SwaSan FF (new)- Hand in Hand

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue
"Lakshya! Tum apne bacche ko aise kaise chhod sakte ho..tumne to bola tha humesha mera saath doge??"
Shouted Swara
Lakshya- "Come on..Miss. Swara Bose.. maine tumse kabhi pyaar nahi kia tha..woh toh tum college ki sabse popular ladki thi aur mujhe sab ignore karte the toh isliye maine yeh sab natak kia tha..Ab agar ek mistake ho gyi usme main kya karu. Uss din main nashe mein tha par tum toh hosh mein thi na..you should have controlled yourself. Ab rahi baat bacche ki jo tumhare pet mein hai so abort it..thats it"
Lakshya said
Swara slapped him hard.
Swara- I HATE YOU MR.LAKSHYA MAHESHWARI..aisa sirf tum jaise gire huye aur badtameez insaan bol sakte hai. I m going Lakshya lekin jab main vapas aaungi tumhari life mein I promise...I will change your life upside down, just wait and watch Mister." Saying this she left from there.

*6 YEARS LATER*
In Mumbai
She sat up straight on the bed after watching this dream...she drank some water. And tears started rolling from her eyes.After watching the dream.She recalls her struggle and her hardwork..She worked so hard that now she is more successful than the man who was her past the biggest devil in her life. She looks at her son who was sleeping peacefully beside her catching her dupatta in his small fist."ABHAY GODODIA" her power,her true love, a friend, supporter and the only one whom she trusts more than herself. She saw the clock and got up from the bed to begin another day in her life.

*In Kolkata*
A man sleeping on his bed hugging his pillow...he was fun loving, sweet, handsome and cool, yet responsible. He was Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari. Suddenly, his alarm rang which disturbed his beautiful sleep..first he switched the alarm off..he got up from the bed nd went to the washroom..he got ready in half n hour nd straight away went down for breakfast.

At the breakfast table
Sanskar- Good morning!! everyone..hi lakshya!! Mom!!Aaj khane me kya hai..
he lifts up the lids of the bowls nd took a glance at the tasty food.
Sanskar- Wow..itna tasty khana kiss khushi me??
Durga Prasad- Tumhare Mumbai jaane ki khushi mein?
Sanskar who was eating suddenly starts coughing after listening this.
Lakshya- wow bhai..Mumbai..aapko jana chaiye.
Sanskar- But papa..main kaise??
DP- Sanskar..humein tum par pura bharosa hai..tumhe bas ek meeting attend karni hai fir tum jitne din wahan par rukna chaho ruk sakte ho.
Annapurna- Han han..jayo na accha lagega. Bohot accha shehar hai..aur tum jaise young log toh wahin par jaate hai.
Lakshya whispered in his ear.."Bhai,dad aise mauke kam hi dete h...chale jao"
Sanskar to his parents- Ok i am ready..kab jana hai??
DP- parso subah
Sanskar- ok
I know i have to complete my another ff (My Love) i will do it till then read this.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting dear.. loved it.. continue soon. . pls pm me when you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1
Sanskar finally reaches Mumbai..he drives to his flat and settled his things there..he then thinks of roaming around in his favorite city. He sat in his car and drove around the city of dreams...after some time he felt hungry as he didnt ate anything from morning. He saw a canteen in front of a school...there were so many kids at the canteen that Sanskar thought of waiting for sometime and let the children take.
When everyone went Sanskar went to the canteen and ordered an ice cream...he took the ice cream and payed the bill..as he turned to leave he saw a kid crying he looked around 6 yrs...Sanskar went to him and sat down on one in front of him.
Sanskar- Aap ro kyu rahe ho
Kid(still crying)- Mamma! Abhi tak nahi aayi
Sanskar- accha ok...hum thodi der aur wait kar lete h agar aapki mamma nhi aayi toh main unko phone kar dunga..theek hai??
Child nodded in a yes..Sanskar wiped his tears and asked "waise aap ka naam kya hai??"
Child- Mamma ne strangers ko naam batane se mana kia hai
Sanskar- friends ko toh batane se mana nahi kia hai na
Child- nahi
Sanskar- toh aaj se hum friends??kya aap mujhse friendship karoge..please??
Child(thinks for sometime then smiles)- okay..friends..he shakes hand with him
Sanskar- ab aapka naam bataiye??
Child- Abhay Gododia
Sanskar- Woww..kitna accha naam hai aapka..kisne rakha hai??
Abhay- meri mamma ne..vaise uncle aapka kya naam hai??
Sanskar- mera naam..Sanskaar Maheshwari
Abhay- Ohhh..uncle aapka bhi bohot accha naam h
Sanskar- thank u...accha abhay aapko bhook lagi hai??
Abhay nods in a yes
Sanskar- Accha ok chlo...he holds his hand and took him towards the canteen. He bought him an ice cream...when he shouted "MAMMAA!!" he ran towards her and hugged her tightly.
Swara- i m soo sorry baccha..office mein bohot kaam tha isliye mamma late ho gyi.
Abhay- its ok mamma
Sanskar could not see Abhay's mother's face as her hair strands were covering the side of her face.
Swara(doubtly)- Yeh ice-cream kisne khareed ke di apko??
Abhay- unn uncle ne..(pointed towards Sanskar)
She looked up and as she saw him her heart broke into million pieces...once again, something related to her dark past came in front of her...Sanskar too was shocked after seeing that girl's face whose life was spoiled because of his brother..Swara was not only his brother's girlfriend but even his best friend even before meeting Lakshya they were very close friends.
After she disappeared from Kolkata..he tried each and every trick to contact her...he called her several times but she refused to talk..but one day she picked his call.
Sanskaar- Sww...sww..swara kahan ho tum yar..kitne dino se try kar rha hun par tum utha nahi rhi ho..Lucky se pucha usne bhi kuch nhi bola, tum dono ka breakup ho gaya hai?? Swara tumhe nahi pata tumne mujhe kitna tension me daal dia tha.
Swara started crying
Sanskar- kya hua..tum ro kyu rhi ho...plz swara ab sach me batao hua kya hai tum dono ke beech??
Swara(crying)- Sanskar, uss din..
*Flashback*
Lakshya and Swara were returning from their friend's party..and he was in very bad state..he was too much drunk. Swara drove to his home and made him lie down on his bed. She turned to go when lucky held her hand and pulled her on top of him.
Swara- Lucky leave me...jaane do
Lakshya(tucking hair behind her ear)- no baby..not so easily...saying this he starts kissing her and after that they did the biggest mistake in their life.
Swara- Plz..Sanskar, ab main apne bacche ke saath ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chahti hun..isliye mujhe aaj ke baad call mat karna
*Flashback ends*

