New Manan SS LIFE-PARTNER by DESTINY Edited for new thread

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"Papa aap kyun meri Shadi Kara na chahte hain please zabardasti mat kijiye na abhi mujhe Shadi Nahi karni" said Nandini sitting on her knees near her father's feet keeping both of her hands on his knees.
Narendra Murthy bend down and kissed her head and said "beta I know you are not ready now but trust me this is the right time and main jo bhi karungi tumhari khushi ke liye hi hoga, aur mera decision ghalat Nahi hai" rubbing his hand on her head
"But aap Jante hain na papa mera Shadi ke is relation per se bharosa uth Gaya hai, when I don't believe in this relation how can I commit myself to somebody" she was pleading to her father with wet eyes looking at him"please try to understand "
"Do u trust your papa ". He lift her head and asked her. She nodded her head in a yes
" main tumhare liye kuch Bura tou Nahi sonchunga na " she nodded again
" than its final I want to hear a yes from you" he got up from the chair and walked to the corner of the study room to the cupboard. He opened it and took out a photo album and walked back to his chair and sat on it
" do u remember this album, this has your mom's memories in it" he opened it and started watching it
" tumhe pata hai after your mom is gone mujhe kisi aur ke saath ki zarurath hi Nahi padi kyun ki what all memories she left with me was more than enough for me to spend my life and most important is you were there" he took a deep breadth and look up and said " ab pata Nahi aur kitne din ya mahine baki hai too main chahte Hun ki mere Jane se pehle tum settle ho jaao"
Nandini who was looking at her mom's pics suddenly looked at her dad and said " papa aap aisi baatien karenge to main aapse baat Nahi karungi"tears started to form again in her eyes " doctors ne kaha hai na ki after this new medication they will get good results so your health will definetly improve " Nerendra wiped her tears and said
" Dekho beta kisi ek ki ghalati ki wajah se tum apni puri life barbad Nahi kar sakti, hear insan ek jaisa Nahi hota. Ab bas beta I can't argue anymore and don't make me use the emotional blackmail card. I want to hear a yes from you"
"Nandini, Nandini arey Nandini Kahan ho"
Someone was calling Nandini from outside. She got up and put the album and arranged the books which her father took out to read on the side table and was about to go outside Nerendra stopped her
"Ek minute Nandini main vikram se baat karunga and I'll tell him ki tumhari Haan hai and I don't want to hear a no" Nandini didn't gave any reply and walk out of the study "
" Bhai did you inform the driver not to tell anyone in the house that we r coming a day before" asked Mukti to his brother who is picking up his suitcase from the luggage aisle. Fab 5 went for a concert to London for a week and they were suppose to return on Sunday but it was Nyonika's birthday so Manik and Mukti changed the plan and came a day ahead.
"Ya ya I told him but before going home I have to go get a gift for mom,concert ki wajah se I couldn't get anything for her so you wanna come with me or you wait in the car I'll get it coz the order is all ready I just have to pick it up" he said lifting up his bag and putting on the shoulder.
" I'll come with you but I'll wait in the car I'm too tired "Mukti said picking her bag too. They were walking out of the airport but seeing Manik and Mukti people who recognize them run fast to them and started crowding on them.
" I knew this will happen you wait here let me check the car is outside or not" Manik stopped Mukti in side the airport and called the driver to come in front of the arrival door and asked him to bring the gaurds also. Manik ready told the driver to bring the guards with him before starting from London. As soon as the gaurds came they went straight outside and sat in the car with the help of them.
"Nandini abhi tum ready Nahi hui ho humane tum se kaha tha ki ready Rehna hum tumhe pick Karne aarahe hai " Navya said in an irritating tone looking at Nandini who was coming out of the study room
" Navya main ready Hun just give me 2 minutes I'll bring my purse " she said giving her a hug
" tum aise chaloge " showing Nandini her dress with her finger up and down
"Kyun is dress mein Kya karabi hai achcha Khasa tou hai" Nandini was wearing a light pink color churidaar with sleeveless kurti and matching dupatta
" acha theek hai abhi hamare pas time nai hai tum jaldi fresh home aao hum wait karte hain"
"Kahan Jane ka program bane Raheem ho" nandini's amms came out from her room listening to Navya's noises
" Amms aap kaise ho sorry hamari awaaz se aap disturb ho Gaye " said Navya going to amms and giving her a hug
"Hum Nandini Korea shopping per le jar age hain kal Hume party mein Jana hai to Hume kuch Lena tha"she said
"Navya Nandini Ko bhi kaho ki kuch Lele apne liye warn a woh to kuch apne liye Nahi kharidegi" amms said sitting on the sofa in the living room
" tabhi to amms hum usse saath liye jarahe hain suk ke liye bhi kuch na kuch lelenge aap bilkul tension na lein " said Navya
Nandini came with her purse putting on a ponytail in her hair. " wait wait wait " Navya came towards Nandini and turn her around and took out the band from her long and silky hair.
