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Hiii friends,...This episode will be an emotional one,... I hope you all will enjoy this emotional ride,... As usual Excuse my grammatical errors here and there,...

Episode 10 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

In Radz room,

Radz:Dadaji,I dunno why u are asking these questions suddenly,...But,Its my pleasure to answer all your queries,...I never want to hide anything from you dadaji,...you are my soul dadaji,...I can do anything for you dadaji,...U know this very well right,...Then why such questions dadaji???,...There's nothing like that to hide sth about Arjun Sir from You dadaji,...I didn't get suitable time to share dadaji,...And Arjun sir is my superior as well as boss,..Sam loves Arjun sir,...He is good at heart and sometimes act as rude, Impolite person,...He saves my life twice without considering anything,.. That's it,..What else you wanna know about arjun sir from me?Dadaji,...

Dadaji noticed Radz facial expression during her talk about Arjun,..Then he began

Dadaji:Twice???,..U said only once na?,...I mean Arjun saved you from this accident alone na,...I don't think you mentioned me earlier about the other,...M I right, choti ???

Radz:Haan,Dadaji,...I slipped in swimming Pool in Kandla Hotel before accident occurred,..

Dadaji: Oh my god!!,...U don't know to swim na,...Hmmm,Now,I understood,...So,Arjun saved you from the pool,...

Radz:hmmm! Dadaji,...

Dadaji:Ok!,...Why arjun saved u all the time?,...Where were your other friends???

Radz: Dadaji,..The answer for this question is bigger,...But I will try to answer all your questions truly upto my knowledge,...I already said na, Sam loves Arjun sir,...But I saw Arjun sir with Bonnie,who also working in our office,...She only trapped me in that Maybeline newyork -Chirag case dadaji,..U remember na that u said ,We have to find the proof to prove our self sometimes,...So,While collecting proof with Teji to prove my innocence, I found Arjun sir with Bonnie and I understood Arjun sir never loves Sam and he is cheating sam for some other reason,..I dunno what it is,...

Dadaji:So,U said everything about Arjun to sam na,..

Radz: Exactly dadaji,...Sam trusted me as I am her Bestie na so, she broke up with Arjun sir,...Arjun sir didn't stop there dadaji,He hurt sam badly,...Sam and neil went to Lonovla after this incident,...Arjun sir again planned to hurt sam dadaji,...So,I decided to stop arjun sir along with Teji, Zubin and krithika,...We all went along with arjun sir on an official trip to lonovla,...

Dadaji: Oh! Then you just tried to separate sam and Arjun,..So,You chased him on this official trip,...Why beta? Why are you hurting yourself for Sam? How long you know sam????I dint want to talk about arjun now,..He is a nice guy,...But think that,If suppose arjun tries to harm you to reach sam means,..How will you save sam beta,..not sam,You cant save yourself beta,...Sam is this much important to you that you didn't care about u and even forgot your family before her???

Radz:Dadaji,..What are you saying???Friendship isn't about whom you have known the longest,,...It's about who came and never left your side, Dadaji,... Cox of Sam,I am living my dreams today and she only helped me to identify my dreams dadaji,...When Everyone accused me in that chirag case, Sam stood by my side dadaji,..In fact, her affection only gave me strength to save our office and also my lost reputation dadaji,...When I found Arjun sir cheating sam, How could I be silent dadaji,..I revealed the truth to sam and even then, Sam didn't lose her trust on me dadaji,...She trusted me than her love dadaji,...She again stood my side dadaji,...And U only told me na that whether its friendship or any other relationship, All bonds are built on trust and without it there's nothing,...I cant remain silent knowing my friend gonna get hurt by someone before my eyes dadaji,...And the friendship between me and sam is built on unbreakable trust dadaji,...

Dadaji felt proud hearing his choti's statement about her Best friend sam holds his choti's hands softly and then began,

Dadaji:hmmm, Ok choti,..Now everything is clear between arjun and sam na,...Then why you look worried beta??

Radz:Dadaji,..Sam accepted arjun sir only cox of my words,...that again fervours me a lot dadaji,...

Dadaji:what you still doubt arjun beta?

Radz: No dadaji,..I believe arjun sir,...He is really good at heart,...But he didn't love sam Dadaji,...I dunno why he pretends to love sam and what he hiding from this world,..Something in his heart stops him always from being normal dadaji,...I dunno what it is,...

