FF : Unspoken :) Updated 29/10/15 - Page 10

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Hola dear!

Liked what story behind your updates :) A sweet welcome back home is one of the effective remedies for any problem!

Right ..😃

There were issues in the way the chapter was formatted, not just in style or anything but then you said you wrote from the mobile - I understand :)

Yes.. You are right .. writing from the mobile makes the work look haphazard.. but laptop is repaired just right now (wasn't working previously) so now i will use it effectively..

Just an advice, better to use your laptop or a device which comes out to be more comfortable for you, it reflects in the story otherwise.

Nonetheless, really loved the blossoming love between the leads, darn cute <3

I hope it will blossom more in the future too😃

Ah, isn't there someone who always sniffs on the love before the main leads realise themselves! 😆

Yes true , it happens always 😆😆

By the way, edit your title so as to people can understand you have updated!

Done!

For the second half update, I really wish there was more of Aabha Anurag than Mr. Biryani.

I know .. when i wrote i felt that the biryani was becoming kabab mein haddi.. but i was too lazy to change it.. i will try best next time .. and will try not to be lazy😃

The spices did leave an effect on our leads 😉 Also acted as an interrupter for the kiss 😆

Just a tip, if you want to show cooking romance, you really don't have to write so much about the dish. Honestly speaking :) Focus more on the characters and their simmering chemistry :)

Yes .. i will improve on it if i wrote cooking romance in the future..😃

Btw, biryani made me hungry 😭 😭 😭

same here

Chalo yaar, great update! Looking forward to what you write next!

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Chapter 9

Nice update Dhinu

Abha ka bike bhi chahta hain ki vo Anurag se lift le😆😆😆

Anurag bhi kuch kahega nahi aur Abha bhi😆😆😆

Kashish Kavi ke saath reh rehkar badmash hoti jaarahi hain😆😆😆

Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR

Hey Dinaz!

Just read both of the chapters...awesome!

I loved how everyone cared for Aabha so much <3

Everyone teasing Aabha and Anurag so much.. ;)

ACP threatened to fire Anurag because he was that restless 😆

The biryani romance was really lovely! <3

Really enjoyed the 2 chapters

Waiting for further updates...continue asap! 😊