"Ab theek hai. It even achche Baal Ko baandh kar rakti ho "said Navya
" but Navya I will get uncomfortable keeping it open " Nandini said putting her hair in proper condition
" koi Nahi chalo Hume dear ho rahi hai bye amms " Navya said to amms and walk to the door "jaldi aana" amms said "Jim amms hum jaldi aajayenge bye " before navya Nandini said and they walk out of the house"
Navya was driving the car and asked Nandini " Haan tou ab batao Kya baat hai tum ro rahi thi na" Nandini was surprised how did Navya figured out
" ab yeh mat soncho ki Hume kaise pata laga Nandini hum tumhe bachpan se Jante hain tumhara face dekh kar hum bata skate hain ke tum Kya sonch rahi ho tou batao jaldi"
" kuch Nahi papa ne aaj phir Shadi ki baat ki hai aur main Shadi Nahi kar a chahti" she told Navya taking a deep breadth and said
" but the thing is I can't say no to him"
"haan tou sahi keh rage hain na uncle tum kab tak apni life yunhi guzarogi 1 yr ho Gaya hai us baat Ko" Navya said" life bahut beautiful hai aise waste mat karo kisi ke peeche aur woh bhi jisheng aana ka koi bharosa hi na ho"
Nandini didn't say anything " lo mall aagaya tum entrance per utar jaao hum park karte aate hai" Navya said " main bhi saath chahti Hun na" Nandini asked " Nahi phir time wast hoga tum jewelers ke store pe wait karo hum abhi aate hain" said Navya " theek hai" Nandini got out of the car and went inside the mall
Manik was standing near the counter waiting for his parcel he was looking outside the store through the glass wall. He saw a girl coming towards the jewelry store and he was awestruck he couldn't blink his eye when he saw her. He thought to himself ' how beautiful, such an innocent face. It feels like pink rose is walking to me'. Nandini was looking for something in her purse.
" sir your parcel is ready" the cashier said"
"Haan. Ok he took out his credit card and make the payment and hold the gift bag and turned around she was not there. Manik felt that something is lost. He thought where did she go then he heard a very sweet and melodious voice as soon as he came out from the store.
" Navya Kahan ho tum I'm at the jewelers" she waited for sometime and turned off the phone and walked inside the store with looking at Manik who was standing on the door. Baang she banged herself with a very solid piece of hard body she drop her purse and couldn't see who she banged with. She bend down and picked her purse and before she says sorry
" Nandini tum theek ho na tumhe lagi tou Nahi" Navya came running towards Nandini and almost scream on her " tumhara dhyaan Kahan Rehna hai tumhe lag jaati tou"
Manik who was standing there watching all the drama going on looked down and ask
" are u ok " Navya turned to him and saw who Nandini collided with " ya she is fine " answered Navya instead of Nandini being over protective. Manik got irritated and gave a very rude look to Navya and thought why is this girl answering for her cant she say herself and looked at Nandini. With out looking at Manik , Nandini said " sorry" in a very soft tone almost like a whisper.
"Tum kyun sorry Bol rahi ho ghalati tumhari thodi na hai" said Navya being angry now
" no Navya it's main fault I didn't look when I was walking" Nandini still adjusting herself
" I just want to make sure that you are ok " Manik answered with a smile didn't want to take away his gaze from Nandini and he want her to look at him but she was so busy in checking if every thing is fine. He got so mesmerized by her innocence that he didn't want to go from there, but Mukti was waiting in the car so he has to go.
" I'm really sorry if I hurt you but I have to go " and took a last look at Nandini, she still didn't see him.
He walked back wards and left from there.
" bhai yeh Kya hai " as soon as she sat in the carmukhti saw a gold bracelet hanging from his shirt's button. Manik saw and got surprised and the scene just happen a few moments ago came in front of his eyes.
" nothing I just collided with somebody I think yeh us I ka hai you wait here I'll return this and come " he told and got out of the car in a hurry and ran to the jewelers and look around the store but they were gone.
' now where can I find them' he thought. "Excuse me " he asked one of the sales person " yahan abhi jo do ladkiyan aayi thi woh Kahan gayi mere pas us ladki ke bracelet choot Gaya hai" The person said pata Nahi sir. ' ab Kahan dhoondu' he thought " but I have their contact number sir if you want I can give you that ". Manik said
"ya that's fine thanks" he got the number and left from there.
"Navya mera bracelet " Nandini saw her hand and got so worried and told Navya
" humne kaha tha tumhe ki kuch tou gira hoga , ab chalo woh jewelers se chal ke puchte hain" said Navya and went to the store and started looking for it near the door and inside the store. The sales person came and ask
"can I help you ma'm are u looking for something" " haan I lost my bracelet kho Gaya hai "
The person said " ma' m just now a man came and ask for u both he said he has a bracelet of yours" " really " asked Nandini " where is he " the person said " he left but I have his contact number let me get it for you " Navya came to her listening to the conversation. " chalo hum bad mein call karte mangwa lenge". They took the number and went from their.

