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pslove

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Posted: 10 years ago

Woh Tum The!!!

Hi!!! After watching chinki's kidnapping i had imagined a different angle to the story. I hope u all like it.

Kunj enters the store room and sees twinkle sitting on the ground and chinki along with her. Both the girls were crying. He fumes in anger and goes ahead to punch yuvraj only to stoped by twinkle's voice. "Kunj, usne kuch nahi kiya. please humme room tak chod do" and saying this twinkle tries to get up, but the pain in the ankle doesn't allow her to do so. Kunj comes near her and asks "May i?" twinkle looke into his eyes and nods her hea in a yes. "Twinkle tum yeh kya kar rahi ho, yeh wahi ladka hai..." before yuvraj could complete his sentence twinkle interrupts "Yuvi aaj k liye bohot drama ho gaya, so please stop it" "chale kunj" hearing this kunj picks twinkle in his arms and walks out of the store room along with chinki. All the three goto twinkle's room. kunj very gently places twinkle on the bed and leaves the room giving twinkle and chinki alone time to compose themselves.

If u all like it i'll be continuing my imagination. still lot more is left.

part 1 - pg 1

part 2 - pg 1

part 3 - pg 2

part 4 - pg 3

part 5 - pg 4

Edited by pslove - 10 years ago

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Yusra (or you can call me Hope as a nickname)

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Posted: 10 years ago

It's great so far, please continue :)

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KhushiLovesZaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Yes omg please continue wonderful...and please long update ok haha loveeed this

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice intriguing start please continue soon

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pslove

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Posted: 10 years ago

Continued...

Chinki and Twinkle were lying on the bed thinking about the whole kidnapping event. Suddenly twinkle got up and sat and remembered yuvraj's words "iss tarah pechese aake tujhe chloroform sungha k behosh kiya, phir usne tujhe aage letaya" Twinkle thought "yuvi ne exactly wahi bola jo mere saat hua tha, kya wo waha pe tha agar wo waha pe tha toh usne mujhe bachaya kyun nahi, ya phir mere saat jo bhi hua wo usne kiya." and a drop of tear came out from her eyes. chinki saw this "Twinkle kya hua tujhe achanak." to this twinkle answered "Kuch sawalo k jawab chahiye chinki, aur wo humme aj sham ki party main milege." saying this she gets down of the bed and tells chinki to go to her room and get ready for the evening party. Chinki comes out of twinkle's room thinking what is up to and bangs into kunj. "chinki kya hua kya soch rahi ho." asks kunj. "Twinkle k dimag main kuch chal raha hai, mujhe bohot tension ho raha hai, aaj sham ki party main wo kuch karne wali hai." said chinki confused. "Ab kya sypa karne wali hai ye. don't worry chinki main usse baat karta hoon. tum jake tayaar ho jao." chinki left for her room. kunj knocked twinkle's room. twinkle opens the door "tu yaha kya kar raha hai?" questions twinkle. "Tu aaj sham ko kya karne wali hai?" Kunj questions back. Twinkle in anger in her mind "Chinkiii!!! apna muh band nahi rakh sakti. ab isko kya bolu main." she answers to kunj "mujhe pata hai tu mujhpe ab bharosa nahi karta. but i promise main kuch galat nahi karugi. bas mujhe party main beach main mat rokna. meri puri baat khatam hone dena. please Kunj." she pleads to kunj. "thik hai twinkle main beach main nahi boluga par apne aapko kisi problem main mat phasana." kunj says worried. "thank you kunj, ab now if u give me permission main tayar ho jau." twinkle says sarcasticly. "yeh kabhi nahi sudhregi" kunj thought and left the room.

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Yusra (or you can call me Hope as a nickname)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Love it :) please continue

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Twinkle is so intelligent here

TeI mein she did not think of it na?

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floral

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Posted: 10 years ago

superb update

plzzz do continue soon😊

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Anupama

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Posted: 10 years ago

aaah this is what should have happened...
waiting for this to continue -good job

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pslove

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Continued...

"maine chinki aur kunj se keh toh diya hai main kuch karne wali hoon, par kaise karugi samaj nahi aa raha." thinking of this twinkle walks out of her room and goes towards yuvraj's room. Kunj is constantly keeping an eye on twinkle so tha she doen't fall in any trouble. When twinkle is just about to knock yuvraj's door she hears yuvraj and anisha speak. "toh yuvi aaj ka kya plan hai." anisha questions to which yuvi answers "aaj tum aur main meri aur twinkle ki love story ka act sabke saamne karege jismain kunj villian hai" listening to this twinkle thinks and says to herself "yuvi tune mera kaam asan kar diya" syaing this twinkle walks down to the party hall to be followed by Kunj "isske dimag main chal kya raha hai. vahe guru please kuch galat mat hone dena"

in the party hall both twinkle and kunj see each other meanwhile manohar comes and tells "twinkle kunj tum dono yaha biatho" both of them nod their head and sit on their respective seats. The act begains and Yuvraj enters and starts narrating his and twinkle's love story. eventually he reaches the farmhouse scene which is when twinkle gets up and goes near him "toh yuvi sabko yaha baata ki kunjne ussdin mere saat kya kya kiya tha. tu mujhe kunjse bachana chata hai toh sabko baata." leela gets shocked seeing this and says "Twinkle puttar yeh tu kya kar rahi hai" twinkle replies "ma please yuvi ko uski baat complete karne do" listening to this leela sits down and put her head down in shame. twinkle continues "Yuvi tu baata sabko kunj ki asliyat" Yuvraj smiles on his victory and starts speaking "kunj pechese jaake twinlke ko chloroform sunghake behosh karta hai. phir wo usse niche letata hai aur uske kapde phadta hai." listening to all this twinkle says "yuvi tujhe kaise pata yeh saab tu wahape tha he nahi. aur agar tu wahape tha toh tune kunj ko roka kyun nahi. koi jawab nahi haina tere paas main batati hoon tune mujhe bachaya kyun nahi, kyunki yeh saab tune kiya hai mere saat kunjne nahi" as soon as she finished speaking she gave yuvraj a tight slap."woh tu tha yuvi woh tu tha, kunj nahi." saying this twinkle falls on the ground and breaks into tears.

Edited by pslove - 10 years ago

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