AsYa-AyRa-SidNi-MaNan FF: Incredible Love- Part 3- Pg 10 on 7th Jan - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
Love the banner
Love all the couples
Especially Asya
So boys r vampires
Girls something too
Maybe witches
Continue soon
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Nice banner
Interesting promo
Waiting for story to start
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read prolog & promo 2gethr.
Unique & intrstng.
Boys r th vampires bt who r d grls?
Thnks 4 pm.cnt soon
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you write it so well dear
I loved it
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waiting ...Pls update soon
I will post this line until you will update chapter 1 😆

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always waiting 😆

maybe the girls are witches 😊
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beautiful banner... ❤️ ❤️ 👏
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Part 1

A music video was playing on TV where 4 good lucking were singing while d video goes on(D video was of Band Of Boys type of video where all d members sang). 4 good looking girls were watching the song on TV while eating popcorns on the couch.

"These guys remind me of Band Of Boys in 2000s," said Girl 1.

"No Nandu, they r better than Band Of Boys," said Girl 2.

"U said right, Zoe. They r better than Band Of Boys," said Girl 3.

"Rosh, we sud go n watch their concert 2mrw," said Girl 4 to Girl 3.

"Sure Humi, we will surely watch Thunderstorm concert 2mrw evening," said Girl 3.

D girls r fashion designers Zoya Farooqui, Humeira Siddiqui, Roshni Patel n Nandini Murthy. They run their brand Kiwi. They r BBA graduates who started their business in their 2nd year of BBA. Soon, they will study MBA in Kohinoor College.

Scene shifts to d same 4 boys who r seen in d music video. They were seeing d cover page of Femina Magazine which had photos of all 4 girls 4m Kiwi fashion brand.

"These girls r so popular na," said Boy 1.

"Yaa Asad, they are," said Boy 2.

"Yaa Manik, they r popular n beautiful also," said Boy 3 to Boy 2.

"Ayaan, don't be a flirt to them," said Boy 4 to Boy 3.

"Sid, I am just complimenting not flirting," said Boy 3 to Boy 4.

D boys r Asad Ahmed Khan, Ayaan Ahmed Khan, Siddharth Khurana n Manik Malhotra. They r BBA graduates. They r members of d band Thunderstorm which they formed after their graduation dat is a year ago. Soon, they will study MBA in Kohinoor College.

D girls n boys will join d same college unknown to them. D boys wish to run hotel business after doing MBA along wid their singing career. D girls n boys had very few friends who loved them not their status. They wished to make some true friends in college.

In d evening, d girls attended d concert of Thunderstorm. On entering d audience area, they covered their face wid scarves to avoid being seen by fans n to avoid any kind of distraction to Thunderstorm in case d media focuses on them for their benefits.

Thunderstorm started their performance wid Sadda Haq song. They sang more songs like Meri Laundry Ka Bill, Vele, Banjaare Ko Ghar. All d crowd loved their performance.

After d concert, Thunderstorm n Kiwi came to d parking. Kiwi removed their scarves revealing their faces. Thunderstorm saw them removing their scarves n got to know who they are. They saw them getn in their car n driving away.

"Kiwis were here to watch our concert," said Asad wid a smile.

"They covered their faces to avoid media seeing them," said Manik.

"Luks like they too r our fans like we r theirs," said Ayaan.

"May be, they are," said Sid.

Next morning, it was d 1st day of college. Kiwis n Thunderstorms r cumn 4m d opposite sides in d corridor. As they came closer, Asad bumps into Zoya n her bag falls down wid her things cumn out of her bag. Zoya as well as Asad sat down to pick up d things.

"I am sorry," apologized Asad.

"Its okay," said Zoya.

They kept d things back n got up.

"R u all also new students?" asked Roshni.

"Yes, we are," replied Ayaan.

"We too r new students," said Nandini.

"Nice to meet all of u," said Sid.

"U r only d ones who talked wid us normally wen entered d college," said Manik.

"Wat do u mean?" asked Roshni.

"I mean dat 4m d time we entered d college everyone just showed over-excitement for us since we r singers. But only 4 of u talked to us normally," replied Manik.

"Same here. Since we r fashion designers, everyone showed over-excitement for us like they showed for u," said Humeira.

"U all came to watch our concert yesterday," said Sid.

"How u know it?" asked Zoya shockingly.

"Cuz we saw u entering ur car after removing ur scarves," replied Sid.

"Since we r talking normally to all of us, we sud introduce each other normally," said Humeira wid a smile.

"Good idea," said Ayaan wid a smile.

They introduced themselves to each other. D boys were getn some strange vibes 4m girls.

"Why cud not we listen to their minds?" asked Manik thru d mind.

D 4 boys r actually vampires. But they were different kinds of vampires who ate, sleep n wore any colours of clothes. They were shocked on not being able to hear girl's minds.

"Don't know," replied Ayaan.

They talked for some more time n realized dat they r in d same class. D girls felt sumthn strange wid d boys. D boys left 4m there after some time.

"Ye ladke muje kuch alag lag rahe the," said Humeira.

"Muje bhi," said Zoya.

"Muje bhi," said Roshni n Nandini 2gthr.

They got strange vibes 4m d boys.

"We sud get to know abt them," said Zoya.