Dadaji noticed his choti's inclination towards arjun more than something for Sam and he burst out laughing,...Radz was puzzled at dadaji's sudden action,...

Radz:Dadaji,Why are you laughing now ???What, I said any joke???Tell me dadaji,..

Radz shakes her dadaji's hand to stop his laugh and she was greatly annoyed by dadaji's act,...Finally dadaji began after controlling his laugh,...

Dadaji:Nothing choti,...You cant understand the reason for my laugh,...chalo, Its already late,...If your papa found you talking with me till mid night,He will shout like a devil,...

Saying so Dadaji made his choti to lie down on the bed and covered her with bed sheets,.. Due to the effect of medicines, Radz too slept silently without any burden in her heart,...

xxx

In Arjun's House,

Arjun,who dressed in Ash colour Night wear was standing near the window lost in Radz thoughts was disturbed by a phone call,...He attends the call and remained silent for few minutes looks like that he was keenly listening to the caller on the other end,...Finally he began,

Arjun:Hmmm,..Nothing like that ...Just Had light headache,...no,...Now I'm alright,...I feel tired,...I hope I will be better after a sound sleep,... Ya,...I knew,...Will talk to you later,...Bye,... Good night,...You too take care,...

After ending the call, Arjun was again lost himself in cherishing his wonderful moments he spent with his radhika today,...Remembering Her creamy skin on her waist increases speed of arjun's heart beats,...He turned towards bed and decided to sleep for a while leaving her thoughts aside,...He came near bed to sleep and arrange pillows on the bed before lying down on the bed,..While taking pillow, His mind was captured again by radz eternal thoughts,...He remembered his encounter with her while placing her on the bed just few hours ago,...(Background music: Kawhishon pe likhi) Arjun felt restless and threw all the pillows from the bed and seated silently on the bed to evade Radz thoughts from him,...

Arjun,who hold his head in pain saw Radz Duppatta on the hanker,...He stood up and took her dupatta from the hanker and He asked himself holding her dupatta in his hands, 'I dunno what to do with your thoughts Radhika Mishra, Should I let you go of them or Should I keep holding on them??,..Answer Me radhika,..You talk more na,...Now I am asking you a straight forward question,...You are silent,...Answer me Radhika Mishra??,...What should I do???,..Why you are disturbing me???Leave me alone radhika,...Saying so within his inner self,..Arjun fired the Dupatta with his lighter had tears filled eyes,...Radz thoughts again makes him cry out his heart louder,...Fire reaches the end of the dupatta, which Arjun holds,..He left the burning cloth from his hand,...Its not the cloth that burns there,...Its really himself ,who was burning in Radz memory,... He screamed out louder,... I am tired of remembering your thoughts Radhika and also I am so tired of dreaming of a life that I will never have,...'He cried literally for his unknown desire to lead a normal life,... A Tear Drop from his eyes fall down on the burnt ash,...

xxx

In Sam's Room,

Sam was working on her laptop,..Someone whose face was not seen clearly due to dim light in the room came near her and called her name twice,...Sam closed her laptop and stood up to find who was standing near her room's doorsteps,...

Sam:Who is standing there???

XXX:What you gonna do knowing that Sammy?

Sam:If you didn't tell, Then I will call my Idiot,..He will turn your face black and blue,...So,Mind it,...Tell me your identity,...

XXX:Oh!!!

He burst out laughing louder literally made sam irritated,..

Sam:I am warning you repeatedly but You are laughing at me,...

XXX:So,your lover name is Idiot,...

Sam: No,I love Arjun,...Idiot is my Best friend's Nick name,...Why are you asking these things now??

XXX:hmmm,Then why u didn't call your love rather your Idiot?

Sam stumbled by his question and began

Sam:I said na, Idiot is my best friend,...I give first preference on everything in my life only to my Idiot,..Then only others,...Its none of your business,...If u didn't tell me,Who you are,..Then you have to suffer a lot,..

XXX: Oh!,..Then why late,..You can easily guess me without seeing me,Sammy..Come near me,Sammendhar singh,..I will show you who I am,...But you must accept that you are loving me only after seeing me,...Agree for that na,..

He smiled sarcastically panicked sam a lot,...Sam,who was trembled with fear went near him slowly to find who is standing in that dark,...Just few seconds left to reach that unknown man,...Sam heard a call from mala,..

