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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Actually uss show main uski maa main villain hain

oh accha ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
I truly love the fast pace of the story, not something boring and lagging on.
One advise, change the font :)

Apart from tht, doing great job!

Lack of time hence small comment!

tk cr!

luv,

Anokhi Di
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Armagadon

I truly love the fast pace of the story, not something boring and lagging on.

One advise, change the font :)

Apart from tht, doing great job!

Lack of time hence small comment!

tk cr!

luv,

Anokhi Di


thanks di !!
i am glad u are taking out time from your busy schedule to comment on the works ..and that you like it too...
🤗
yeah , i will change the font 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Nicely written .and kavi can never change
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: anjalirawat

Nicely written .and kavi can never change


thanks .. yeah .. he cant change 😆😆
Edited by dinazz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
so guys
part 7 is here ..

All of them were back at their HQ .. Abha helped Lara cleanse and dress her wounds ..
Others were present in the main meeting hall... Anurag who had gone to get information about similar cases from other police stations came in ..
"Sir , aise kidnapping ke cases do se teen police stations mein report hue hai . Kisi pariwar wale ki firouti ki maang nahi aayi."
"Sir uska phone trace nahi ho paa raha hai .. aur jaha last uska phone signal dekha gaya tha waha main aur mayank gaye the lekin koi saboot nahi mila." said Kashish and Mayank nodded.
"Adi tumne dekha uss paper pe kya hai ?"
"Kaunsa paper, sir " asked Mayank ..
"Hame Paresh ke ghar se ek paper mila tha ussi ki baat kar raha hoon."
"Sir , yeh ek code jaisa hai .. in aksharon ka saath mein koi matlab nahi nikalta aur single dekhe toh yeh sirf alphabets hai aur kuch nahi .."
"Ho sakta hai ki yeh Caesar Cipher code ho ." said Abha and Anurag at the same time ..
they looked at each other and then here and there to avoid the teams gazes...
"Dekh , bola na ki inki soch kitni milti hai " Kavi said to Ranveer
"Kavi ! " said ACP in an irritated manner ..
"Arrey nahi sir main keh raha hoon ki inka dimag bahut tej hai , roz badam kha ke aate hoge"
They all knew that he could not improve so they shifted their attention towards Abha - Anurag..
"Haan toh tum log kya keh rahe the ? Caeser Cipher code ... hmm .. woh kya hota hai ??"
They were again going to say together but then Anurag stopped and gave Abha a chance to speak...
"Kya ladka hai , abhi khud ko bolna chahiye kyonki shaadi ke baad toh usse bolne ka mauka hi nahi milega ... tabhi toh biwi hi chapad -chapad (talking continuously) karegi " he murmured into Ranveer's ear...
"Kavi ..mere baap , case pe dhyan de warna tere saath saath ACP sir mujhe bhi bahar nikal denge.." said Ranveer.. All giggled and Abha continued..
"Sir , Caesar Cipher code ko decode karne ke liye , joh letter hota hai usse teen letters aage ka letter sahi jawab hota hai ."
"Sir example agar likha hota hai RQH toh agar uss alphabets ko teen alphabets aage le jaye toh woh ho jayega ONE .."
"Ok .. dekho decode karke kya milta hai.."
They all got to work and after a few minutes they decoded it and got the correct answer which made sense and also disclosed the purpose of the kidnapping.
It read : kids on the move. dockyard .
At one look the the paper would seem to any layman to be just a few alphabets scribbled, but who knew it was a part of such a big plan..

"Iska matlab..." Lara let the words hanging ..
"Haan , iska matlab bachon ka consignment , child trafficing.." said Ranveer.
They were all shocked and aghast..
"Lekin dockyard , iska matlab bacchon ko ships se transport karne wale hai !!" said ACP .
"Lekin kab ?" asked Kavi ..
He asked to the point ..' When' ..They did not know when the kids were going to be transported.. It wasn't mentioned in here ... What if they were already transported ? This was a problem now...

SURPRISE IN THE NEXT POST !! 😳😃

Edited by dinazz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
SURPRISE !!
Part 8

They did not know when the kids were going to be transported .. This was a problem now...
They thought very hard ... They were not getting any clue.. They searched among the letters again but still nothing worked.. They were exhausted when suddenly ACP sir's sharp eyes caught something...
The Caeser Cipher code letters were typed and italicized and a few of them , precisely 3 were non italicized.. That caught his attention ... And that decoded alphabets it resulted in were ' AST ' .
"Yeh dekho " He called every one and showed them the difference..
"Sir lekin yeh toh jumbled hai , iska kuch toh matlab niklega , kyonki AST ka toh mostly koi matlab nahi hoga..." said Abha.
"Ab iss mein se hi koi jawab mil sakta hai " said ACP .
They all tyied to unjumble it and came to one conclusion - 'SAT'
"Sir SAT matlab baithna , iska toh koi matlab nahi hota yaha .." said Mayank
"SAT toh college exam ka naam hai , lekin yeh bhi yaha apply nahi hota." said Anurag
"Sir , shayad SAT ka matlab Saturday ho ??" said Kashish ... and all eyes went on her ..
"Kya hua , mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho? " She said ...
"Kal saturday hai " said Abha
"Aur ho sakta hai ki kal bacche ko docks se bheja jayega.." said ACP..
"Lekin sir koi timing toh nahi likha hai .." said Adi
"Hum timings ke piche nahi bhaag sakte ab .. Hame kal , balki aaj raat se waha maujud hona hoga taki hum nazar rakh sake." said ACP.
"Ghar jao sab , fresh hoke thik 11: 30 ko yahi milte hai , phir teams bana ke jayege."
"Yes sir " they said in unison..


Note -I have Updated my first post with characters and the index..
have a look if needed..


Edited by dinazz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
First to comment
Awsome updates
Abha and Anurag think so similar
Kavi 😆😆😆
OMG he can never change he is so funny
Especially when Anurag let Abha talk
Oh no
Child trafficking
All of them confused but finally ACP sir found out a clue and kashish found out it was Saturday 😊
Awsome Awsome Awsome
Update soon
Thanks for pm


Edited by Laadifan12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Laadifan12

First to comment
Awsome updates
Abha and Anurag think so similar
Kavi 😆😆😆
OMG he can never change he is so funny
Especially when Anurag let Abha talk
Oh no
Child trafficking
All of them confused but finally ACP sir found out a clue and kashish found out it was Saturday 😊
Awsome Awsome Awsome
Update soon
Thanks for pm



thank you dear !!
haha 😆 i wish kavi does not change , he is good as he is ...😆😆
child trafficking is a serious issue , though it does not come to the fore in newspapers or other mediums very easyly (that's what i have know ) thus i decided to take up this issue though not in great detail , just a glimpse of it ... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
res😳
did res so as to u can understand tht i m reading ur work 😊

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