FF : Unspoken :) Updated 29/10/15

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AABHA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Welcome and thank you for pm. 😊

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Sana

@SaNa_sTaR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Prologue and part 1:

Wow
Awesome start
You are such an amazing writer :)
I could actually imagine all of the scenes!
Aabha saving the baby and risking her own life
Who was the mystery man?

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Part 2:

Superb part!
Aabha in coma? :(
Loved how everyone showed their emotions for her
Really nicely written :)

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Part 3:

Lovely part :)
Anurag entry was really nice!
The case was interesting :)
Loved Aabha-Anurag little moments <3

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Part 4:

Amazing!
Kavi's dialogue at the beginning was so funny
The case is getting more interesting!
Anurag was the one who helped Aabha in chapter 1 😃
Their bike scene was so adorable! <3

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Part 5:

Superb part!
"Mujhe Aabha ke saath bhej dete" 😆
Bechare Anurag ko ACP sir ne Aabha se alag kar diya 😆
Loved the update 😃

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Part 6:

Wonderful update :)
Lara going inside the house and Adi getting worried for her was so sweet <3
Lara coming out as a ghost and scaring Kavi was hilarious! 😆 😆 😆
Bechara Kavi, Lara ke prank ka shikar bann gaya 😆

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Part 7:

Awesome!
Aabha aur Anurag ki soch kitni milti hai 😉
Yeh Kavi kabhi nahin badal sakta 😆 ...and I never want him to change 😊
Oh no! Child trafficking :(
Hope the team find the children safely soon

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Part 8:

Btw thanks for giving part 7 & 8 together :)
The deciphering code thing is so interesting
Kashish realised that SAT meant saturday 😊

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Part 9:

Awesome update!
Aabha and Anurag moments were so cute!
Loved his concern for her :)
Kashish took a pic of them and sent it to Aabha :D
Waiting for further updates
Continue asap!!

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