Manmarziyan FF Missing pieces- Last Epi 25-Pg.38 updated on 24/08/2016 - Page 15

Yay...first to comment...

Loved it...lol rads dupatta got stuck and she followin him to remove it...she could have asked him directly to remove the end of dupatta that was stuck na...might have felt shy...epi remindeded me of post arjun punching bag scene...sam prerna convo was very sweet...

Comment on rest chap updated

Hi renu thanks for d pm. By d way it was a beautiful, sweet, cute fantastic chapter. U managed to retain d essence of radhika and arjun as shown in d serial. Tat is really grt. I loved their bike ride and d unofficial date of sorts.😉. Well I thank u so much for really allowing radhikas feelings to grow along side Arjun. I enjoyed both Sam's possessiveness towards Neil. Both d gals need ample time to realize their feelings without external forces telling them. As in d original series only guys had time enough to knw tat they were in love. For a moment I almost wished they had just touched their lips thou I don't knw Wat impact it will have on d story. I can't wait for ur nxt update. And oodles and oodles of ardhika. U r really consistent in ur writing and u update real soon. Am glad u started on this. Loved all ur updates so far. And yet I can't have enough of it. I really miss mmz and thanks for keeping it alive as I could just imagine these scenes taking place. Once again thank u for starting this missing pieces.

Hey Renu...

My cute babies..they are so childish.. 😆 .. I miss them.. Thanks fr the update

good one, I liked the jealousy creeping in Sam

Originally posted by: -rosel-

Yay...first to comment...

Loved it...lol rads dupatta got stuck and she followin him to remove it...she could have asked him directly to remove the end of dupatta that was stuck na...might have felt shy...epi remindeded me of post arjun punching bag scene...sam prerna convo was very sweet...

Comment on rest chap updated

Originally posted by: Ramyagirish

Hi renu thanks for d pm. By d way it was a beautiful, sweet, cute fantastic chapter. U managed to retain d essence of radhika and arjun as shown in d serial. Tat is really grt. I loved their bike ride and d unofficial date of sorts.😉. Well I thank u so much for really allowing radhikas feelings to grow along side Arjun. I enjoyed both Sam's possessiveness towards Neil. Both d gals need ample time to realize their feelings without external forces telling them. As in d original series only guys had time enough to knw tat they were in love. For a moment I almost wished they had just touched their lips thou I don't knw Wat impact it will have on d story. I can't wait for ur nxt update. And oodles and oodles of ardhika. U r really consistent in ur writing and u update real soon. Am glad u started on this. Loved all ur updates so far. And yet I can't have enough of it. I really miss mmz and thanks for keeping it alive as I could just imagine these scenes taking place. Once again thank u for starting this missing pieces.

Originally posted by: lavv

Hey Renu...

nice update...

so arjun ate d food radhika tasted...

n radhika directly told him she z gng to eat wat he left from his plate...

d thing i liked z giving value to food...bcz in my hostel at start i used to pay 50 rs fine wen i wasted food...but after dat never ever done it knowingly...

//but u cant eat from others plate bcz of dat...but still i am ok here bcz its arjun n radhika...lol...//

n my fav z neil wantedly avoiding sam...n making her jealous...n making her realise his importance...dadaji's plan r8?

//neil's mom z prerna r8!!

n my fav beach z coming up...i am not expecting ardhika there...from d precap it shows arjun z gng to answer dat he z with radhika in d restaurent or struck somewer...n here neil didnt even call her for d beach...sam total mad at all of them...lol...

//radhika didnt know swimming r8...u know this has on my mind...arjun being vth radhika knowing she didnt know swimming while d gang was enjoying type...//

i am liking d bond btwn d two families...i am waiting to see d reaction of sam wen arjun says he z vth radhika ...lol...

Originally posted by: mmzmahi

My cute babies..they are so childish.. 😆 .. I miss them.. Thanks fr the update

Originally posted by: tina59

good one, I liked the jealousy creeping in Sam