Sanskar walked towards her...and stood in front of her
Sanskar- Swara tum..kaisi ho?? Yeh tumhara beta hai. He said this with a fake smile
Swara nodded in a yes..and slowly her eyes were watering.
Sanskar- Bohot pyara hai..bilkul tum pe gaya hai...naak, kaan, bolne ka tareeka, iski aankhein..sab tumhare jaisa. Behaviour bhi.
Swara looked at Abhay with a smiling face
Abhay- Sanskar uncle, aap mumma ko kaise jante ho??
Sanskar- Beta aapki mumma aur main college mein bohot acche friends the.
Abhay- Accha ohh...toh mamma ab aap Sanskar uncle ko jante ho toh unhe ghar le chale..plzz..plzz.plzz mumma..plz. He pulled her dress to convince her.
Swara- thik hai agar..woh busy na ho toh
Sanskar- Nahi...I m not busy.
Abhay jumped in joy and held Sanskar's hand and pulled him to their car.
Abhay kept talking to him the whole way and Sanskar kept answering all his questions sweetly. Swara was cutely watching them talking to each other. They reached home..
TBC

Plz tell howz it??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very good update dear.. why swasan not fall in love earlier. . continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Amazing start!!! It is an interesting story..
Waiting for the next update...update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Awesome ..
Loved it..

Abhay is so cute...
Swara's Power!!!

Sanskar and swara best friend???
Yet Sanskar did anything for her!!!
Why???

Seems like Sanskar loves kids...
He answered every question of Abhay..
That's so sweet of him...

Loved it..
Continue soon..
Pm me while updating.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so swasan r /were best friends
this cheap laksh
bt after knwing d truth sanskaar didnt did any thing??
waise bhi lakshya didnt deserve swara
abhay n sanky r friends
nice start if possible do pm m
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Nice start
Lucky is so unlucky
Plz continue soon
It's so amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
This is very interesting.
Nice start!

Hope you update soon!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
nice.. concept wise good.. carry on..

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