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Iansomer1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

lina what baat does kunj wanna say?

u should write next one so i dont change ur plan.

going good. i was thinking once we finish it i will compile it all and post it as a OS by everyone who contributed to it.

combined it will get funnier.

continue i am in mood to finish it today hopefully.

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Iansomer1
lina what baat does kunj wanna say?

u should write next one so i dont change ur plan.
going good. i was thinking once we finish it i will compile it all and post it as a OS by everyone who contributed to it.
combined it will get funnier.
continue i am in mood to finish it today hopefully.

Ok.give me some time then..

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Ok.give me some time then..

sure take ur time then we will continue it.😃

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Kunj is just going to say something, suddenly he stopped and removed his seat belt and went off the car.. Outside he dialed some one.

Twinkle: Kunj, what happened?

She started to remove her seat belt. Suddenly Kunj opened the door where twinkle is seated.and stretch his hand

Kunj: nikal

Twinkle: Kunj

Kunj: Dekh tune bola na jo main kahunga karegi...to Haath de.

Twinkle😲: (thinking)Babaji ishe sur pe chot to nai ayi..or fever. Tu theek to hai na Kunj.she touch his forehead.

Kunj: Oye, what r u doing? He just pulled her towards him. Nikal Syappa queen, raat bhar Yahi rehna hai?

After sometimes twinkle is seated blindfolded in the car.

Twinkle: Kunj to sach mein mujhe cemetry le ja raha hai na. Par yad rakh tujhe chod ke main kahi nai Jane vali.Infact chudale banke tere sath rahungi.

Kunj: ( thinking -don't worry twinkle even I m not going to left u alone... Kabhi nai.) Areee wah phoolan devi, I thought tujhe bas Goli he chalani ati hai, tu to baatein bhi Achi kar leti hai.Acha, ek baat Bta tu meri baat man kaise gyi

Twinkle: jyada ud mat. I trust u...par jyada bhav mat kha..ok.

Kunj is feeling very happy n dancing inside.In between Kunj stopped the car in front of a mansion.

Twinkle: why did u stopped the car.

Kunj: O god, tu kal se ek questioners sath rakhio. Then give it to me after every hour I will solve it for u. Teri Che Che se to chutkara milega.

He removed the blindfold..and as she open her eyes she screamed in happiness.

Twinkle: tu mujhe yaha,thank u Kunj. Thank u so much.and she hugged him tightly. As Kunj is going to hug her back suddenly she back off and open the door n run..

Kunj: 😕.. Syappa queen.

Please continue Ian..ma beti milap.. I m not good for senti scenes.

Hope this update is ok..these small parts are my first ever attempt in a forum..never penned down any fiction..so hope u like it. If not...then plz edit it as per ur wish.. I m ok with it. And all juta chapals r welcome...but try to throw it in a pair😆😆..

Edited by Aalina. - 10 years ago

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Awesome lina. No tomatoes or chapals this is awesome

Will post mine soon.

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Iansomer1
Awesome lina. No tomatoes or chapals this is awesome
Will post mine soon.

Thank u so much..I have PM u the compiled one..

Edited by Aalina. - 10 years ago

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Twinkle: Maa maa Maa I am home.where are you.

Twinkle ran inside with a spring in her step.

Leela: calm Down twinkle. I am here only.

Twinkle ran to hug her and this time leela didn't shun her. She hugged her back tightly trying to compensate for the weeks she had to stay angry at twinkle.

Twinkle: did you forgive me Maa?

Leela: I forgave u a long time ago puttar but I had to stay away from you for your own happiness so you could understand life better.

Twinkle:I love you maa. I promise won't ever make such mistakes again.

Kunj smiles seeing them reunited.

Decides to lighten atmosphere.

Kunj: oye miss amritsar finished with your sorry speech? I am hungry for some rajma chawal made by my perfect maa.

Twinkle: she is my maa first so she will make my favorite saag roti first. Haina maa?

Twinkle pouted for extra effect.

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Seeing her pouting he poked her face.

Kunj: Drama queen. Ma.. abhi to ye pure ghar ka khana saaf karke ayi hai😉.and now here she will started again.

Twinkle😡: kunj, tu kuch bhi mat bol ha. Ok Ma u cook rajma chawal. Mujhe vo bhi pasand hai.

Leela: ok ok, main na dono banati hun. Mere duniya ke sabse pyare bacho ke liye. Twinkle tu Kunj ko Apne room mein le ja. Mera bacha.

Kunj:Twinkle u go I have to make a call. Just coming.

Saying this he go outside. Twinkle is little worried now she thought if kunj is hidding something from her. Don't know abt the problem she just prayed to babaji to help Kunj.

After some time in Twinkle's room.

Kunj(said lovingly): Twinkle u r happy na.

Twinkle😛:kunj, tu koi bdi problem mein hai na.why r u behaving so weirdly?Bta mujhe. May be I will help u on that.

Kunj: hey Vaye guru! Kya karu is botti ka. Ek sidha sa question n itna complicated answer.

In between Leela call them..Kunj twinkle come beta. Food is ready.

When they both came down the hall is completely dark. Suddenly Twinkle noticed Kunj is not there.

Twinkle: Kunj ma😒..kaha ho ap sb. Why it is so dark here?

Suddenly her foot touched something she quickly bend down n pick up that..

Twinkle: Balloon..heart shaped balloon. Yaha!!

And then the hall is lightened and kunj is standing in front of Twinkle.

Ian now u continue

Edited by Aalina. - 10 years ago