Mala:Sam beta,Wake up na,...Its already 7.00AM,...Hurry up soon beta,..You have to go to office na,...

Sam who was awaken before seeing the face of that Unknown person in her dream hold her head tightly,...The screen freezes on Sam's Frightened look,...

Precap:Neil asked sam, 'What you saw in your dream Sammy??,..Tell me yaar,..Then only,I may help you,..'
Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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renu...
so realistic scene s...nice

continue :) plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi renu sweet episode... I like dadaji and radhika s conversation. Radhika still hasn't realized tat it's not just Sam tat always pulls her to her arjun sir. Arjun has started realizing tat radhika has started meaning smth more to him than just a Rasthe ka pathar. That he is getting affected by his junior ... Sam is starting to realize tat thr is some one else more important than arjun to her. Though I guess she and arjun will b in denial mode and sticking to each other w/o any attachment. In Sam case thr is a possibility of infatuation... All in all its a sweet confection. I loved it. Waiting for radhika and arj moments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was a lovely update
arjun is not able to get clear of radhika's thoughts out of his mind
but ya soon he will realize his love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ramyagirish

Hi renu sweet episode... I like dadaji and radhika s conversation. Radhika still hasn't realized tat it's not just Sam tat always pulls her to her arjun sir. Arjun has started realizing tat radhika has started meaning smth more to him than just a Rasthe ka pathar. That he is getting affected by his junior ... Sam is starting to realize tat thr is some one else more important than arjun to her. Though I guess she and arjun will b in denial mode and sticking to each other w/o any attachment. In Sam case thr is a possibility of infatuation... All in all its a sweet confection. I loved it. Waiting for radhika and arj moments.


Thanx dear,...I think the story line goes in the right track dear,...Agree Sam has obsession on arjun cox of her infatuation but In this 2 months Missing pieces,I dont wanna make Sam obsessed over arjun but to have some cute moments with Neil that will pay way for her Love realization after Ardhika Marriage,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

it was a lovely update
arjun is not able to get clear of radhika's thoughts out of his mind
but ya soon he will realize his love


Thank you dear,...

Of course,The transformation of arjun will take place slowly dear,...

As u said he will realize that sooner,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey Renu...


this update was really nice yaar...

it covered many fillings which r needed...

i liked radhika -dadaji conversation, how radhika told wat happend tiil date ...

i liked d way u put this particular thing...ok through radhika, she vth d gang gone to d trip to stop arjun from meeting sam...but d others dnt even know r8...she decided 1st to chase him...gang came along...dat was nice...she didnt tell dat to dadai...radhika knows to hide few things instead of lying...smart girl...

i liked d reason for dadaji's laugh after d conversation...

i really liked sam's dream...d voice over asked a very apt question...

arjun was good...

i know its not radhika's dupata in d show...

can u make a flash back dat wat arjun used z radhika's dupatta...like he took it from her vthought others knowing...

n if possible, he kept that 1st holi shirt still in his wardrobe safe...for some unknown reason..lol.i am gng back to my thoughts...

nice work...continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lavv

hey Renu...


this update was really nice yaar...

it covered many fillings which r needed...

i liked radhika -dadaji conversation, how radhika told wat happend tiil date ...

i liked d way u put this particular thing...ok through radhika, she vth d gang gone to d trip to stop arjun from meeting sam...but d others dnt even know r8...she decided 1st to chase him...gang came along...dat was nice...she didnt tell dat to dadai...radhika knows to hide few things instead of lying...smart girl...

i liked d reason for dadaji's laugh after d conversation...

i really liked sam's dream...d voice over asked a very apt question...

arjun was good...

i know its not radhika's dupata in d show...

can u make a flash back dat wat arjun used z radhika's dupatta...like he took it from her vthought others knowing...

n if possible, he kept that 1st holi shirt still in his wardrobe safe...for some unknown reason..lol.i am gng back to my thoughts...

nice work...continue...


Of course lovv,...I will plan sth on the scenes you mentioned dear,...Will write sth on both scenes yaar,...

& M very happy that you liked it and In fact what i thought before writing this update,you caught that point yaar,...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiii friends,...This episode will also be slightly an emotional one,... I hope you all will enjoy this slow ride,Bear me guys,... As usual Excuse my grammatical errors here and there,...