"Yaa," said Roshni.

D girls too left 4m there.

As d Thunderstorm boys were walking, they saw Kiwi girls standing near d class n were shocked to see them there before them.

"How come u all r here so soon dat also before us?" asked Sid confusingly.

D girls were shocked.

"We came by d lift," replied Roshni quickly.

"Ohh," said Sid.

Just then some girls surrounded Thunderstorms n squealed in delight.

"I am big big big fan of ur band," said Girl 1 happily.

"Do u all have any girlfriend?" asked Girl 2 shyly.

"No," replied Asad.

"Dats so nice dat u all r single," said Girl 3 happily.

"But not ready to mingle," said Sid.

"Plz, leave us alone," said Manik calmly.

D girls left them alone.

"It feels so annoying na to be surrounded like dis?" asked Zoya.

"Yes," replied Asad.

Just then, some boys surrounded Kiwi girls.

"So nice to have u girls here," said Boy 1 happily.

"I am big fan of u girls," said Boy 2 happily.

"Guys, plz leave us alone as we get uncomfortable being surrounded like dis n we r also students here like u all," said Zoya calmly.

D boys left them.

"U all too got surrounded now," said Sid.

"Yaa," said Roshni.

"I think only we both groups can understand each other," said Ayaan.

"True," said Humeira.

They talked till d class started. D class was just for 2 hours as it was d 1st day n only Orientation happened in d class. After college, d girls decided to find abt d boys.

Thunderstorms were still in d class as others left. They tampered wid d camera of their class using their telekinesis powers so dat they r not seen while talking.

"Glad dat no one knows abt us till now," said Asad.

Unknown to them, d girls were watching them 4m outside.

"I wish no one comes to know abt us," said Sid.

"Relax guys, no one will know abt us," said Manik.

"Yes, no one will know dat we r va...," said Ayaan.

He was abt to complete his sentence wen they heard sumthn falling outside. It was Roshni who accidently brushed her hand off wid a metal vase making it fall down. D girls ran 4m there so dat boys did not see them. D boys came outside but found no one.

"How did d vase fell down?" asked Manik.

"I think someone was here," replied Asad.

"Glad dat Ayaan was not able to complete his sentence," said Sid.

"Lets go home," said Manik.

They walked 4m there not noticing d girls who were hiding behind a wall.

"Which sentence Sid was talking abt dat Ayaan was not able to complete?" asked Zoya.

"Don't know," replied Nandini.

"Wat if they notice our car in d parking n realize dat we r still in d college since others have left?" asked Humeira shockingly.

"Dat won't happen," assured Roshni.

D boys went to their parking n found only their car n no other vehicles.

"No other vehicles r seen. Who may have seen us?" asked Asad.

"May be someone who comes by walking," replied Ayaan.

"Relax guys, I think some peon may be passing by n accidently pushed dat vase," said Sid.

"Yaa, we sud not think abt it anymore," said Manik.

Scene shifts to d girls who r in their hostel room. D girls had applied for a hostel room for themselves. Their hostel has 2 beds wid 1 bed shared by 2 girls. D boys did not applied for any hostel room. D girls have changed their clothes n r sitting on one of d beds.

"Glad dat they did not saw our cars," said Zoya.

"U sud not have pushed dat vase otherwise we wud come to know abt them," said Humeira.

"Sorry, it was by mistake," apologized Roshni.

"Its okay, we will try again to find abt them," said Humeira.

"Wat they don't want anyone to know abt them?" asked Nandini.

"I am sure they have some secret," replied Zoya.

"And we will find dat secret," said Roshni.

D girls went out for shopping in d evening in a mall. To their surprise, they saw Thunderstorm in d same mall. D boys were having pizza 4m Dominos in d food court. They went wid their sandwich 4m Subway n sat next to their table pretending not to see them.

"Don't think they will talk anything here in public," whispered Humeira.

D boys noticed d Kiwis.

"Hey, u all here," said Sid drawing their attention.

D girls pretended dat they saw them now.

"We did not knew u r all also here," lied Humeira.

"Well, since we all here. Lets sit 2gthr," said Manik wid a smile.

"Yaa," said Nandini wid a smile.

D girls got up n sat wid d boys.

"I find these girls weird," said Asad thru mind.

"Me too find them weird but they r nice," said Sid thru mind.

"We r not able to know wat is going in their mind," said Ayaan thru mind.

"Wat u all r thinking?" asked Zoya.

"Nothing," replied Manik.

They talked abt d college, movies n some other things. After eating, d girls went for their shopping while d boys went for playing bowling in d sports area of d mall.

Precap: #Nandini follows Thunderstorm till d door of d boys locker room wearing a black hoodie jacket. Manik realizes dat someone is watching n comes out. Nandini turns her back to him n starts walking. Manik holds her hand to turn her around but she flicks her hand making him fall on d ground before running 4m there shocking him.

#D girls gets to know dat d boys will have a meeting at d backside of d college after college hours. They decides to watch their meeting by hiding.


A/N: Want this story moved to Fanfiction forum😊.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
res
unres

so sorry for the late
hey
first part is awesome
beautiful
amazing

I ll actually read asya n skip other couples
so sorry
but i like asya only the most
hope u undrstand
Edited by ashlesha2 - 9 years ago

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