Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 61

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooow superb awesome lovely story. All part read in one go...
U penned it beautifully.
Keep updating
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved manan cute fight
How nandini talked to maddy and convinced him is awesome
Loved how cabir teased mukthi and navya of course we always love our cabiraa and his teasing and pranks
Eagerly waiting for the consert
What did manik asked mr malhotra and i am really curious to know what illegal thing mr malhotra talking about
Thanks for the pm dear😊

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Thank you for your response. And new buddies Welcome to this SS.
Last update pe main ne Lal lal gaal Manan song upload kar diya in case app log apni memory refresh karna chaho to šŸ˜†.
Yaar last 2 updates se sub itney tension mein ho illegal issue ki. itni tension lene ki koi zarorat nahi.Jab hum haan to kya gham haišŸ˜‰.

Ok here is the new update. and is mein wo illegal kam nahi hoa so filhal is ko enjoy karo.





Next Morning


All had their breakfast and then Navy said: sorry guys os O2 k manager ka phone aya tha and he want me there in his office at 9.(with a bad face) Hamein abhi nikalna ho ga.


Now she 1st asked to Mukti: Mukti kya tum Abeer ko dekh lo gi jab tak hum wapis nahi ate.


Mukti with same horrified expression: What ! Abeer ko .NO Navya you know na abeer ko main nahi sambhal paon gi. So on this point Nandini offered her services.


Nandini: Don't worry Navya tum jao. Hum dekh lein gey.


Navya hugged her and said: Thank you Thank you Thank you . U know na u r my true friend. And gave a kiss in excitement on her cheek.


Cabir suddenly said: Ok to chalo main tumhe drop kar deta hoon.waise bhi kisi k galey pare kafi time ho gya.with a smirk.



Navya tried to stop him so said: Nahi cabir hum khud chale jaein gey na.tum... tumhe jane ki zarorat nahi hai.


Cabir with surprise:Kyo tum nahi chahti k main tumhare sath chalon.


Navya: Arey nahi aisi baat nahi hai.wo to hum aise hi.


Cabir cut her in mid : Aisi baat nahi hai to chalo.


Navya now don't have anyother option so she went with him reluctantly.

O2 Radio station


Cabir said to Navya: tum chalo main ata hoon.


Navya POV


Hey mata rani ajj bacha lena. Wo manager phir se apni ghatiya harkatein na shuru kar de. Aur ajj to cabir bhi hai.kahein is ne dekh liya to.

She bite her finger in nervousness.

Plz plz plz mata rani bacha lena.


Cabir: Notice this thing and thought : hmmm kuch to garbar hai yahan.


Navya leaves from there and as she enters in that office she saw that manager waiting for her.


Navya with nervousness: Mar gaye yeh yahan.


Manager: Arey ao ao Navya Naveli. Main tumhara hi intzar kar raha tha.and with this he holds Navya's hand and drag her in his cabin.


Manager: Aon a betho and he started caressing her hand.


Navya tried to pull her hand but was unsuccessful.Now Navya in anger: Sir yeh app kya kar rahe haan.choriye hamara hath.


Manager: O! main ne bhi yeh hath chor diya to kon pakrey ga is hath ko(with a cheap smile)


Navya with surprise: Sir yeh app kya bol rahe haan.app pagal to nahi ho gaye.Choriye hamein Hum ne kaha choriye hamein.


And with great difficulty she pulled her hand from his grip.and then she in anger saw towards table lamp which was placed on his table.She took that lamp in her hand and started beating that manager with that lamp and said in anger: Hmaein na tumhare sath yeh bht pahle hi kar dena chahaye tha lykin koi baat nahi tab na sahi ab batate haan hum k haamara hath pakarne k result kya hota hai. And she started beating him black and blue.


Bohat himmat hai na larki ko is tarhan cherne ki.ab dekho larki ko cherne k baad kya hota hai.tum ne kya samjha k hum yahan akele haan aur hamein is nokari ki zarorat hai to tum hamare sath kuch bhi karo gey but hum ... hum bhi Navya Naveli haan tumhe tumhari amma na yaad kara di to kahna.


At this time cabir came in that cabin and hold Navya in his grip and said: Bus bus Madhubala.Abhi k liye itna kafi hai.


Navya with great difficulty controlled herself and then looked with surprise towards Cabir.



Cabir: Bus ab kuch kam to mujhe bhi kar lene do.and then he indicated navya to get a side.