Episode 11 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

In Sam's Room,

Sam took deep breath after waking up and dialled Neil's number in her mobile hurriedly,...But,Neil didn't attend her call,...Sam felt angry on Neil for his unresponsive action,...

Sam:Idiot!,..pick the call,...Or else I will kill you,..

Saying so sam tried Neil 5 to 10 times,..But,Neil didn't attend her call,...Finally she decided to send a SMS to her idiot for his act of ignoring her,...she send a Text SMS saying,

SAM - You are so busy,..that you didn't have enough time to attend my call too na,...I wont call you until you call me back idiot,...

After texting, sam went to fresh up,..

In Neil's home,

Neil was seeing the pictures of Sam and him in his laptop during their happy days had tears in his eyes,...Prema calling Neil repeatedly holding his mobile in her hand came to his room,..

Prema:Neil,..Neil,...

Neil,who wiped his face turned towards his mom dressed with a smile on his face,..But Prema knew her son very well than anyone,..she understood Neil was in pain,...So,she began with sam to divert him from his pain,...

Prema:Neil,..Sam called you more than 10 times,..Why you didn't pick her call???,...She was happy now seeing you near her na,...

Neil:you dunno mummy,..Yes she was happy but I cant pretend to be happy before her always ma,..Whenever she talks about arjun,I could see her love for him ma,...that hurts me a lot ma,...I cant see love in sam's eyes for someone ma,...

Saying so Neil cried his heart out brought tears from Prema's eyes as well,...(Back ground music: Hasoon be garte,..)She cuddled her son affectionately to reassure him,...

Prema:No neil,..You shouldn't ignore sam like this,...She is your friend,...You must forgot your love for her and try to give your love to some one who born for you in this world,...Please,think about you and me for a second,..I cant see you like this Neil,...

Neil:sorry ma for hurting you too,...Hmmm,I wont ignore sam ma,...I knew,She is my best friend and my soul ma,..I cant imagine any girl in this world in sam's place ma,...

Prema:Then attend her call Neil,..I want you to be always cool man,...

Neil hugged his mom and began,

Neil:Ok,...Mummy,...I will call sam right now,...Now Kush na,...tell me,what's my breakfast???,...

Prema:Neil,...Keele ka Bhartha,...Aloo gajar sabzi,...Khatta meetha mixture,..Sooji Golgopas,...and,...

Neil:Enough,...Enough,... Mummy,If I eat these,I will become stout like you sooner,...So,U eat everything,...Just a sandwich is enough for me,...Its already late,..I have to get ready,.. Bye,...

Saying so Neil took his mobile from his mom's hand and went to restroom,...

Prema: But Neil,...I prepared these for you,..Neil,...Neil,..

Prema smiled at neil seeing him back to normal and went to Kitchen to make his fav sandwich for his breakfast,...

xxx

In Arjun's home,...

Arjun,who wake up in the morning saw the burnt ashes of Radz Dupatta in his room,...He called his Kaka to clean the ashes,...While calling him,He saw a piece of burnt Orange Dupatta cloth in the ash,..He bent down slowly and took that piece of radz burnt dupatta which took him back to some old memories of that dupatta,...

xxx Flash Back xxx

Arjun coming out of the Radz ward in Kandla hospital accidently bumped into Teji,.Teji puts everything in his hands down out of fear ...

Asusual,Teji stammered before arjun ,...

Arjun: Hey Teji,...You fool,...

Saying so, Arjun took his scattered parts of his new mobile which fell down cox of Teji's sudden encounter,,..

Teji: Soorry Sirrr,...I,...I,.. didn't see you sir,..I will help you sir,...

Arjun: no need,..Just Keep quiet,...Shhh!

Teji distanced himself from offering help to arjun,..Meanwhile, Arjun saw Scattered things from Teji's carry bag which contains Radz bag and her orange Dupatta (It made him rem the cloth shop encounter with radz in kandla),... Arjun hold Teji's collar closer and questioned him angrily,...

Arjun:What's this???,..how did you get this???,...Tell me now,...

Teji gathered his courage and began,

Teji:Sirrr,...I went to cloth shop again to call Radhika and inquired about her from shop owner sir,...The cloth shop owner only gave me this carry bag and asked me to give it to Radhika sir,..That's all sir,..I tried to hand over her things but heard she met with an accident from the nearby people there sir,..So,I informed sam and,...

