets,...Sam was busy with Teji started drawing the outlines for the pamphlets,...Arjun checked radz every now and then,...

Neil came to radz and both the buddies have some sweet talks after a long time,...

Neil: Chasni,..Do you like this gift na???

Radz: Yes neil,..Infact, I was in cloud nine,..How do you know neil,..that my old mobile was gifted by dadaji,...

Neil: That doesn't matter now chasni,...U like this mobile na,..that's enough,...I knew something is bothering you after this accident,..Tell me what it is?

Radz: Nothing Neil,..Just Physical pain due to operation,..Nothing else,...

Saying so,Radz turned other side to avoid facing neil,..As she cant lie to her friend,...

Neil: No chasni,...There are wounds that never show on the body that are deeper and more hurtful than anything that bleeds out,... I wanna know, what's that stopping you to share from me chasni,...U know one thing Chasni,The worst part of holding the memories is not the pain. It's the loneliness of it. Those painful Memories need to be shared with someone,...

Radz after wiping her tears started speaking,...

Radz:Papa told me that tomorrow He is taking me back to Hrishikesh till my wounds are cured,..I don't wanna go to hrishikesh now leaving you all,...

Neil: Oh!! This is your Problem,...Tomorrow U will go with them from here till Airport,...

Radz: After that,...

Neil:My chasni will b back to home with her friends after sending off ,...

Radz: But neil,...

Neil: Ok stop this now,...Leave all your worries for a while and My chasni should always smile like this,...

Saying so,Neil pinched Radz cheeks with a big smile on his face,...Arjun who saw this from Distance literally burnt in jealousy,...A flash of Dark Heat raced through him and he knew himself well enough to identify it as a dose of pure jealousy.

Precap: Sam asking Neil,..Whether she is his Best friend or Chasni is???