And with this Navya moved at one side and cabir came in front and grab that Manager's collar.


That was the time when manager saw Cabir in his cabin and he in surprised murmered: Cabir


Cabir: Haan Cabir and with this he pulled him and gave a tight slap on his face and then said further:Kyo bey Mr Manager ! kya socha k is larki k agey peeche koi nahi to chalo time pass kar liya jae (he again slapped him) Kya laga k tu yeh sub kuch karta rahe ga aur kisi ko kuch pata nahi chale ga(again slap) ab dekh k tere yeh kartoot kis kis ko aur kahan kahan pata lagte haan.(now he gave a punch on manager's face)


After this Cabir played a video of this whole scene.


Navya and manager both were surprised on this.


Cabir: I think pahle to yeh tere ghar hi send karta hoon. (now he again grab him by his collar and asked : Bol Biwi bachey to haan na ?


Manager with shame nodded on this.


Cabir: O good to phir yehi thek hai . pahle yeh video main terey ghar send karta hoon unhe bhi to pata lage k tu office mein kya kam karta hai and then ise apney utube k account pe dal doon ga.Baqi ka kam public dekh le gi


Now cabir put his hand in a friendly manner on Manager's shoulder and said: kaisa laga idea?


Manager with horrified expression: Nahi nahi plz aisa nahi karna.Meri beti ... ose pata chala to... plz nahi


Cabir: Apni beti ki itni fiqar.I am amazed .to baqi sub ka kya haan? BOL (he again slap him)


Manager: plz mujhe maaf kar do mujh se ghalti ho gayi. And he moved towards Navya and said Navya g plz I am sorry mujhe maaf kar dein.


Cabir grab his shirt from backside and said: ose chor mujh se baat kar.haan to tu kya kah raha tha. K tu sorry hai.


OK to chal aik kam kar. Kal tak apney is purey office k samney apna yeh gunah qabool kar aur in sub k samney Navya se mafi mang.



Manager with surprise: main aise kaise?


Cabir : Ok nahi mangni mafi sub k samne to koi baat nahi kal tak yeh video main upload kar doon ga. Aur phir tujhe purey city k samney sorry bolna pare ga. Choice is yours.Soch le


After this Manager nodded in agreement and after that Cabir hold navya's hand and Cavya left from there.


In parking


Navya with lowered head and teary eyes stand there and cabir after seeing her condition drag her in nearby park and made her sit on bench.


Cabir: isi liye tum subha mujhe yahan ane nahi dena chahti thi.


Navya didn't say anything.


Cabir again: Kab se yeh... yeh sub ho raha hai?


Navya with lowered crying voice: Kuch time se


Cabir: aur tum ne kisi ko kuch nahi bataya . apney friends ko bhi nahi.


Navya: Kis ko batati main Cabir... tum logon k accident k baad se to mano sub ki life ruk si gayi thi.Har time tension tension tension.to is tension mein hum kis ko yeh batate. Aur hum... hum agar akele hote na to kab ka yeh job chor chuke hote. But hamare sath abeer bhi hai. To aise time mein yeh job hamare liye bht zarori thi.Ghar to waise hi har month change karna parta tha kyok log aise bin biyahi maa ko aise rahne nahi dete.is sub k chalte agar hum yeh job bhi chor dete to abeer ka dehan kaise rakte.


And now Navya started crying



Cabir now after understanding her situation hugged her and said: Bus Navya ab aur nahi ab har tarhan k halat ka samna hum dono mil k Karen ge.ab tum akeli nahi ho.aur na ab main tumhe kabhi akela hone doon ga.


After this assurance Navya controlled herself and broke that hug and said: Thank you Cabir ! Hamara sath dene k liye.


Cabir with a cute smile and in cabir style : arey ab dosti ki hai to nibhani to pare gin a Madhubala g.


Navya now with a teary smile gave a lil punch on his shoulder.


Cabir again :arey yeh kya Wo kahan gya tumhara Madhubala style yoy.


And then both did that trademark style and once again hugged eachother.


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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
Natashaaaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg
..aly u wrote ff nd I don't knw about dis
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Posted: 9 years ago
res will unress don't know when
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

omg
..aly u wrote ff nd I don't knw about dis



šŸ˜† yaar tum sub ne writing field se bhagna start kar liya to mujhe hi kuch karna parašŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
When r u gonna Unres it????
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

When r u gonna Unres it????



unres ho gya
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow unres kiya waiting
from 30 min when will you unres
still I didn't read the story di

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