End of part 1
Pre cap -- Manik's parents talk abuot the proposal. Nandini Manik meets. Both of them thinking about the proposal.
Please comment and let me know how is it.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys, I'm new member to this forum and a silent reader. I read all the articles and topics and especially the stories all the OS SS FF and TS and trust me I love all of it. We really have very good and excellent writers in this forum. Inspired by all of these people I'm starting a a story it's gonna be a long one but I need all ur support and boosting. It's gonna be an interesting story

Characters:
Manik malhotra:A 27yr old handsome and dashing business man, he loves his family specially his sister Mukti. He is a very shrude business man and he loves music and he has a band name Fab 5. One very bad habit he has is his anger, he cannot control his anger.

Nandini Murthy : 22 yr old girl an interior designer by qualification but didn't practiced yet. She loves her father very much. She lost her mother when she was young. She lives in a joint family. Due to some incidents she lost belief in love.

Navya: Nandini's first cousin from mothers side. She and Nandini are friends more than sisters. She is always like a bodyguard to Nandini.

Mukti: A fun loving girl and a member of Fab 5. She is 21yrs old and a little spoiled because of her brothers love and affection.

Cabir Dhawan: Manik's best friend, buddy and cool guy and a member of Fab 5. He has his own business and a straight guy in my story. Even though he has a very good sense of humor but he is also a sensible guy. He understands Manik very well

Dhruv Malhotra:Manik's cousin brother and very close to Manik and a member of Fab 5. He loves Aliya but very shy in accepting it in front of her.

Aliya Saxena: A very charming and beautiful girl who emphasizes fashion on all occasions and help almost evry body in getting dressed up. She takes care of Fab 5's costumes in the concerts

Nyonika malhotra and Vikram Malhotra is Manik's and Mukti's parents, very caring and fun loving and they r more like their friends.
I'll disclose other characters as I go on with the story.
It's a story of two individuals who are destined to be together in Avery simple way but Unwantedly.


So many views and no reply
Part1 - pg 1
Part2A- pg 3
Part 2B- pg 5
Part 3A- pg 7
Part 3B- pg 9
Part 4A- pg 12
Part 4B- pg 15
Part 5 - pg 19
Part 6 - pg 23
Part 7A- pg 31
Part 7B - pg 37
Part 7C - pg 43
Part 8 - pg 50
Part 9A - pg 58
Part 9B - pg 66
Part 10 - pg 75
Part 11 - pg 83
Part 12 - pg 92
Part13 - pg 101
Part 14A - pg 109
Part 14B & C pg 117
Part 14 D - pg 128

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Edited by Redcrystal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's a one shot right pls update the part dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plzzz pm me nxt tym u update..its a very good start!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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looks interesting...cont soon pm me also
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Interesting concept dear... do continue soon and please pm me the next time u update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing character sketch...
seems like an interesting story...
loved the way manik was lost in nandu...her innocence and her attractive nature...
i think manan's parents arranged for them to get married...
bit sad that nandu didn't see manik's face...
can't wait to see how manan fall in love...
continue soon...
Edited by sharon.babu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. This seems to be quite fascinating..
Nandini is so cute 😳

Please continue soon
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Very nice.
It's nice to see destiny making the match.
Waiting for the next part.
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Can any one help. How do I post the second part in the same post

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