Arjun: Ok,..Stop,..Give it to me,..I will hand over these things to her,...

Teji: No sir,..Dont worry,..I will give it to radhika,..I informed her already sir,..

Arjun:I told na,..I will give it to her,...

Teji: No sir,...I already informed her sir,..U leave tension sir,...I will give it to her,...

Before Arjun saying something,Sam called him from the corridor,...

Teji: Sir,..Sam is calling you,...It's ok sir,..I will give it to her sir,..

Saying so Teji puts all the things inside the carry bag and Arjun was forced to go away by repeated sam's yelling,..He turned back thrice before reaching sam,...When Teji took Radz orange dupatta,Arjun felt that it was his belonging,..He himself dunno but He wanna get back that dupatta for himself before it reaches Radz from Teji,...

Sam: Arjun,What you are looking for???

Arjun faced sam and began

Arjun:Nothing Sam,...You tell me,..what's the matter?

Sam: Arjun,Paa asked us to come by tomorrow after chasni's discharge,...I will stay along with chasni and I booked a single room for you in Kandla hotel yaar,...

Arjun: Thank you sam,...If you don't mind,I have an important work now,..Will you excuse me,..Please,..

Saying so,Arjun walked towards Radz room in an hurry leaving sam confused,...But all his efforts went into vain as Teji kept that carry bag in the side tray near Radz Bed,...But one thing which pleased him was seeing sleeping Radz alone in the room,...Arjun entered the ward silently without disturbing Radz sleep,...He took his belonging from the carry bag near Radz,..But the Irony is Radz wake up due to noise caused by the carry bag,...She opened her eyes slowly and began,

Radz: Arjun Sirr,...You,...

Arjun was shocked hearing Radz murmur kept the Dupatta on the tray and turned towards Radz,...

Arjun: You are awake,..I thought, You was sleeping like Kumbkarna,...

Hearing this funny comment from Arjun,Radz was bit angry and began,

Radz: Me sir,...

Arjun,who smirked seeing radz grumpy face began,

Arjun: Haan You only Radhika Mishra,..You know, how you sleep? And what you do in sleep??

Radz: Yes of course,I know how I sleep and I never do anything in sleep,..Not me,No Individual in this world would do sth in sleep,..So,You don't create sir,...

Arjun grinned hearing Radz argument annoyed Radz a lot,..

Arjun:Yes No human would do,..But You are not a human Radhika,..So,You do many thing in sleep Miss.Radhika mishra,...

Radz: Sir,..Stop laughing,...I am a human and how do you are telling that I do something in sleep,..Have you seen me doing sth in sleeping,...Never na,..So,Don't assume yourself sir,...

Arjun:Oh!You are human,...I forgot it Radhika,...

Saying so, Arjun laughed a lot brought smile on Radz face too,...Radz forgot herself in staring laughing Arjun,...

Arjun: You asked me,When I saw you in sleeping na,...lemme answer,...

Arjun again burst out laughing,...and began,

Arjun: In lonovla hotel,...U wanna hear what you did,Radhika mishra???

Radz began after watching smiling arjun again,

Radz: Sir,I said already na,...You look normal while laughing,...

Both had an Intense Eyelock (Background Music: Kawhishon Pe likhi)

Their Intense Eyelock were Interrupted by Teji's entry,...

Teji:Chasni,..I kept your belongings in that carry bag yaar,..

Teji after seeing arjun near Radz excused himself,

Teji: Sir,...I gave sir,...I think someone is calling me,...Haan,..Coming,...

Saying so,Teji went out,...

Arjun:Ok, You sleep Radhika,...I will b back after few minutes,...

Arjun helped Radz to lie down and she closed her eyes to sleep,..Arjun took his Belonging from the Tray without Radz knowledge from there,...

xxxFlashback xxx

Arjun's mobile started ringing brought Arjun,who had contented smile on his face while recollecting happiest moments he spent with Radz, back to his sense,...His smile vanishes when he saw Incoming call from Sam,...He put the cloth piece down and stepped on the Burnt ash and the cloth piece which he considered as his belonging,...

Precap:Sam informing Neil,'Idiot,I gonna stay with you till chasni's return from Hrishikesh yaar'

Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago
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ahhh...renu
too good...

dupatta scene of arjun and sleeping habit...

precap is quite interesting 😊

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